Poems About God by Top Critiquers
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Poems about god by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
(The Last Upper)
Jesus had a huge supper, with large amounts of uppers
Cocaine, amphetamines & methamphetamine
The aliens from our future planet came to visit him on this special day
They offered him food, drink & loads of drugs
Most disciples were upset with this and walked out
A few stayed for the debauchery
There were also punks, metal heads, hip artists and free thinkers at this gathering
Such unity, democracy, in one social gathering
The image I included here is the original Leonardo da Vinci painting that showcased what was really happening during the last...
Cocaine, amphetamines & methamphetamine
The aliens from our future planet came to visit him on this special day
They offered him food, drink & loads of drugs
Most disciples were upset with this and walked out
A few stayed for the debauchery
There were also punks, metal heads, hip artists and free thinkers at this gathering
Such unity, democracy, in one social gathering
The image I included here is the original Leonardo da Vinci painting that showcased what was really happening during the last...
#aliens
#God
#nonfiction
#scifi
#TruthOfLife
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Grace
hurting shadows I weep to, my Father
this isn't who I want to be
my heart desires a cottage with flowers
where we can discuss philosophy
and the madness will retract
my soul seeing clearly
Shiny demons confuse me in the daytime
at night while sleeping I see them for what they are
Father another day is setting
let me sleep peacefully I've had a full dose
of the anger of my enemies
my soul song is for the angelic
sailing through space with you
my honesty knows you somehow
talking to you about...
this isn't who I want to be
my heart desires a cottage with flowers
where we can discuss philosophy
and the madness will retract
my soul seeing clearly
Shiny demons confuse me in the daytime
at night while sleeping I see them for what they are
Father another day is setting
let me sleep peacefully I've had a full dose
of the anger of my enemies
my soul song is for the angelic
sailing through space with you
my honesty knows you somehow
talking to you about...
#God
#gratitude
#philosophical #support
#philosophical #support
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SPIRITUAL SUBCONSCIOUSNESS
Have you ever wondered if it was ever possible to be able to see pass, the deepness of your own thoughts into your deepest imagination. As your insight becomes more clearly yet invisible, as the fire of your heart becomes what will you truly may see in the future of your future dreams. For let's take a moment to analyze the deepness of the questions, that has been haunting you, in the depths of your silence as sleep has become a thing of the past, behind unseen eyes. 👁️ For have you ever wondered, if you had a chance to rewrite your life all over again, what would you want to...
#angels
#devil
#God
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
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THE SEVEN DAYS OF CREATION
See Genesis Chapters 1 and 2 verses 1-7.
On day one God made day light
And the darkness He called "night".
On the second day He made the sky
Parting sea from rain clouds with space dry.
The first plants grew on day three,
When He raised dry land from the sea.
The moon, stars and sun He made on day four
To light skies above, behind and before.
Birds, water beasts, came alive
By His hand on day five.
Land animals, then man, He made on the sixth day,
Completing earth and heavens in their vast array.
Seeing all...
On day one God made day light
And the darkness He called "night".
On the second day He made the sky
Parting sea from rain clouds with space dry.
The first plants grew on day three,
When He raised dry land from the sea.
The moon, stars and sun He made on day four
To light skies above, behind and before.
Birds, water beasts, came alive
By His hand on day five.
Land animals, then man, He made on the sixth day,
Completing earth and heavens in their vast array.
Seeing all...
#nature
#God
#spiritual #rhyming
#spiritual #rhyming
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~ASHTAKAALI~ The Eight Avatar-ing Kaali
https://youtu.be/xWgDYQgCKM8?feature=shared
the demon in a let loose cruel
.’Rakshasa Kora Thaandavam’
..the slaying of the demon
are the needful prayers
of these innocent helpless
masses ..
in the happening now. the
#Soorasamhaaram
the virgin snake goddess
‘Nagakanni Amman’
births the raging sacred forces
The Eight Kaali Forms .. the
‘ASHTAKAALI..’
from the eighth egg.....
the demon in a let loose cruel
.’Rakshasa Kora Thaandavam’
..the slaying of the demon
are the needful prayers
of these innocent helpless
masses ..
in the happening now. the
#Soorasamhaaram
the virgin snake goddess
‘Nagakanni Amman’
births the raging sacred forces
The Eight Kaali Forms .. the
‘ASHTAKAALI..’
from the eighth egg.....
