Time Heals Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#TimeHeals
time heals seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
17th Apr 2025 2:11am
17th Apr 2025 2:11am
Faded Darkness
Through my life and memories of the past, still stacking up in the dark of the night. YET I've learned that my past is not my future. For my future no longer exist in the past, as it is behind me, still
trying to stop my own blessings for the betterment, of my life and love and honor and respect. Because I deserve better for myself, to be able to share my thoughts and insight and love, with someone else who is willing and able to be, with me as I want to be with them in honesty and truth and trust. 🙏 For sure I want a strong commitment, and real consistency and real deep...
trying to stop my own blessings for the betterment, of my life and love and honor and respect. Because I deserve better for myself, to be able to share my thoughts and insight and love, with someone else who is willing and able to be, with me as I want to be with them in honesty and truth and trust. 🙏 For sure I want a strong commitment, and real consistency and real deep...
#hope
#kindness
#love
#respect
#TimeHeals
61 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
13th Apr 2025 11:00am
13th Apr 2025 11:00am
It's always been just us
As we rise upon another day in our lives I lay here besides you, as I admire your skin reflecting from the glow of the morning sun. 🌞 AS you lay still sound asleep, for it's just the stillness I admire as you quietly, breathe still sleeping at peace. For sure it's times like these I have been blessed, to finally find my better half of me, someone who gets me. For I will always appreciate your support and understanding, and your encouragement to continue with the fire that burns deeper than deep in side of my heart ❤️ For sure you have become my strength and energy, and...
#admiration
#kindness
#love
#respect
#TimeHeals
69 reads
0 Comments
Stephanos_PS_M
Poem Published
10th Apr 2025 6:51am
10th Apr 2025 6:51am
Life Ain't Black nor White
Between the yes and no,
there stretches a field
where answers grow
like wildflowers, untamed,
their colors bleeding
into the wind.
The heart knows no absolutes,
only the weight of almost,
the whisper of what if,
the ache of not quite.
Truth is not a line,
but a tide
pulling, retreating,
never the same shore twice.
We are all shades of maybe,
flickering in the gray,
where love and loss
taste the same
on trembling lips.
So do not ask for...
there stretches a field
where answers grow
like wildflowers, untamed,
their colors bleeding
into the wind.
The heart knows no absolutes,
only the weight of almost,
the whisper of what if,
the ache of not quite.
Truth is not a line,
but a tide
pulling, retreating,
never the same shore twice.
We are all shades of maybe,
flickering in the gray,
where love and loss
taste the same
on trembling lips.
So do not ask for...
#acceptance
#LifeChangingMoment
#motivational #TimeHeals
#motivational #TimeHeals
51 reads
0 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
7th Apr 2025 2:37am
7th Apr 2025 2:37am
Heartstrings Can Be Troublesome Things
It’s the innocence about the times that I miss most
The way they used to look up
The little voices pulling at the heart
When I used to drive by that church on Washington
There was a moon at the top of the steeple
His little voice would cry out “the moon daddy, the moon”
There was some comfort in hearing that
Yet I knew deep down inside as time would go by
All that would fade away
But that was years ago…
It was as we walked through the museum
That his silence pierced through me
His indifference growing
That...
The way they used to look up
The little voices pulling at the heart
When I used to drive by that church on Washington
There was a moon at the top of the steeple
His little voice would cry out “the moon daddy, the moon”
There was some comfort in hearing that
Yet I knew deep down inside as time would go by
All that would fade away
But that was years ago…
It was as we walked through the museum
That his silence pierced through me
His indifference growing
That...
#children
#fatherhood
#forgiveness #TimeHeals
#forgiveness #TimeHeals
63 reads
1 Comment
Nevermindthegaps
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2025 7:31pm
2nd Apr 2025 7:31pm
Like A Beacon
I thought you’d left a light on for me
in that place we built from thin air
and pieces of ourselves we hid
it stood as a monument to everything
I didn’t know I wanted
in that time it stilled
a grand design
a Van Gogh
using pain and suffering to
paint our version of “Starry Night”
turning it into the most gorgeous suffering
of fools in love
we emblazoned our names into the the bust of the mantle
with little hearts
like love sick teenagers
so...
in that place we built from thin air
and pieces of ourselves we hid
it stood as a monument to everything
I didn’t know I wanted
in that time it stilled
a grand design
a Van Gogh
using pain and suffering to
paint our version of “Starry Night”
turning it into the most gorgeous suffering
of fools in love
we emblazoned our names into the the bust of the mantle
with little hearts
like love sick teenagers
so...
#emotions
#hope
#TimeHeals
98 reads
1 Comment
Josh
Joshua Bond
Joshua Bond
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2025 6:06pm
2nd Apr 2025 6:06pm
Terzanelle Nr.07 — The Keeper
When the world stopped turning it was three o’ clock
the animals slept in an odd dozing state
and everything froze in the grip of pure shock
the sea hushed to silence, as flat as a plate
the sun ceased its flaring, embarrassed and hot
the animals slept in an odd dozing state.
