Time Heals Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#TimeHeals
time heals seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Ryan-Hayward
Ryan Hayward
Ryan Hayward
Poem Published
7th Mar 2025 5:13am
7th Mar 2025 5:13am
Before the 12th ( Tomorrow, Resting Period ) Epilogue
I thought, I would try to give a bit of explanation
as to my considerable situation
I'm a man, broken, shamed, filled with blame
Can't claim I'm anything proclaimed to become
I feel so weak, so bleak, a fragile brittle antique
Full of regrets, always upset, things I wish to forget
Can't believe, I'm 45, still alive, how did I survive?
Drowning, in alcohol, baring this agonized tormented soul
What I would do, to start again, but nothing I can really do.
I want to survive, but child in me died, long time now realized.....
Every-time...
as to my considerable situation
I'm a man, broken, shamed, filled with blame
Can't claim I'm anything proclaimed to become
I feel so weak, so bleak, a fragile brittle antique
Full of regrets, always upset, things I wish to forget
Can't believe, I'm 45, still alive, how did I survive?
Drowning, in alcohol, baring this agonized tormented soul
What I would do, to start again, but nothing I can really do.
I want to survive, but child in me died, long time now realized.....
Every-time...
#hurt
#memories
#TimeHeals
30 reads
0 Comments
NaughtyByNature
Tiffany143
Tiffany143
Poem Published
4th Mar 2025 3:40am
4th Mar 2025 3:40am
Just My Imagination
#emotions
#love
#redemption #TimeHeals
#redemption #TimeHeals
170 reads
4 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
28th Feb 2025 9:21pm
28th Feb 2025 9:21pm
you touch me
the wind carries your heart
the sun spreads your warmth
the birds sing in your voice
i see your smile everywhere i go
in faces,in windows
in the clouds and in my mind
i feel your love surround me
envelope me,cover me everyday
you touch me
you sing to me
you warm me
you carry my heart
your soul is mine
i love you
never are you gone
you're always here ♥
the sun spreads your warmth
the birds sing in your voice
i see your smile everywhere i go
in faces,in windows
in the clouds and in my mind
i feel your love surround me
envelope me,cover me everyday
you touch me
you sing to me
you warm me
you carry my heart
your soul is mine
i love you
never are you gone
you're always here ♥
#love
#TimeHeals
68 reads
4 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
25th Feb 2025 11:29am
25th Feb 2025 11:29am
Hoods
Childhood
Winds may blow harshly
Roots persist beneath the storm
We remain ourselves.
Adulthood
Light on the horizon
Path unshadowed by others
I am my own guide.
Elderhood
In the mirror, strength
Reflection of courage true
Voice of liberty.
Winds may blow harshly
Roots persist beneath the storm
We remain ourselves.
Adulthood
Light on the horizon
Path unshadowed by others
I am my own guide.
Elderhood
In the mirror, strength
Reflection of courage true
Voice of liberty.
#aging
#LifeCycle
#MovingOn
#PersonalGrowth
#TimeHeals
87 reads
13 Comments
Mercurial
Poem Published
22nd Feb 2025 6:46pm
22nd Feb 2025 6:46pm
Aetherborn
I’m just a little child,
Here for only a few years,
Yet it feels like lifetimes of duality,
Bullied and broken by the one who is a gift.
I’m just human.
Sometimes I wear masks
To blend with the stars,
But my energy is too violent.
I guess I'll collapse into a black hole.
I’m not human.
To be human is to be among humans,
But my mind struggles to cope with them,
The ones who dragged my soul through torment,
Stripping me bare and leaving me cold,
A shadow by the roadside, unseen.
No one stops to offer a jacket, ...
Here for only a few years,
Yet it feels like lifetimes of duality,
Bullied and broken by the one who is a gift.
I’m just human.
Sometimes I wear masks
To blend with the stars,
But my energy is too violent.
I guess I'll collapse into a black hole.
I’m not human.
To be human is to be among humans,
But my mind struggles to cope with them,
The ones who dragged my soul through torment,
Stripping me bare and leaving me cold,
A shadow by the roadside, unseen.
No one stops to offer a jacket, ...
#redemption
#strength
#TimeHeals
38 reads
0 Comments
Nachiyobe
Poem Published
20th Feb 2025 9:51am
20th Feb 2025 9:51am
Confessions After the Fact Pt 1
I had a good man once... but,
I lost him in the battle of to save him,
From the darker parts of the light he held in his eyes,
The parts that twist and coil within me.
And Lord knows I tried,
Tried to patch up and piece together,
The fragments of my wild heart,
And silence the shadows that whisper in the dead of night,
The secrets I kept inside,
Secrets so dark I was intent on keeping them hidden,
Trapped in the silk of my silence....
