Poems on Jelaluddin Rumi Seeking Honest Critique
#JelaluddinRumi
~CORNUCOPIAN: Sounding Birth Of Love
deep
trenching holloways
runs amuck in the broadening
cavalry beat~ breaths & stilting prop
erective guts… in the untangling~
to blazing ballerina twirls, a
no-nonsensical
axially steadfast
revolutionary spin
of singing~ singular
straightness
..
the cavernous
unfolding depressions
emanate back & forth
sigmoidal pulsing
resonance...
from their
incrementally tonguing
shy...
trenching holloways
runs amuck in the broadening
cavalry beat~ breaths & stilting prop
erective guts… in the untangling~
to blazing ballerina twirls, a
no-nonsensical
axially steadfast
revolutionary spin
of singing~ singular
straightness
..
the cavernous
unfolding depressions
emanate back & forth
sigmoidal pulsing
resonance...
from their
incrementally tonguing
shy...
#love
#spiritual
#music
#sensual
#JelaluddinRumi
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~THE 'DHIKR'
viz :: the dhikr
#spiritual
#JelaluddinRumi
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only a few words
My life
Merely a waiting room
For your blessing
Merely a waiting room
For your blessing
#love
#JelaluddinRumi
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~7 moonlit love couplets.. for a du comeback (from a quik~short hiatus as i ev do) in~of~for 'our' realms eternal
viz: ~7 moonlit love couplets
#love
#universe
#moon
#spiritual
#JelaluddinRumi
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from 02022020 a palindromical feb dawn~ the ~maula & ~ruh, of love
something so laidback
yet trying to leaf out itself
in a coppery~reddish rimmed
blood~filled heady
nascence
this wintry dawn
stridulating
crickets.. still shrill
but in a lapsing~ singing
‘hide & seek’.. the alternating
on & off altercations in a final
dissolution unto the bigger, the
more becoming noisy, the
hustle bustle of made-up
urbanities, that which
dares to stir
the calming...
yet trying to leaf out itself
in a coppery~reddish rimmed
blood~filled heady
nascence
this wintry dawn
stridulating
crickets.. still shrill
but in a lapsing~ singing
‘hide & seek’.. the alternating
on & off altercations in a final
dissolution unto the bigger, the
more becoming noisy, the
hustle bustle of made-up
urbanities, that which
dares to stir
the calming...
#love
#universe
#nature
#JelaluddinRumi
#StreamOfConsciousness
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Not Yet Slumber
Why must this slumber end
I am not yet finished with the dream
When the day begins
Nothing is as it seems
For the light of day
Erases our recollection
Of the night’s Shakespearian play
The dark reflection
The divine is held in dream
The connection with our creator undeniable
Nothing is as it seems
The future now unforeseeable
Connect with me, my beloved Creator
Show me my truth
For you are my life curator
Just as in my youth
I am not yet finished with the dream
When the day begins
Nothing is as it seems
For the light of day
Erases our recollection
Of the night’s Shakespearian play
The dark reflection
The divine is held in dream
The connection with our creator undeniable
Nothing is as it seems
The future now unforeseeable
Connect with me, my beloved Creator
Show me my truth
For you are my life curator
Just as in my youth
#dreams
#sleep
#JelaluddinRumi
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i. camphor
i.
this listen being
whirls dervish, a noun danseuse
verbs love elusive
this listen being
whirls dervish, a noun danseuse
verbs love elusive
#love
#spiritual
#haiku #JelaluddinRumi
#haiku #JelaluddinRumi
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Speed of Presence
Be like a tree and let the dead leaves drop. ~ Rumi
Exuberance reveals many colors;
it's an outward sharing of fertility
Spring shares a newness of youth
a fertile aliveness of birth;
Autumn returns that fertility
of seasoned experience
and warm intimacy to the earth;
its urgent poignancy resides
in the recognition of a limited future
Spring knows nothing about
Everybody loves Spring
until Autumn presents itself
allowing the natural coming and going
of that whose time has...