They looked at each other to grasp what they’d lost …
When man and woman lived naked and free
the sun ceased its flaring, expressive and hot
but vultures of jealousy circled the tree
dealt their intent on destroying creation
where woman...
the animals slept in an odd dozing state
and everything froze in the grip of pure shock
the sea hushed to silence, as flat as a plate
the sun ceased its flaring, embarrassed and hot
the animals slept in an odd dozing state.
They looked at each other to grasp what they’d lost …
When man and woman lived naked and free
the sun ceased its flaring, expressive and hot
but vultures of jealousy circled the tree
dealt their intent on destroying creation
where woman...
#astronomy
#rhyming
#TimeHeals
69 reads
1 Comment
Liziantus-Marantus
Poem Published
21st Mar 2025 11:00am
21st Mar 2025 11:00am
Time Passing Through
Can't the future just wait?
Can't we pass the obstacles we await?
Could we fool and dodge fate?
They say the future is happy and bright.
But I can't help but worry at night.
Life is like an endless fight.
You fight to live and survive.
Or just sleep peacefully through the night.
Which one you get is not under your control.
We just want to savour the moment.
And not let the bad thoughts of the future take toll.
When you suddenly see the red lights.
When you went through all the struggles and fights.
I...
Can't we pass the obstacles we await?
Could we fool and dodge fate?
They say the future is happy and bright.
But I can't help but worry at night.
Life is like an endless fight.
You fight to live and survive.
Or just sleep peacefully through the night.
Which one you get is not under your control.
We just want to savour the moment.
And not let the bad thoughts of the future take toll.
When you suddenly see the red lights.
When you went through all the struggles and fights.
I...
#hope
#motivational
#MovingOn
#TimeHeals
#uplifting
75 reads
0 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
21st Mar 2025 5:00am
21st Mar 2025 5:00am
The Nostalgic Nightingale
Perched on a withering branch
The nightingale sings a melancholic song
With a voice that remembers the past
Like echoes of spring from long, long ago
As the wind stirs amidst the trees
The nightingale sings a despondent tune
A winged memory of open blue skies
Now painted with a little more gloom…
But at night the nightingale sits in silence
Warm in the nest looking up at the stars
While the wind whispers amidst the trees
And leaves fall gently on the ground
The little bird reminisces of times
Of days lived and laughed and gone ...
The nightingale sings a melancholic song
With a voice that remembers the past
Like echoes of spring from long, long ago
As the wind stirs amidst the trees
The nightingale sings a despondent tune
A winged memory of open blue skies
Now painted with a little more gloom…
But at night the nightingale sits in silence
Warm in the nest looking up at the stars
While the wind whispers amidst the trees
And leaves fall gently on the ground
The little bird reminisces of times
Of days lived and laughed and gone ...
#birds
#memories
#nostalgia #TimeHeals
#nostalgia #TimeHeals
118 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
19th Mar 2025 11:16pm
19th Mar 2025 11:16pm
Heart on fire
When the heart is on fire it holds the 🗝️ key of power of desire, in the heat of the sensual moments of sending vibes running, through your body and spiritual subconsciousness of your soul. For sure it's more than emotions and with genuine, feelings that creates a vibrant of colors of a special bond, between two lovers. For when the heart is on fire 🔥 it's because the feelings go deeper than deep into the deepness of the depths of dreams. For it's true that a heart on fire burns, with the closeness of inner senses of raw and uncut emotions. For it's that kind of mental...
#emotions
#hope
#love
#StreamOfConsciousness
#TimeHeals
112 reads
6 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
13th Mar 2025 6:00am
13th Mar 2025 6:00am
My Beautiful Butterfly
From the deepness of my thoughts to the very deepness of my heart, for it's true that you have become that very Beautiful Butterfly. THAT I saw upon at a time, when I notice that a change is about to come into my life. For sure that was a sign, from up above to really change my world around. For the very betterment of amazing things to come to fulfill my dreams. Come true to finally have what I've been looking for all my life as it was you. That beautiful butterfly 🦋 a beautiful butterfly as a disguise, to bring the deepness of my thoughts of love and happiness come alive. AS I've...
#dreams
#happiness
#LifeChangingMoment
#redemption
#TimeHeals
109 reads
0 Comments
NaughtyByNature
Tiffany143
Tiffany143
Poem Published
4th Mar 2025 3:40am
4th Mar 2025 3:40am
Just My Imagination
#emotions
#love
#redemption #TimeHeals
#redemption #TimeHeals
220 reads
4 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
28th Feb 2025 9:21pm
28th Feb 2025 9:21pm
you touch me
the wind carries your heart
the sun spreads your warmth
the birds sing in your voice
i see your smile everywhere i go
in faces,in windows
in the clouds and in my mind
i feel your love surround me
envelope me,cover me everyday
you touch me
you sing to me
you warm me
you carry my heart
your soul is mine
i love you
never are you gone
you're always here ♥
the sun spreads your warmth
the birds sing in your voice
i see your smile everywhere i go
in faces,in windows
in the clouds and in my mind
i feel your love surround me
envelope me,cover me everyday
you touch me
you sing to me
you warm me
you carry my heart
your soul is mine
i love you
never are you gone
you're always here ♥
#love
#TimeHeals
92 reads
4 Comments
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