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i. camphor
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i. camphor
i.
this listen being
whirls dervish, a noun danseuse
verbs love elusive
Written by
summultima
(uma)
Published
29th Jan 2019
| Edited
5th Feb 2019
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Valentine's Day Haiku
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#haiku
#JelaluddinRumi
#love
#spiritual
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Re. camphor
cold_fusion
29th Jan 2019 5:33am
and the Qalander/Dervish knew...
the world's worthless but the love
amazing. brevity
beauty
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Re. camphor
Ahavati
29th Jan 2019 1:44pm
Beautiful brevity, my friend.
Welcome back. <3
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Hunterapsych
(Shaman among machines)
29th Jan 2019 10:07pm
Very beautifully concise and just lovely👏👏
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jenjames
30th Jan 2019 7:37pm
verbs love elusive
yes very very nice
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Re. camphor
DanielChristensen
(The Fire Elemental)
3rd Feb 2019 5:12pm
It comes to life before the minds eye in vivid, graceful motion. Well done Uma. Namaste.
Daniel
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Re. camphor
anna_grin
(ANNAN)
5th Feb 2019 1:25am
you are a synestheste,
these words have taste
this one is cold and fresh like peppermint medicine
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