Poems About God by Top Critiquers
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Poems about god by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
7th Jan 2025 10:30am
7th Jan 2025 10:30am
So witty, yet so naive
I took her up to the roof and told her she could fly because I asked God to grant her a special aviator's license.
Did you ever hear of something so goddamn stupid?
She did it
She fell like a fucking stone
Pretty stupid, even for a girl that was an amazing poet!
She was on this site from time to time
Did you ever hear of something so goddamn stupid?
She did it
She fell like a fucking stone
Pretty stupid, even for a girl that was an amazing poet!
She was on this site from time to time
#God
#ignorance
#LifeAsAWriter
#LifeChangingMoment
#ThrillSeeking
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
7th Jan 2025 4:58am
7th Jan 2025 4:58am
Paradise Lost
riotus laughter fills my thoughts
as the voices of mirth enter my mind
sometimes i laugh with them, others I don't
my feelings turn towards sorrow
I feel bad for them with all their bravado
they can't admit they're sad
in Paradise Lost Milton tells of Lucifer's fall
in front of the other angels he was brave
but when he is alone and thoughtful he feels bad
like he really fucked up
this makes me sorrowful because I know what is to fuck up
and regretting it later
he has no hopes of redeeming himself
my heart sinks...
as the voices of mirth enter my mind
sometimes i laugh with them, others I don't
my feelings turn towards sorrow
I feel bad for them with all their bravado
they can't admit they're sad
in Paradise Lost Milton tells of Lucifer's fall
in front of the other angels he was brave
but when he is alone and thoughtful he feels bad
like he really fucked up
this makes me sorrowful because I know what is to fuck up
and regretting it later
he has no hopes of redeeming himself
my heart sinks...
#angels
#God
#love
83 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
16th Dec 2024 3:50am
16th Dec 2024 3:50am
Saints and Sinners
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ FOR it's true that we are a threat to the deepness of the truth, of genuine honesty and truth of what you want to believe or what you can't believe. For sure we all can see the the difference 🤨 of the changes, that has altered the deepness of the world. 🌎 Even your own thoughts and prayers and insight, and spiritual soul of your subconsciousness. For sure let's now analyze what I say is the truth of all truth 😭 YET there are those who are still not willing, to accept the truth for what it's worth the...
#angels
#devil
#dialogue
#God
#StreamOfConsciousness
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Solomon_Song
Poem Published
30th Oct 2022 4:34pm
30th Oct 2022 4:34pm
THE SEVEN DAYS OF CREATION
See Genesis Chapters 1 and 2 verses 1-7.
On day one God made day light
And the darkness He called "night".
On the second day He made the sky
Parting sea from rain clouds with space dry.
The first plants grew on day three,
When He raised dry land from the sea.
The moon, stars and sun He made on day four
To light skies above, behind and before.
Birds, water beasts, came alive
By His hand on day five.
Land animals, then man, He made on the sixth day,
Completing earth and heavens in their vast array.
Seeing all...
On day one God made day light
And the darkness He called "night".
On the second day He made the sky
Parting sea from rain clouds with space dry.
The first plants grew on day three,
When He raised dry land from the sea.
The moon, stars and sun He made on day four
To light skies above, behind and before.
Birds, water beasts, came alive
By His hand on day five.
Land animals, then man, He made on the sixth day,
Completing earth and heavens in their vast array.
Seeing all...
#nature
#God
#spiritual #rhyming
#spiritual #rhyming
1113 reads
5 Comments
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
9th Aug 2022 1:10am
9th Aug 2022 1:10am
Snack Immemorial
The endless Eon Potato
Was the timeless tuber of God
And when served with Orvieto
Received an approving nod...
For God enjoyed wine with spuds,
Although mostly when they were fried,
Which resurrected tasteless duds
From other projects she had tried.
Then she started to fry some souls
To see if that improved their taste
But then she served them in big bowls
Of Krazy Glue and Elmer's Paste!
"Well that was bollocks, wasn't it?"
Was what she said of the result
And was a failure she'd admit
Later on...
Was the timeless tuber of God
And when served with Orvieto
Received an approving nod...
For God enjoyed wine with spuds,
Although mostly when they were fried,
Which resurrected tasteless duds
From other projects she had tried.
Then she started to fry some souls
To see if that improved their taste
But then she served them in big bowls
Of Krazy Glue and Elmer's Paste!
"Well that was bollocks, wasn't it?"
Was what she said of the result
And was a failure she'd admit
Later on...
#God
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PAR
Poem Published
4th Apr 2024 6:52pm
4th Apr 2024 6:52pm
I don't see the face of God here...
All faith is false and all truth is faith
as if a mirror exploded and each one
chose a sliver to be his entire mirror.
as if a mirror exploded and each one
chose a sliver to be his entire mirror.
