Time Heals by Top Critiquers Poems
#TimeHeals
time heals by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Her
Poem Published
21st Apr 2024 1:27pm
21st Apr 2024 1:27pm
Happy Birthday
I hope your day
Is filled with joy
As much
If not more
Than you gave me
Is filled with joy
As much
If not more
Than you gave me
#birthday
#TimeHeals
77 reads
faithmairee
Poem Published
10th Sep 2023 8:00am
10th Sep 2023 8:00am
Letter To Myself
Dear Fortunate Soul,
I won't say I hope you're well
You simply aren't
But that's alright
For now because
The feeling won't last
(It never does for long)
Just continue as you have
Enjoying those precious
Albeit short moments
Of treasured silence
Filled with peacefulness
At the start of each day
Relishing in the good breakfast
Better yet, the wonderful cups
Of coffee you love
Knowing quite well
This too will pass
Signed,
Your loving self!
I won't say I hope you're well
You simply aren't
But that's alright
For now because
The feeling won't last
(It never does for long)
Just continue as you have
Enjoying those precious
Albeit short moments
Of treasured silence
Filled with peacefulness
At the start of each day
Relishing in the good breakfast
Better yet, the wonderful cups
Of coffee you love
Knowing quite well
This too will pass
Signed,
Your loving self!
#courage
#TimeHeals
#emotions
173 reads
15 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
5th Feb 2024 1:40am
5th Feb 2024 1:40am
Deja vu
speaking visions into being
I see them so I tell you freely
altered reality bends destiny
wrapping fate in its wings
Deja vu, do you remember me?
sulking in the shadows waiting to be free
I call the dawn and my children with her
walking through the shade of the moon
a Goddess, a rite, a ritual
under a spell you are beckoned now come forth
turning through time, eons untold
I am among you
here are the keys to the universes
let's walk in the sun-night of a new era
birthed of an immortal lineage ...
I see them so I tell you freely
altered reality bends destiny
wrapping fate in its wings
Deja vu, do you remember me?
sulking in the shadows waiting to be free
I call the dawn and my children with her
walking through the shade of the moon
a Goddess, a rite, a ritual
under a spell you are beckoned now come forth
turning through time, eons untold
I am among you
here are the keys to the universes
let's walk in the sun-night of a new era
birthed of an immortal lineage ...
#love
#TimeHeals
97 reads
18 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
9th Feb 2024 4:25pm
9th Feb 2024 4:25pm
TRAVELING THE ROAD OF LOVE
When I first started on
the road to love I thought
the journey would be easy:
"Two hearts in FULL agreement."
NOT SO!
The road to love is paved
with ruts, potholes, and detours.
It is not a one-way, super highway
with no detours, it is not all
beautiful landscape; there
are back roads. From time to time
you stop to have a picnic in a
beautiful meadow or roadside park;
you run behind in arriving at
your destination and wonder is
the trouble worth it; your dreams
and wishes on the road to love
aren't...
the road to love I thought
the journey would be easy:
"Two hearts in FULL agreement."
NOT SO!
The road to love is paved
with ruts, potholes, and detours.
It is not a one-way, super highway
with no detours, it is not all
beautiful landscape; there
are back roads. From time to time
you stop to have a picnic in a
beautiful meadow or roadside park;
you run behind in arriving at
your destination and wonder is
the trouble worth it; your dreams
and wishes on the road to love
aren't...
#happiness
#love
#inspirational
#TimeHeals
#emotions
97 reads
2 Comments
nightbirdblue
enbyblue
enbyblue
Poem Published
17th Dec 2021 11:14am
17th Dec 2021 11:14am
Lightning Strikes
and I fall
in[to] grace
like a head
touching pillow
simultaneously
clouds breaking
into rain
this storm too
shall pass
in[to] grace
like a head
touching pillow
simultaneously
clouds breaking
into rain
this storm too
shall pass
#clouds
#rain
#storm
#TimeHeals
#sleep
669 reads
16 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
29th Oct 2020 8:36pm
29th Oct 2020 8:36pm
It’s Non-Stop Rain and I’m not drinking Alcohol
Grey
Dreary
In between weather
No alcohol to fall back on
Day 39 sober
Popping Excedrin to get a caffeine buzz
Taken to my watch collection
Marking time working from home
This classic ORIS Pointer Automatic
I remember buying it on the watch channel
One summer night at around 3am years ago
It’s a classic piece with vintage elegance
I go for that kind of thing
A rogue by nature but with good manners
Wearing a watch inside with nowhere to go
On point
On time
A nap could be forming
Dreary
In between weather
No alcohol to fall back on
Day 39 sober
Popping Excedrin to get a caffeine buzz
Taken to my watch collection
Marking time working from home
This classic ORIS Pointer Automatic
I remember buying it on the watch channel
One summer night at around 3am years ago
It’s a classic piece with vintage elegance
I go for that kind of thing
A rogue by nature but with good manners
Wearing a watch inside with nowhere to go
On point
On time
A nap could be forming
#TimeHeals
430 reads
19 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
Today 12:23pm
Today 12:23pm
unwritten endings
24 of 30
I watched him walk away
with a distinct air of unfinished business
didn't even glance over his shoulder
no indication he ever would
but I felt the later in his departure
my mind began to tremble
while my heart skipped a beat
like a poem that ends in the middle of a stanza...
