Time Heals Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#TimeHeals
time heals seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
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Anthony R
Anthony R
Poem Published
27th Jan 2025 8:06pm
27th Jan 2025 8:06pm
pirating a heart
a brazen delicate lingering effect
energized raison d'etre
the cabals internal
know not old or new
in many years i am to be
the chosen raring few
looking into deep water
the island feels afloat
in search of crystal harbors
upon a slender boat
seeking snaking hungry fish
at last we shout 'land ho!'
buried treasure now or never
don't dare dispute life's flow
and though we now suntan on sand
in frozen hourglass
two ships: in day and in night
do meet and come to pass
energized raison d'etre
the cabals internal
know not old or new
in many years i am to be
the chosen raring few
looking into deep water
the island feels afloat
in search of crystal harbors
upon a slender boat
seeking snaking hungry fish
at last we shout 'land ho!'
buried treasure now or never
don't dare dispute life's flow
and though we now suntan on sand
in frozen hourglass
two ships: in day and in night
do meet and come to pass
#FeelingLost
#love
#TimeHeals
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MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
27th Jan 2025 4:54pm
27th Jan 2025 4:54pm
She Walks In Silence
She walks in silence, like a lapping wave
drowned in chastity and flooded with rave
holding dear and tight her very beauties
denying all her gems and rubies.
Her powers disabled under the spell
the flame in wouldn’t break out of its shell.
Tempted to trace a humming call of fate
allured but reluctant to take the bait.
The strings of her heart lost their pitch and tone
the clutches of mind hurting to the bone.
Untraceable are the paths to no end
unable to soul unself and ascend.
She walks in silence, like a gliding breeze ...
drowned in chastity and flooded with rave
holding dear and tight her very beauties
denying all her gems and rubies.
Her powers disabled under the spell
the flame in wouldn’t break out of its shell.
Tempted to trace a humming call of fate
allured but reluctant to take the bait.
The strings of her heart lost their pitch and tone
the clutches of mind hurting to the bone.
Untraceable are the paths to no end
unable to soul unself and ascend.
She walks in silence, like a gliding breeze ...
#courage
#inspirational
#love
#strength
#TimeHeals
54 reads
8 Comments
Her
Poem Published
27th Jan 2025 1:47am
27th Jan 2025 1:47am
Rewriting My Story (revised)
Mmmm, mmmm
I’m leaving my past and what became of me
I’m chasing the light and what’s calling me
Watch me
Mmmm
I’m turning the page and rewriting my story
Mmmm
A new dawn breaks, my skies are clear
I’m wiping my tears with my fear
Step by step I’m moving on
Old days fade I’m moving on
Mmmm, mmmm
I’m turning the page and rewriting my story
I’m breaking chains, there’s no more ties to pain
Every choice, every stride
No more living in shadows, no more reason to hide
Spreading...
I’m leaving my past and what became of me
I’m chasing the light and what’s calling me
Watch me
Mmmm
I’m turning the page and rewriting my story
Mmmm
A new dawn breaks, my skies are clear
I’m wiping my tears with my fear
Step by step I’m moving on
Old days fade I’m moving on
Mmmm, mmmm
I’m turning the page and rewriting my story
I’m breaking chains, there’s no more ties to pain
Every choice, every stride
No more living in shadows, no more reason to hide
Spreading...
#hope
#lyrics
#TimeHeals
83 reads
4 Comments
Her
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 3:22pm
25th Jan 2025 3:22pm
The Rising Sun
The rising sun
Whispers of a slow and steady defeat
Shadows crept on my lonely street
But as the dawn begins to creep
A promise stirs beneath my feet
Mmmmm
Darkness fading as a new day awakes
(a new day awakes)
Hope finds the fear it breaks
In strength my heart is unchained
No more sorrow, no more pain
No more pain
Mmmmm
No more pain
Mmmmm
My nights were long and filled with doubt
How many echoes screamed, I lost count
Morning light has shown my pain a new route ...
Whispers of a slow and steady defeat
Shadows crept on my lonely street
But as the dawn begins to creep
A promise stirs beneath my feet
Mmmmm
Darkness fading as a new day awakes
(a new day awakes)
Hope finds the fear it breaks
In strength my heart is unchained
No more sorrow, no more pain
No more pain
Mmmmm
No more pain
Mmmmm
My nights were long and filled with doubt
How many echoes screamed, I lost count
Morning light has shown my pain a new route ...
#courage
#hope
#lyrics #TimeHeals
#lyrics #TimeHeals
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8 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 1:49pm
23rd Jan 2025 1:49pm
At The Crossroads Of Life
Waiting For a New Day
Still i am a constant faithful
To the river, forest and mountain
To the route i ever take,
Winding pathways, daily trodden
And where the herds hit the road
When dawn slowly begins to heave
The dew then glistens in the light
Life awakes and stands once again
How can the mundane then understand?
Too long sleeping in the rotten bed
And the bustle-assaulted poor citizen
Feel my words while glued in his den???
Come up now, make your days fine
Make hay while the...
Still i am a constant faithful
To the river, forest and mountain
To the route i ever take,
Winding pathways, daily trodden
And where the herds hit the road
When dawn slowly begins to heave
The dew then glistens in the light
Life awakes and stands once again
How can the mundane then understand?
Too long sleeping in the rotten bed
And the bustle-assaulted poor citizen
Feel my words while glued in his den???
Come up now, make your days fine
Make hay while the...
