I Love You by Top Critiquers Poems
#ILoveYou
i love you by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
AverageJoe
Poem Published
13th May 2021 3:03pm
13th May 2021 3:03pm
After
Kiss me in the afterglow
Of passions throes
Slick, sleek, and wet
Of love wrought sweat
Churned from frothy lust in ardent gasps
Words rent from delicious kisses with panting rasps
Time standing still, out of focus, musky and torrid
As we lay achingly entwined and florid
You softly melded into the melt of me
Left of the fire of your love set free
Your hair damp ringlets on my chest
My hand still longing upon your breast
Just let me breath you in
My love and favorite sin
And kiss you again
And more hungerly, again
Of passions throes
Slick, sleek, and wet
Of love wrought sweat
Churned from frothy lust in ardent gasps
Words rent from delicious kisses with panting rasps
Time standing still, out of focus, musky and torrid
As we lay achingly entwined and florid
You softly melded into the melt of me
Left of the fire of your love set free
Your hair damp ringlets on my chest
My hand still longing upon your breast
Just let me breath you in
My love and favorite sin
And kiss you again
And more hungerly, again
#love
#lust
#ILoveYou #passion
#ILoveYou #passion
466 reads
2 Comments
nutbuster
D C
D C
Poem Published
12th Jun 2021 7:15pm
12th Jun 2021 7:15pm
Her Beautiful Soul
Her Beautiful Soul
Why is it that I can’t help but kiss your nose?
I love it when you crinkle it in seriousness.
And how can I not nibble on your adorable ears?
Your cheeks beg for my lips to kiss them gently.
Your eyes sparkle and shine straight into my soul,
Illuminating it with the warmth of your heart.
How is it that your touch feels unlike any other?
Your skin has a magnetism, from which I cannot resist.
And your mind, is a crown jewel, that which makes you who you are,
Is nothing short of magical and breathtaking.
You...
Why is it that I can’t help but kiss your nose?
I love it when you crinkle it in seriousness.
And how can I not nibble on your adorable ears?
Your cheeks beg for my lips to kiss them gently.
Your eyes sparkle and shine straight into my soul,
Illuminating it with the warmth of your heart.
How is it that your touch feels unlike any other?
Your skin has a magnetism, from which I cannot resist.
And your mind, is a crown jewel, that which makes you who you are,
Is nothing short of magical and breathtaking.
You...
#romantic
#ILoveYou
742 reads
9 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2021 9:51am
2nd Jan 2021 9:51am
Dream of Me
(v1)
Every time you smiled at me
I couldn’t get you out my mind
I felt so happy and carefree
Dreaming that you’d be mine
(v2)
I wrote notes and letters
Kindly asking the universe
To bring us two together
Through the spirit of this verse
(chorus)
I have always wanted to be with you
Longing and yearning in a fantasy
But now I want you to feel it too
Wishing that you would dream of me
(v3)
I spoke out loud to the starry night
Declaring the love and fire I feel
As my heart...
Every time you smiled at me
I couldn’t get you out my mind
I felt so happy and carefree
Dreaming that you’d be mine
(v2)
I wrote notes and letters
Kindly asking the universe
To bring us two together
Through the spirit of this verse
(chorus)
I have always wanted to be with you
Longing and yearning in a fantasy
But now I want you to feel it too
Wishing that you would dream of me
(v3)
I spoke out loud to the starry night
Declaring the love and fire I feel
As my heart...
#love
#romantic
#ILoveYou #dreams
#ILoveYou #dreams
503 reads
11 Comments
Mrd
Poem Published
5th Apr 2023 7:51am
5th Apr 2023 7:51am
Dystopia With Variations on Dys
I have laid my cheek
Against the word:
Dys-to-pi-a. Slid it between
The labia of my lips,
Rolled it about my tongue,
Felt how it lies against
The papillae
As smooth and perfect
As poke berry poison
Swimming through the mind.
Or distant, which is to say,
Something as far away
As your love now, once
So close to me
Thrown like a bridal bouquet
Of wilted flowers
In casual disarray,
Something as smooth as
A gizzard stone, ...
Against the word:
Dys-to-pi-a. Slid it between
The labia of my lips,
Rolled it about my tongue,
Felt how it lies against
The papillae
As smooth and perfect
As poke berry poison
Swimming through the mind.
Or distant, which is to say,
Something as far away
As your love now, once
So close to me
Thrown like a bridal bouquet
Of wilted flowers
In casual disarray,
Something as smooth as
A gizzard stone, ...