Exuberance reveals many colors;
it's an outward sharing of fertility
Spring shares a newness of youth
a fertile aliveness of birth;
Autumn returns that fertility
of seasoned experience
and warm intimacy to the earth;
its urgent poignancy resides
in the recognition of a limited future
Spring knows nothing about
Everybody loves Spring
until Autumn presents itself
allowing the natural coming and going
of that whose time has...
#fall
#spiritual
#LifeCycle
#metaphor
#JelaluddinRumi
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Silence
When I am silent,
I have thunder hidden inside.
~ Rumi
Noise germinates verbiage -
culturing communication
inside petri-dished moments
When distance dissipates
proximity dissolves necessity
of sound beyond breathing
Barrel-chested rhythms
replace words with innate understanding;
blood becomes a messenger
subcutaneously carrying
an antidote of silence
superior to our human language
What is...
I have thunder hidden inside.
~ Rumi
Noise germinates verbiage -
culturing communication
inside petri-dished moments
When distance dissipates
proximity dissolves necessity
of sound beyond breathing
Barrel-chested rhythms
replace words with innate understanding;
blood becomes a messenger
subcutaneously carrying
an antidote of silence
superior to our human language
What is...
#love
#silence
#gratitude
#spiritual
#JelaluddinRumi
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Sacred Contracts XXXVIII: Gene Pool
Autumn is chameleon in nature;
a barely perceptible paradigm shift
birthed from the death
of all that is blatantly overt
Mutation is subtle, a non combative
surrender to the natural cycle it brings
We who resist will stumble
typically over our own feet
attempting to mold circumstance
to personal need
Live, let Life present itself;
happiness belongs to those
who understand release ...
a barely perceptible paradigm shift
birthed from the death
of all that is blatantly overt
Mutation is subtle, a non combative
surrender to the natural cycle it brings
We who resist will stumble
typically over our own feet
attempting to mold circumstance
to personal need
Live, let Life present itself;
happiness belongs to those
who understand release ...
#fall
#nature
#spiritual
#humankind
#JelaluddinRumi
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A Ghost In My Time
I rose up to shoot a ghost
the bullet of my frustration passed through …
in the distance a flower opened
gifted in full view
the ghost, untroubled, turned to look at me
a cusping link of solidarity
while the distant flower snapped its own stem
and floated into the ghost’s open hand
he hovered silently towards my time
offering reconciliation -
I acknowledged the gift with a slow bow
“Namaste, Ghosty” I responded, shuffling uneasily
and putting the flower in a vase of hope
I released the catch...
the bullet of my frustration passed through …
in the distance a flower opened
gifted in full view
the ghost, untroubled, turned to look at me
a cusping link of solidarity
while the distant flower snapped its own stem
and floated into the ghost’s open hand
he hovered silently towards my time
offering reconciliation -
I acknowledged the gift with a slow bow
“Namaste, Ghosty” I responded, shuffling uneasily
and putting the flower in a vase of hope
I released the catch...
#LifeStruggles
#LifeChangingMoment
#LifeGoals #JelaluddinRumi
#LifeGoals #JelaluddinRumi
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Wounded
Up he'yah in these mount'ns
lessons ah hahd as wintah
Too much weight
on ah frozen lake'll crack it
from ah branch'll snap it
in a hart'll break it
Thas exactly what ya want
'caus then ya don't have ta worry
bout it breaking no more
Long time ago I discovah'd
I was hurt'n myself
by tak'n things all personal;
it's not what was said
but what I was think'n;
tha uffend'd, hurt, angry paht
is ya wound talk'n
an ya wound is tell'n ya...
lessons ah hahd as wintah
Too much weight
on ah frozen lake'll crack it
from ah branch'll snap it
in a hart'll break it
Thas exactly what ya want
'caus then ya don't have ta worry
bout it breaking no more
Long time ago I discovah'd
I was hurt'n myself
by tak'n things all personal;
it's not what was said
but what I was think'n;
tha uffend'd, hurt, angry paht
is ya wound talk'n
an ya wound is tell'n ya...
#LifeStruggles
#freedom
#JelaluddinRumi
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#JelaluddinRumi is curated by Ahavati (Tams).