I Love You by Top Critiquers Poems
#ILoveYou
i love you by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Bluevelvete
Poem Published
12th Mar 2021 6:09pm
12th Mar 2021 6:09pm
a worth more than it's weight in gold~ (a tanka of truth)
Lovers' hands entwined,
Then, a squeeze to remind her
how unique theirs is;
Two sides of the same rare coin—
Invaluable in whole
Then, a squeeze to remind her
how unique theirs is;
Two sides of the same rare coin—
Invaluable in whole
#love
#romantic
#ILoveYou
#FallingInLove
#tanka
693 reads
24 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
27th Aug 2018 9:43am
27th Aug 2018 9:43am
IN THE HOLDING OF OUR HANDS
In the holding of our hands we express how deeply our lives entwine at the physical level, and more.
We express how strongly we belong with each other, you are all my world, when I hang onto you I show I hang onto everything about you, everything you say.
Above all we express the trust we have for each other, I'm not going to let you go, you won't let me go, we will carry each other linked heart and soul through all that life throws at us. In times of pain and uncertainty, and of enjoyment, I know you will grasp me for dear life, and I you.
We hold hands so...
We express how strongly we belong with each other, you are all my world, when I hang onto you I show I hang onto everything about you, everything you say.
Above all we express the trust we have for each other, I'm not going to let you go, you won't let me go, we will carry each other linked heart and soul through all that life throws at us. In times of pain and uncertainty, and of enjoyment, I know you will grasp me for dear life, and I you.
We hold hands so...
#love
#relationships
#romantic
#ILoveYou
#FreeVerse
1150 reads
3 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
29th Mar 2020 5:00am
29th Mar 2020 5:00am
Butter Love...mmm...Sugary Twist
I’ve got that love you wanna try that sends your tongue up and down my spine”
Butter Love Sugary Twist
A beautiful kaleidoscope of stars, as planets align for a lover’s reminisce
Strokes of his being melting me tenderly
Wet kisses up and down my spine feelings returned sincerely
Falling twinkling star
Taking my mind past the definition of far
Pulsates are racing, hearts crumbling
Palms to palms, lips to lips, bodies heightened in pleasure as their...
Butter Love Sugary Twist
A beautiful kaleidoscope of stars, as planets align for a lover’s reminisce
Strokes of his being melting me tenderly
Wet kisses up and down my spine feelings returned sincerely
Falling twinkling star
Taking my mind past the definition of far
Pulsates are racing, hearts crumbling
Palms to palms, lips to lips, bodies heightened in pleasure as their...
#ILoveYou
#lover
#sensual #passion
#sensual #passion
989 reads
4 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
2nd Jan 2021 9:51am
2nd Jan 2021 9:51am
Dream of Me
(v1)
Every time you smiled at me
I couldn’t get you out my mind
I felt so happy and carefree
Dreaming that you’d be mine
(v2)
I wrote notes and letters
Kindly asking the universe
To bring us two together
Through the spirit of this verse
(chorus)
I have always wanted to be with you
Longing and yearning in a fantasy
But now I want you to feel it too
Wishing that you would dream of me
(v3)
I spoke out loud to the starry night
Declaring the love and fire I feel
As my heart...
Every time you smiled at me
I couldn’t get you out my mind
I felt so happy and carefree
Dreaming that you’d be mine
(v2)
I wrote notes and letters
Kindly asking the universe
To bring us two together
Through the spirit of this verse
(chorus)
I have always wanted to be with you
Longing and yearning in a fantasy
But now I want you to feel it too
Wishing that you would dream of me
(v3)
I spoke out loud to the starry night
Declaring the love and fire I feel
As my heart...
#love
#romantic
#ILoveYou #dreams
#ILoveYou #dreams
433 reads
11 Comments
KrystalG
Poem Published
11th May 2023 5:39pm
11th May 2023 5:39pm
Self Love is the Best Love(Senryu)
Self love is valid
Self love's the best love of all
I love myself first
~
First and foremost, love
Love is so much more than us
Than the Connection
~
Between two people
To better love you, I will love
Myself better to
Self love's the best love of all
I love myself first
~
First and foremost, love
Love is so much more than us
Than the Connection
~
Between two people
To better love you, I will love
Myself better to
#love
#ILoveYou
#myself
#learning
#SelfWorth
68 reads
4 Comments
Tallen
earth_empath
earth_empath
Poem Published
5th Sep 2019 5:41pm
5th Sep 2019 5:41pm
not-quite-(un)requited
i almost wrote You into my journal
professing eternal love
putting on alert my heart
Gratitude universe above
i almost penned You into my journal
adopting lyrical You
from the start
side-steppin' all trepidation
my eyes no longer blue
i almost etched You into my journal
a muse who I love (no kiss & telling)
reciprocal syllables of the same
carved our aortal flames
into our Tree of Life
@ our trysting place
i almost spilled myself into You
(& into my...
professing eternal love
putting on alert my heart
Gratitude universe above
i almost penned You into my journal
adopting lyrical You
from the start
side-steppin' all trepidation
my eyes no longer blue
i almost etched You into my journal
a muse who I love (no kiss & telling)
reciprocal syllables of the same
carved our aortal flames
into our Tree of Life
@ our trysting place
i almost spilled myself into You
(& into my...