#love
#girlfriend
#ILoveYou
200 reads
3 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
6th Mar 2024 2:13pm
6th Mar 2024 2:13pm
Haiku #18
I miss missing you
and so you could disappear
for a certain time
and so you could disappear
for a certain time
#ILoveYou
#redemption
#MovingOn
#IMissYou
#healing
104 reads
2 Comments
Maple666
Poem Published
16th Jul 2023 2:12am
16th Jul 2023 2:12am
Wings of a dove .
I dreamed of the love on the wings of a dove, freely giving. Where if necessary they would let you fly high above and below, love in its purest form of compromise and understanding. Not one flutter of jealousy, or of pandering, Just a flight navigated by two but with one destination together. Diving at times, but finding their inner peace and trust and strength in the other. United soaring like two white cotton candy clouds and resting on the edge of heaven.
#ILoveYou
#honesty
#support
#admiration
#respect
325 reads
3 Comments
JiltedJohnny
Poem Published
21st Oct 2023 8:22am
21st Oct 2023 8:22am
Shibari - senryu
It’s knotfull thoughtful
It’s called Shibari - a knot
Is knot just a not
It’s called Shibari - a knot
Is knot just a not
#ILoveYou
184 reads
5 Comments
Ljdynamic
Poem Published
28th Mar 2023 10:46am
28th Mar 2023 10:46am
In the End
It was not enough time.
Crime; what a harsh reality, is it not?
Taut my feelings,
dealing with this unapologetic distance.
Existence is feeling questionable.
Full of whys and what-ifs.
Cliff face diving, with my eyes closed, into love.
Shoving no parachute for safety;
free falling into what lies beneath.
Teeth waiting in shark-infested waters.
Slaughter of me is inevitable.
Pull this misfortunate together,
never meant to survive this fall.
Recall the height at which water becomes cement.
Lament nothing because you...
Crime; what a harsh reality, is it not?
Taut my feelings,
dealing with this unapologetic distance.
Existence is feeling questionable.
Full of whys and what-ifs.
Cliff face diving, with my eyes closed, into love.
Shoving no parachute for safety;
free falling into what lies beneath.
Teeth waiting in shark-infested waters.
Slaughter of me is inevitable.
Pull this misfortunate together,
never meant to survive this fall.
Recall the height at which water becomes cement.
Lament nothing because you...
#ILoveYou
#FallingInLove
#LongDistanceRelationship
38 reads
22 Comments
Diaryofabasketcase
Poem Published
8th Feb 2024 9:56pm
8th Feb 2024 9:56pm
Falling in Love Again
#relationships
#forgiveness
#romantic
#ILoveYou
#FallingInLove
183 reads
0 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
26th Sep 2021 00:34am
26th Sep 2021 00:34am
in bed, I thought what the heck
I remember she had her face
to the wall when I asked her to marry me and saw the look of surprise on the back of her neck
to the wall when I asked her to marry me and saw the look of surprise on the back of her neck
#ILoveYou
296 reads
1 Comment
runningturtle87
Poem Published
24th Dec 2021 9:44pm
24th Dec 2021 9:44pm
Happiness Is the New
Happiness Is the New
In a world
So jaded
Through
And through,
A smile
Is looking
Good
On you.
When hot
Is when
The gauge
Turns dexy,
Happy
Then
Is the new
Sexy.
In a world
So jaded
Through
And through,
A smile
Is looking
Good
On you.
When hot
Is when
The gauge
Turns dexy,
Happy
Then
Is the new
Sexy.
#happiness
#ILoveYou
#FallingInLove
#crush
#obsession
520 reads
2 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
3rd Dec 2022 1:37am
3rd Dec 2022 1:37am
rules of engagement
god, I'm hurting
I want to tell you I love you
but it's against the rules
we don't do that
it's inconsiderate to be so forward
I know you love me
you've told me so
but you don't want those words from me
perhaps it would hurt too much
I'm taken and I wouldn't fit in your world
you like sampling my world
but you don't want to cross over
into the madness that is me
so I keen in the dark
I weep I'm not enough
I cry I'm too much
it hurts down deep
my lips whisper I love you
I'm...
I want to tell you I love you
but it's against the rules
we don't do that
it's inconsiderate to be so forward
I know you love me
you've told me so
but you don't want those words from me
perhaps it would hurt too much
I'm taken and I wouldn't fit in your world
you like sampling my world
but you don't want to cross over
into the madness that is me
so I keen in the dark
I weep I'm not enough
I cry I'm too much
it hurts down deep
my lips whisper I love you
I'm...
#love
#ILoveYou
335 reads
4 Comments
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