#courage
#hope
#inspirational
#motivational
#TimeHeals
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Glaxian
Poem Published
20th Jan 2025 11:05pm
20th Jan 2025 11:05pm
Though my love's Gone
Though my lover's gone
When these frames are but dust or ash in the wind,
Our love will keep working right to the end.
Our love was everything,
An unseen force
Holding our universe together.
In our love we were stronger than the tide
Fear had no hold with you by my side
You were always there:
To pick me up
To dust me off
To give me courage
To make me feel alive
Our love was a primal source:
Older than mountains,
More durable than rocks,
More inviting than
The fragile smile of a kiss. ...
When these frames are but dust or ash in the wind,
Our love will keep working right to the end.
Our love was everything,
An unseen force
Holding our universe together.
In our love we were stronger than the tide
Fear had no hold with you by my side
You were always there:
To pick me up
To dust me off
To give me courage
To make me feel alive
Our love was a primal source:
Older than mountains,
More durable than rocks,
More inviting than
The fragile smile of a kiss. ...
#gratitude
#love
#relationships #TimeHeals
#relationships #TimeHeals
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
17th Jan 2025 8:55pm
17th Jan 2025 8:55pm
Don't Quit
When you feel like the whole world is 🌍 against you don't quit, for it's not the end of your life. IT'S just human nature to feel that you just can't win, but yet you do win in the end 😉 by not giving up without a fight 😉 When you feel that you have to just settle down, for something else that has no real intentions of commitment and CONSISTENCY. 🤔 DON'T quit just because they don't have the intelligence, to know that they found the truth within a relationship that they say they been not getting. 🤨 Don't quit when things in your life, aren't what you...
#confusion
#disappointment
#love
#strength
#TimeHeals
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Northern_Soul
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 11:24pm
10th Jan 2025 11:24pm
3
in honour of the third
crushed silver on a Thursday
beneath a flow chart, holding
do not resuscitate in its hands
in memoriam of the second
bones picked clean in a trailer
where an un-kissed mouth
holds no taste for the living
in anticipation of the first
water in gushing gutters
that knows no place—
humble, unfiltered, worn
crushed silver on a Thursday
beneath a flow chart, holding
do not resuscitate in its hands
in memoriam of the second
bones picked clean in a trailer
where an un-kissed mouth
holds no taste for the living
in anticipation of the first
water in gushing gutters
that knows no place—
humble, unfiltered, worn
#TimeHeals
140 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 11:52am
5th Jan 2025 11:52am
We all got a story to tell
Through this life we all have gone through somethings, that will affect us in ways that we have to learn, to understand how to navigate through the process of rebuilding our lives. For it's true that no one is sent to you by chance or accident 🤔 For sure we all have had our share of things, that weren't true about love and happiness only to find, out that it doesn't exist, but yet it does exist in the right one that we choose, to be with in honesty and truth and trust. Yet we sometimes we find ourselves involved, with someone who doesn't even have a glue of what love really, is truly...
#hope
#LifeAsAWriter
#PowerOfWords
#StreamOfConsciousness
#TimeHeals
65 reads
4 Comments
Revisionary
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2025 7:24am
2nd Jan 2025 7:24am
Rehab
I feed my heart and the warmth washes my skin
Cleansed I feel when the feelings real
I relinquish all these sins to start again
It judged me with a silent bright eye in morning mist
It fades away into a grey mass, my days are ugly
A miserable heart, you wouldn’t find me good company
There’s a pain in my breast, a brand that stings
I stumble into the bathroom clinging to my chest
I see my greatest flaw, the mirrored enemy within
I’m at the brink, so I julienned malevolence
And I passed it around like medicine
I walk around...
Cleansed I feel when the feelings real
I relinquish all these sins to start again
It judged me with a silent bright eye in morning mist
It fades away into a grey mass, my days are ugly
A miserable heart, you wouldn’t find me good company
There’s a pain in my breast, a brand that stings
I stumble into the bathroom clinging to my chest
I see my greatest flaw, the mirrored enemy within
I’m at the brink, so I julienned malevolence
And I passed it around like medicine
I walk around...
#apathy
#emptiness
#forgiveness
#redemption
#TimeHeals
61 reads
1 Comment
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2025 3:29am
2nd Jan 2025 3:29am
Do you want better
As we exchange thoughts and insight and imagination, from your own thoughts and dreams, more than anything that you continue to have in your life and world. 🌍 For sure you have the ability and power to eliminate, the negativity and drama from your life what would you, like to be able to remove that which you don't need or want. TO be apart of your existence as it bought nothing to your life. For sure we have to learn that sometimes, we have to let go of some situations that has slowly began, to break your heart ❤️ leaving behind scars of unbelievable pain, that will...
#courage
#hope
#love
#strength
#TimeHeals
71 reads
4 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
30th Dec 2024 7:33am
30th Dec 2024 7:33am
Returning on a jet plane...
(Paul Harvey used to give "...the rest of the story" on the radio. The same radio played songs that gave us a glimpse into song character's lives but are never revisited! Even worse when the singer dies! I hated that! One of the songs I always felt needed an ending was...John Denver's: "Leaving on a jet plane." So, I present...Returning on a jet plane. Dedicated to the late John Denver.
--‐------------------
Packed my bags again...
I'm finally coming home...
I sang the songs they wanted...
'til...I felt so all alone...
...
--‐------------------
Packed my bags again...
I'm finally coming home...
I sang the songs they wanted...
'til...I felt so all alone...
...
#emotions
#love
#TimeHeals
86 reads
6 Comments
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