#ILoveYou
#dreams
#MyInspiration
#WritingPoetry
#UnrequitedLove
706 reads
26 Comments
Her
Poem Published
20th Apr 2022 7:59pm
20th Apr 2022 7:59pm
Love Language
I don’t need psycho-babble
To define
The way I
Express love
I just love
From the way I
Touch you
Tell you
Give to you
All of me
Through the
Honesty of me
If that doesn’t
Tell you
Then I don’t know
What will
To define
The way I
Express love
I just love
From the way I
Touch you
Tell you
Give to you
All of me
Through the
Honesty of me
If that doesn’t
Tell you
Then I don’t know
What will
#love
#relationships
#ILoveYou
406 reads
5 Comments
nutbuster
D C
D C
Poem Published
12th Jun 2021 7:15pm
12th Jun 2021 7:15pm
Her Beautiful Soul
Her Beautiful Soul
Why is it that I can’t help but kiss your nose?
I love it when you crinkle it in seriousness.
And how can I not nibble on your adorable ears?
Your cheeks beg for my lips to kiss them gently.
Your eyes sparkle and shine straight into my soul,
Illuminating it with the warmth of your heart.
How is it that your touch feels unlike any other?
Your skin has a magnetism, from which I cannot resist.
And your mind, is a crown jewel, that which makes you who you are,
Is nothing short of magical and breathtaking.
You...
Why is it that I can’t help but kiss your nose?
I love it when you crinkle it in seriousness.
And how can I not nibble on your adorable ears?
Your cheeks beg for my lips to kiss them gently.
Your eyes sparkle and shine straight into my soul,
Illuminating it with the warmth of your heart.
How is it that your touch feels unlike any other?
Your skin has a magnetism, from which I cannot resist.
And your mind, is a crown jewel, that which makes you who you are,
Is nothing short of magical and breathtaking.
You...
#romantic
#ILoveYou
640 reads
9 Comments
monovox128
Poem Published
13th May 2023 5:54pm
13th May 2023 5:54pm
UNLESS AND UNTIL
There I go dreaming that same dream yet again....
That one when I was not just your lover, but also friend.
Its a dream where you come back to me, like you have before....
Watching and waiting for your call or even a knock at my door.
Nothing seems the same when I
am left here all alone
I get a little depressed sometimes whenever you're gone.
I miss how we can laugh together and talk things through
You make it easy since you never judge me, nor do I, you.
We are both willing to do what it takes to satisfy and please...
That one when I was not just your lover, but also friend.
Its a dream where you come back to me, like you have before....
Watching and waiting for your call or even a knock at my door.
Nothing seems the same when I
am left here all alone
I get a little depressed sometimes whenever you're gone.
I miss how we can laugh together and talk things through
You make it easy since you never judge me, nor do I, you.
We are both willing to do what it takes to satisfy and please...
#hope
#girlfriend
#ILoveYou
#disappointment
#bittersweet
84 reads
1 Comment
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
6th Apr 2023 6:46am
6th Apr 2023 6:46am
mean motherf**ker
hey, hey dude can we talk openly
I know people get pissed at me because I always favored you
it's not right maybe, but I'm not an actor
I have to be myself
when will I see you again?
brotherhood, sisterhood, cousins, Time Infinite
you still got room on the block for me?
I miss you, man
I can't lie
I try
it hurts me
you want to beat me down brotherfucker?
I am here in lockup
I never talked
interrogation
yeah deja vu
I'm spinning in the energy
our kids are fine
man, I...
I know people get pissed at me because I always favored you
it's not right maybe, but I'm not an actor
I have to be myself
when will I see you again?
brotherhood, sisterhood, cousins, Time Infinite
you still got room on the block for me?
I miss you, man
I can't lie
I try
it hurts me
you want to beat me down brotherfucker?
I am here in lockup
I never talked
interrogation
yeah deja vu
I'm spinning in the energy
our kids are fine
man, I...
#love
#brother
#ILoveYou
159 reads
17 Comments
JAZZMANOR
Poem Published
18th Aug 2017 6:18am
18th Aug 2017 6:18am
Perils Of My Deficiences
Something in the way she moves"
George Harrison once crooned
and her presence touches me so
permanent indent on my pysche
while anything I can do is insignificant
I can't look away while she sways
in his arms waist connected to waist
whispers I can only imagine
responding to each other's groove
"she drives me crazy"
As wonderful as slow caresses can be
I am reduced to a surveyor
"oh I believe she is an angel
all the heaven I need to see"
before I summon courage she is gone
I am cursed...
George Harrison once crooned
and her presence touches me so
permanent indent on my pysche
while anything I can do is insignificant
I can't look away while she sways
in his arms waist connected to waist
whispers I can only imagine
responding to each other's groove
"she drives me crazy"
As wonderful as slow caresses can be
I am reduced to a surveyor
"oh I believe she is an angel
all the heaven I need to see"
before I summon courage she is gone
I am cursed...
#relationships
#ILoveYou
#FallingInLove #crush
#FallingInLove #crush
529 reads
4 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
13th May 2021 3:03pm
13th May 2021 3:03pm
After
Kiss me in the afterglow
Of passions throes
Slick, sleek, and wet
Of love wrought sweat
Churned from frothy lust in ardent gasps
Words rent from delicious kisses with panting rasps
Time standing still, out of focus, musky and torrid
As we lay achingly entwined and florid
You softly melded into the melt of me
Left of the fire of your love set free
Your hair damp ringlets on my chest
My hand still longing upon your breast
Just let me breath you in
My love and favorite sin
And kiss you again
And more hungerly, again
Of passions throes
Slick, sleek, and wet
Of love wrought sweat
Churned from frothy lust in ardent gasps
Words rent from delicious kisses with panting rasps
Time standing still, out of focus, musky and torrid
As we lay achingly entwined and florid
You softly melded into the melt of me
Left of the fire of your love set free
Your hair damp ringlets on my chest
My hand still longing upon your breast
Just let me breath you in
My love and favorite sin
And kiss you again
And more hungerly, again
#love
#lust
#ILoveYou #passion
#ILoveYou #passion
418 reads
2 Comments
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