Poems About God by Top Critiquers
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Poems about god by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Kiss Them Goodbye
#violence
#death
#school
#fire
#God
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Father
Father, you sent the songs that soothe my synapses
I will only understand your orders
you are the air the matter I am made of
lead me not into temptation meaning help me avoid it
my faith will not falter and if does pick me up
you have a destined path for me
set aside to be your instrument of truth
I am deeply sad
I am told I'm crazy again
I've been stalked by who knows Father...only you know
what deeds are done in the dank
I have reaped pure pain
if on the day of the rebellion I was unfaithful
I hope you will turn...
I will only understand your orders
you are the air the matter I am made of
lead me not into temptation meaning help me avoid it
my faith will not falter and if does pick me up
you have a destined path for me
set aside to be your instrument of truth
I am deeply sad
I am told I'm crazy again
I've been stalked by who knows Father...only you know
what deeds are done in the dank
I have reaped pure pain
if on the day of the rebellion I was unfaithful
I hope you will turn...
#God
#angels
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I FOUND SOMEONE
Who is S/He that loves me so?
Who treats me just right
Some people really wanna know.
How did we find one another?
Just how did it come to be
That I have found Someone
Who loves me unconditionally.
I truly never thought would arrive
That I'd find this Special Someone
But, S/He came into my life.
A person who was truly unknown
S/He told me stories, their strife.
And began loving me true
I in turn grew to like them too.
We became friends from the start
And as we grew closer and...
Who treats me just right
Some people really wanna know.
How did we find one another?
Just how did it come to be
That I have found Someone
Who loves me unconditionally.
I truly never thought would arrive
That I'd find this Special Someone
But, S/He came into my life.
A person who was truly unknown
S/He told me stories, their strife.
And began loving me true
I in turn grew to like them too.
We became friends from the start
And as we grew closer and...
#love
#hope
#God
#gratitude
#admiration
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God et all
I was taught there is a God
I wasn't taught how to believe
So when people preach
I turn off
Things have happened where I could believe
Yet they could be coincidence
I believe in the power of prayer
The recipient doesn't matter
Often I say it's to my toaster
Sometimes I pray in the shower
I'm careful whom I say that to....
I wasn't taught how to believe
So when people preach
I turn off
Things have happened where I could believe
Yet they could be coincidence
I believe in the power of prayer
The recipient doesn't matter
Often I say it's to my toaster
Sometimes I pray in the shower
I'm careful whom I say that to....
#religion
#God
#faith
#honesty
#PowerOfWords
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THE SEVEN DAYS OF CREATION
See Genesis Chapters 1 and 2 verses 1-7.
On day one God made day light
And the darkness He called "night".
On the second day He made the sky
Parting sea from rain clouds with space dry.
The first plants grew on day three,
When He raised dry land from the sea.
The moon, stars and sun He made on day four
To light skies above, behind and before.
Birds, water beasts, came alive
By His hand on day five.
Land animals, then man, He made on the sixth day,
Completing earth and heavens in their vast array.
Seeing all...
On day one God made day light
And the darkness He called "night".
On the second day He made the sky
Parting sea from rain clouds with space dry.
The first plants grew on day three,
When He raised dry land from the sea.
The moon, stars and sun He made on day four
To light skies above, behind and before.
Birds, water beasts, came alive
By His hand on day five.
Land animals, then man, He made on the sixth day,
Completing earth and heavens in their vast array.
Seeing all...
#nature
#God
#spiritual #rhyming
#spiritual #rhyming
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Gunther's Point
Follow me to Gunther's Point
Where journey begins
Jump into your heart
Where it may lead you
to the Vera Curse
Where Creation begins
To where the truth is lost
Souls are reborn
Where journey begins
Jump into your heart
Where it may lead you
to the Vera Curse
Where Creation begins
To where the truth is lost
Souls are reborn
#love
#inspirational
#God
#rebirth
#curse
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Snack Immemorial
The endless Eon Potato
Was the timeless tuber of God
And when served with Orvieto
Received an approving nod...
For God enjoyed wine with spuds,
Although mostly when they were fried,
Which resurrected tasteless duds
From other projects she had tried.
Then she started to fry some souls
To see if that improved their taste
But then she served them in big bowls
Of Krazy Glue and Elmer's Paste!
"Well that was bollocks, wasn't it?"
Was what she said of the result
And was a failure she'd admit
Later on...
Was the timeless tuber of God
And when served with Orvieto
Received an approving nod...
For God enjoyed wine with spuds,
Although mostly when they were fried,
Which resurrected tasteless duds
From other projects she had tried.
Then she started to fry some souls
To see if that improved their taste
But then she served them in big bowls
Of Krazy Glue and Elmer's Paste!
"Well that was bollocks, wasn't it?"
Was what she said of the result
And was a failure she'd admit
Later on...
#God
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Poem
tongues of moonlight
lay across the damp
grass in my
backyard
like God's mouth forebiding Eve
the first bit of that
succulent
apple
this is the way we
will save the
world
no wonder I hate
the smell of
night
where the wings of
angels taste
of cotton
candy
and their eyes
rage with
sodomy
lay across the damp
grass in my
backyard
like God's mouth forebiding Eve
the first bit of that
succulent
apple
this is the way we
will save the
world
no wonder I hate
the smell of
night
where the wings of
angels taste
of cotton
candy
and their eyes
rage with
sodomy
#God
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The Lost Feline Who Made A Deal With The Devil
Devil would you give me the grace to kill the illumination of the light
I do not think I can do that kitty, God owns the moon, the stars, the Sun, morning and the night
Devil can you make me intelligent in the throes of Christianity or the sacred spiritual chants of Buddhology to mean something of importance, of great
Hum… I can’t, only God has the power in his hands to anticipate the calm seas, the roaring storms, which I have no power to even give you words to articulate, or warm blood to circulate
Devil I am...
I do not think I can do that kitty, God owns the moon, the stars, the Sun, morning and the night
Devil can you make me intelligent in the throes of Christianity or the sacred spiritual chants of Buddhology to mean something of importance, of great
Hum… I can’t, only God has the power in his hands to anticipate the calm seas, the roaring storms, which I have no power to even give you words to articulate, or warm blood to circulate
Devil I am...
#God
#devil
#Buddhist
#spiritual
#morality
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Re-Turn...To Eden
Rain..poured down
Sensing there was a draught
I needed to somehow About Face
Find a way to retrace my steps
Sift through muddied Sand
Recover lost Bones
Hone and Honor God's gifts
Upset the Apple-cart
As a Dust-Crafted Man Created
Apart from.....
Sensing there was a draught
I needed to somehow About Face
Find a way to retrace my steps
Sift through muddied Sand
Recover lost Bones
Hone and Honor God's gifts
Upset the Apple-cart
As a Dust-Crafted Man Created
Apart from.....
#LifeStruggles
#God
#learning
#philosophical
#prayer
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I thank the God who smiled
#love
#dreams
#God
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Closer To You
Someday, I'm gonna rise
With no tears in my eyes
When will the pain go away
Will today be the day
I keep on searching
For anyone that cares
Then my heart turns so cold
And I don't want to pray
The answer is simple
And I know what to do
I just pray anyway
To get closer to you
With no tears in my eyes
When will the pain go away
Will today be the day
I keep on searching
For anyone that cares
Then my heart turns so cold
And I don't want to pray
The answer is simple
And I know what to do
I just pray anyway
To get closer to you
#dark
#God
#spiritual
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