#feminism
#God
#inspirational
#rebellion
#spiritual
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Snack Immemorial
The endless Eon Potato
Was the timeless tuber of God
And when served with Orvieto
Received an approving nod...
For God enjoyed wine with spuds,
Although mostly when they were fried,
Which resurrected tasteless duds
From other projects she had tried.
Then she started to fry some souls
To see if that improved their taste
But then she served them in big bowls
Of Krazy Glue and Elmer's Paste!
"Well that was bollocks, wasn't it?"
Was what she said of the result
And was a failure she'd admit
Later on...
Was the timeless tuber of God
And when served with Orvieto
Received an approving nod...
For God enjoyed wine with spuds,
Although mostly when they were fried,
Which resurrected tasteless duds
From other projects she had tried.
Then she started to fry some souls
To see if that improved their taste
But then she served them in big bowls
Of Krazy Glue and Elmer's Paste!
"Well that was bollocks, wasn't it?"
Was what she said of the result
And was a failure she'd admit
Later on...
#God
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I don't see the face of God here...
All faith is false and all truth is faith
as if a mirror exploded and each one
chose a sliver to be his entire mirror.
as if a mirror exploded and each one
chose a sliver to be his entire mirror.
#religion
#God
#faith
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Evil Is My Name
Evil is the mind of the saints, resurrected.
666 is my name; untainted.
Alone at the top, but acquainted,
With all the suffering souls,
The evil of the bottomless pit.
Know me and know my name.
I am here for the fame.
Follow me to the promised land.
Marry me to your reign.
Our power will be seen on a world stage.
Come together
Let's multiply.
666 is my name; untainted.
Alone at the top, but acquainted,
With all the suffering souls,
The evil of the bottomless pit.
Know me and know my name.
I am here for the fame.
Follow me to the promised land.
Marry me to your reign.
Our power will be seen on a world stage.
Come together
Let's multiply.
#God
#heaven
#religion #spiritual
#religion #spiritual
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Hellion
Why did I join this team?
This group of
steeped-in-tradition,
trained-in-conformity,
blinded-by-doctrine,
very certain
old white dudes?
Because this is where you've put me.
Maybe it's where I can
do the best damage.
.
This group of
steeped-in-tradition,
trained-in-conformity,
blinded-by-doctrine,
very certain
old white dudes?
Because this is where you've put me.
Maybe it's where I can
do the best damage.
.
#courage
#religion
#God #risk
#God #risk
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Three Randomly Spiritual Haiku/Senryu Poems
Faithful Sacrifice
Requisite journey
Lifetime initiation
Baptism begins
Carnal Opinion
Verily fluent
Personal introspection
Deathly desolate
Subconscious Leaven
Internal conflict
Arrogantly persuaded
Truly underneath
Requisite journey
Lifetime initiation
Baptism begins
Carnal Opinion
Verily fluent
Personal introspection
Deathly desolate
Subconscious Leaven
Internal conflict
Arrogantly persuaded
Truly underneath
#God
#haiku
#morality
#senryu
#spiritual
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Hotel Guinevere
I
Black velveteen – Cascades of shadows.
An appearance at the door.
Such a world to explore.
The strange land of my mind… Comes alive.
All you are… Is a precipice of silence.
Enjoining to my… Mountainous stance.
Spirals of days (+) nights… Adjacent
Have arrived… Here – To this moment.
Where space (+) time will take us -
Who can say – In my... Expanding focus.
I just know -
You look like a witchy woman tonight.
In that… Clothing of midnight.
And I… Need you to cast a spell on me. ...
Black velveteen – Cascades of shadows.
An appearance at the door.
Such a world to explore.
The strange land of my mind… Comes alive.
All you are… Is a precipice of silence.
Enjoining to my… Mountainous stance.
Spirals of days (+) nights… Adjacent
Have arrived… Here – To this moment.
Where space (+) time will take us -
Who can say – In my... Expanding focus.
I just know -
You look like a witchy woman tonight.
In that… Clothing of midnight.
And I… Need you to cast a spell on me. ...
#God
#angels
#aliens #witches
#aliens #witches
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Heavens to Expensive That's Why I'm Refinancing in Hell

#dark
#God
#devil
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