...just left me hanging
there's no letting go without closure
I simply had to keep it moving
do the best I could to focus on the present
while hope kept poking me in the back
the silent emptiness continually kicking me in the ass ...
I watched him walk away
with a distinct air of unfinished business
didn't even glance over his shoulder
no indication he ever would
but I felt the later in his departure
my mind began to tremble
while my heart skipped a beat
like a poem that ends in the middle of a stanza...
...just left me hanging
there's no letting go without closure
I simply had to keep it moving
do the best I could to focus on the present
while hope kept poking me in the back
the silent emptiness continually kicking me in the ass ...
#hope
#love
#NaPoWriMo2024 #TimeHeals
#NaPoWriMo2024 #TimeHeals
36 reads
5 Comments
monovox128
Poem Published
6th Apr 2024 8:04pm
6th Apr 2024 8:04pm
YOU'VE ALWAYS BEEN THE ONE
You've always been the one.
I wanted embracing me as I embraced you, through life's joys as well as pain.
You have always been the one.
I wanted to always go to bed with everynight and wake up next to each morning time and time again.
You have always been the one.
I wanted to give all my time, attention
and affection, we would also share a
wonderful love-filled life together.
You have always been the one
I wanted and prayed for and would
and also want and pray for the same, not just for today, but also for, forever
...
I wanted embracing me as I embraced you, through life's joys as well as pain.
You have always been the one.
I wanted to always go to bed with everynight and wake up next to each morning time and time again.
You have always been the one.
I wanted to give all my time, attention
and affection, we would also share a
wonderful love-filled life together.
You have always been the one
I wanted and prayed for and would
and also want and pray for the same, not just for today, but also for, forever
...
#love
#hope
#TimeHeals
#disappointment
#bittersweet
144 reads
4 Comments
Grace
IDryad
IDryad
Poem Published
5th Mar 2021 12:07pm
5th Mar 2021 12:07pm
No Reasons
No reason behind the indifference
just not caring much anymore
at least that's what he said once
but today its a different story
there's something blue
and a lot of sparkles in between
I think he's in love
unfortunately I'm not the recipient
or fortunately maybe
as I don't really care either
sad to see a passion fire die
and watch the ashes blown away
so coffee anyone?
just not caring much anymore
at least that's what he said once
but today its a different story
there's something blue
and a lot of sparkles in between
I think he's in love
unfortunately I'm not the recipient
or fortunately maybe
as I don't really care either
sad to see a passion fire die
and watch the ashes blown away
so coffee anyone?
#strength
#TimeHeals
#apathy
529 reads
4 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2021 4:54pm
2nd Apr 2021 4:54pm
Freeze This Moment
As I get older, time seems to go by faster
Memories pile up then hide in a maze
Remembering old friends and laughter
The days seem to fade in a distant haze
Then I get lost in the nostalgia of it all
Knowing I’ll never get that time back
But it worked out over the long haul
As gray begins to cover what was black
With each passing year I gladly take note
Using words to capture fleeting thoughts
As the professor once said and wrote
I will freeze this moment - with snapshots
Time stands still in my heart, it’s not a...
Memories pile up then hide in a maze
Remembering old friends and laughter
The days seem to fade in a distant haze
Then I get lost in the nostalgia of it all
Knowing I’ll never get that time back
But it worked out over the long haul
As gray begins to cover what was black
With each passing year I gladly take note
Using words to capture fleeting thoughts
As the professor once said and wrote
I will freeze this moment - with snapshots
Time stands still in my heart, it’s not a...
#TimeHeals
#WritingPoetry
#LifeCycle
#aging
#NaPoWriMo2021
416 reads
8 Comments
Phantom2426
Poem Published
31st May 2023 00:16am
31st May 2023 00:16am
Know-it-all People
Know-it-all people
are driving me insane
It's okay if you are
smart but do not
gloat about it
help the other
person don't
make them feel
bad about
themselves
you want to
put good out
Into the world
not evil
are driving me insane
It's okay if you are
smart but do not
gloat about it
help the other
person don't
make them feel
bad about
themselves
you want to
put good out
Into the world
not evil
#women
#men
#family
#environment
#TimeHeals
222 reads
9 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
11th Jul 2022 1:59am
11th Jul 2022 1:59am
Soul Hour Power
Blown beyond summer's triangle stars
The clouds made way for the setting moon
And the campfire wood that newly chars
By way of kindling combustion tune
Gently applying to overwhelmed ears
A sound thrice sacred to my lunacy
And for which I provide three silent cheers
To emphasize an importunacy
Beseeching that maintenance of repose
Best lit by moonbeams and firelight
And whichever way the starlight glows
All through the middle of a summer night
Whose hours reestablish a soul
As less traffic helps with traffic control.
The clouds made way for the setting moon
And the campfire wood that newly chars
By way of kindling combustion tune
Gently applying to overwhelmed ears
A sound thrice sacred to my lunacy
And for which I provide three silent cheers
To emphasize an importunacy
Beseeching that maintenance of repose
Best lit by moonbeams and firelight
And whichever way the starlight glows
All through the middle of a summer night
Whose hours reestablish a soul
As less traffic helps with traffic control.
#TimeHeals
#meditation
312 reads
0 Comments
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