#religion
#God
#faith
127 reads
6 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
25th Sep 2024 9:11pm
25th Sep 2024 9:11pm
The Twelve Tribes Of Israel (Judah-Book I)
To the temple of the Sun that radiates upon humanity of the world
Tell us why humans allow violence from the hearts instead of love from mortal minds to unfurl
Do you not see, can you not comprehend the codes given from the skies
The enigma to longevity is not found in a Holy Book used to place a hand upon and then confess out the mouth concealed lies
A burning cross in the name of salvation yet, unto a race of people hatred in the demise
The trees you inhale of its natural oxygen as you breathe without question without whys
Strange...
Tell us why humans allow violence from the hearts instead of love from mortal minds to unfurl
Do you not see, can you not comprehend the codes given from the skies
The enigma to longevity is not found in a Holy Book used to place a hand upon and then confess out the mouth concealed lies
A burning cross in the name of salvation yet, unto a race of people hatred in the demise
The trees you inhale of its natural oxygen as you breathe without question without whys
Strange...
#angels
#God
#heaven
#rebirth
#spiritual
221 reads
4 Comments
AverageJoe
Poem Published
1st Feb 2023 8:56am
1st Feb 2023 8:56am
Thou Art
Though life's toils and trials blind my eyes
Through all and all, ever present, thou art near
Overcome by thy mercy in my joy -
Though I make my bed in hell, thou art there
Thou ever watchful sovereign, God
Who movest with hallowed footsteps, fate
And bids me in your footsteps trod
To take thy yoke and share life's weight
Teach me to walk this life by faith
Led by whisperings of the still small voice
The veil is thin 'tween clay and wraith
All alike to you, in your grace rejoice
I believe in Christ...
Through all and all, ever present, thou art near
Overcome by thy mercy in my joy -
Though I make my bed in hell, thou art there
Thou ever watchful sovereign, God
Who movest with hallowed footsteps, fate
And bids me in your footsteps trod
To take thy yoke and share life's weight
Teach me to walk this life by faith
Led by whisperings of the still small voice
The veil is thin 'tween clay and wraith
All alike to you, in your grace rejoice
I believe in Christ...
#inspirational
#God
#spiritual
283 reads
4 Comments
dimpy
dimpsmoon
dimpsmoon
Poem Published
10th Apr 2023 12:40pm
10th Apr 2023 12:40pm
God... The Power
The God... an intangible force
who is formless, who has no colour
who is truth, who does justice
N who moves the universe,
the one who pervades the whole universe,
the one who runs this whole universe under Karma. It is an infinite power always present within us.
On the earth, in the inferno and in the sky. the same power exists in all the three worlds.
the one which is invisible, the one that we can feel,
that gives us an energy, that make us mature,
Every born child, every growing plant assures us that a power called God is still not angry...
who is formless, who has no colour
who is truth, who does justice
N who moves the universe,
the one who pervades the whole universe,
the one who runs this whole universe under Karma. It is an infinite power always present within us.
On the earth, in the inferno and in the sky. the same power exists in all the three worlds.
the one which is invisible, the one that we can feel,
that gives us an energy, that make us mature,
Every born child, every growing plant assures us that a power called God is still not angry...
#power
#God
224 reads
8 Comments
dartford
Paul S...
Paul S...
Poem Published
18th Apr 2023 11:47pm
18th Apr 2023 11:47pm
unfounded
the archaeologist thought he’d unearthed god on an archeological dig in suffolk and, following much research, he published his findings were later to be discounted ..
#science
#God
143 reads
2 Comments
brokentitanium
k.
k.
Poem Published
4th Jan 2024 4:30pm
4th Jan 2024 4:30pm
Hellion
Why did I join this team?
This group of
steeped-in-tradition,
trained-in-conformity,
blinded-by-doctrine,
very certain
old white dudes?
Because this is where you've put me.
Maybe it's where I can
do the best damage.
.
This group of
steeped-in-tradition,
trained-in-conformity,
blinded-by-doctrine,
very certain
old white dudes?
Because this is where you've put me.
Maybe it's where I can
do the best damage.
.
#courage
#religion
#God #risk
#God #risk
187 reads
8 Comments
Phantom2426
Poem Published
6th Mar 2020 7:11pm
6th Mar 2020 7:11pm
Gunther's Point
Follow me to Gunther's Point
Where journey begins
Jump into your heart
Where it may lead you
to the Vera Curse
Where Creation begins
To where the truth is lost
Souls are reborn
Where journey begins
Jump into your heart
Where it may lead you
to the Vera Curse
Where Creation begins
To where the truth is lost
Souls are reborn
#love
#inspirational
#God
#rebirth
#curse
483 reads
2 Comments
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