I thought,
Yeah I thought that if I could just show him the light,
Only the...
I lost him in the battle of to save him,
From the darker parts of the light he held in his eyes,
The parts that twist and coil within me.
And Lord knows I tried,
Tried to patch up and piece together,
The fragments of my wild heart,
And silence the shadows that whisper in the dead of night,
The secrets I kept inside,
Secrets so dark I was intent on keeping them hidden,
Trapped in the silk of my silence....
I thought,
Yeah I thought that if I could just show him the light,
Only the...
#bittersweet
#breakup
#heartbroken
#MovingOn
#TimeHeals
57 reads
0 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
17th Feb 2025 5:57pm
17th Feb 2025 5:57pm
litte girl
talk to me little girl you've gone quiet
where do you hide when my soul can't find you
within my sacred sanctuary no one can harm you
death will not touch you I will take the pain on my back
soul child of time himself
forgive me sometimes I have to be fiersome
I will shield your eyes keeping the worst of it from you
you wonder where you came from
you are my soul's child
here are your birthcertificate and pictures of family
we are not from here
you will not be forced to take any one form
you will manifest where you like...
where do you hide when my soul can't find you
within my sacred sanctuary no one can harm you
death will not touch you I will take the pain on my back
soul child of time himself
forgive me sometimes I have to be fiersome
I will shield your eyes keeping the worst of it from you
you wonder where you came from
you are my soul's child
here are your birthcertificate and pictures of family
we are not from here
you will not be forced to take any one form
you will manifest where you like...
#children
#love
#TimeHeals
98 reads
8 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
13th Feb 2025 1:43am
13th Feb 2025 1:43am
What is your aura saying
Here I am as I am a woman ♀️ in understanding my own beauty and strength and perseverance, along with the ability to have a respectful intellectual conversation. For sure there will be times when you just want to go some place far away from, the chaos of the world. 🌍 For as a woman I find myself feeling trapped, within a vortex that seems, to become more than a place of calmness and tranquility, and peaceful vibes, that I can have a quiet moment alone to breathe. For I am a woman who has fought many of battles, not knowing if I will truly make it through, the very...
#faith
#fate
#spiritual
#TimeHeals
#TruthOfLife
55 reads
0 Comments
NP_NP
Poem Published
13th Feb 2025 1:26am
13th Feb 2025 1:26am
Book's
I told him, take it all—
Just give me my books,
My refuge, my solace, my world.
Turning each page, tuning out the noise,
It’s just me and Bukowski’s words for the night.
While others sing nursery rhymes,
I read Poe to my children.
I thought it vital that they, too,
Could quote the verses that stir the soul—
To fall deep into the poetry,
Let it seep into their hearts.
When I read, I am whole,
But you, you called it an addiction.
Of all the cravings I could possess,
Books are the only...
Just give me my books,
My refuge, my solace, my world.
Turning each page, tuning out the noise,
It’s just me and Bukowski’s words for the night.
While others sing nursery rhymes,
I read Poe to my children.
I thought it vital that they, too,
Could quote the verses that stir the soul—
To fall deep into the poetry,
Let it seep into their hearts.
When I read, I am whole,
But you, you called it an addiction.
Of all the cravings I could possess,
Books are the only...
#books
#identity
#reading
#SelfDiscovery
#TimeHeals
65 reads
2 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 3:09am
7th Feb 2025 3:09am
Storytime! Shut up and Listen!
#courage
#patience
#TimeHeals #vanity
#TimeHeals #vanity
121 reads
4 Comments
cheesa
Poem Published
1st Feb 2025 5:38pm
1st Feb 2025 5:38pm
Flight of the crow
Getting older I realise
The things I love dissappear before my eyes
Questions with answers I'll never know
Places i never wish to go
I won't talk to criticise
Everyday I'm closer to the skies
People come and people go
Why ill never know
I still dream and fantasise
Hearts still an enormous size
Journeys end and sun melts the snow
I'm off to follow the flight of the crow
The things I love dissappear before my eyes
Questions with answers I'll never know
Places i never wish to go
I won't talk to criticise
Everyday I'm closer to the skies
People come and people go
Why ill never know
I still dream and fantasise
Hearts still an enormous size
Journeys end and sun melts the snow
I'm off to follow the flight of the crow
#hope
#TimeHeals
32 reads
0 Comments
Carpe_Noctem
Poem Published
1st Feb 2025 8:30am
1st Feb 2025 8:30am
Sometimes saltwater lingers in closed wounds
#suffering
#TimeHeals
28 reads
1 Comment
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