Poems About God by Top Critiquers
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Poems about god by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Obeying & Violating
God told me to murder my teacher, I did
God told me to murder my priest, I did
God told me to murder my parents, I did
God told me to avoid prison, I did
God told me to commit suicide, I did
I think in my next life I'll worship Satan
God told me to murder my priest, I did
God told me to murder my parents, I did
God told me to avoid prison, I did
God told me to commit suicide, I did
I think in my next life I'll worship Satan
#murder
#God
#devil #MentalHealth
#devil #MentalHealth
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Crazy Obsession I Know
you got me looking crazy
turning my head for you again
after eons of rejection
yes, I remember you out there in the void
how I scream in pain
we fought for the light
my art is forgetting
Mercy is, in not remembering
now here I am and you have my full attention
I am forced to look
to know you again
world in and out
rejected and left behind in the destruction of your design
with the whispered words left dancing in my head
you're still not fit a companion for my caliber and nature
I was busy...
turning my head for you again
after eons of rejection
yes, I remember you out there in the void
how I scream in pain
we fought for the light
my art is forgetting
Mercy is, in not remembering
now here I am and you have my full attention
I am forced to look
to know you again
world in and out
rejected and left behind in the destruction of your design
with the whispered words left dancing in my head
you're still not fit a companion for my caliber and nature
I was busy...
#love
#BDSM
#God #vampires
#God #vampires
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I FOUND SOMEONE
Who is S/He that loves me so?
Who treats me just right
Some people really wanna know.
How did we find one another?
Just how did it come to be
That I have found Someone
Who loves me unconditionally.
I truly never thought would arrive
That I'd find this Special Someone
But, S/He came into my life.
A person who was truly unknown
S/He told me stories, their strife.
And began loving me true
I in turn grew to like them too.
We became friends from the start
And as we grew closer and...
Who treats me just right
Some people really wanna know.
How did we find one another?
Just how did it come to be
That I have found Someone
Who loves me unconditionally.
I truly never thought would arrive
That I'd find this Special Someone
But, S/He came into my life.
A person who was truly unknown
S/He told me stories, their strife.
And began loving me true
I in turn grew to like them too.
We became friends from the start
And as we grew closer and...
#love
#hope
#God
#gratitude
#admiration
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THE SEVEN DAYS OF CREATION
See Genesis Chapters 1 and 2 verses 1-7.
On day one God made day light
And the darkness He called "night".
On the second day He made the sky
Parting sea from rain clouds with space dry.
The first plants grew on day three,
When He raised dry land from the sea.
The moon, stars and sun He made on day four
To light skies above, behind and before.
Birds, water beasts, came alive
By His hand on day five.
Land animals, then man, He made on the sixth day,
Completing earth and heavens in their vast array.
Seeing all...
On day one God made day light
And the darkness He called "night".
On the second day He made the sky
Parting sea from rain clouds with space dry.
The first plants grew on day three,
When He raised dry land from the sea.
The moon, stars and sun He made on day four
To light skies above, behind and before.
Birds, water beasts, came alive
By His hand on day five.
Land animals, then man, He made on the sixth day,
Completing earth and heavens in their vast array.
Seeing all...
#nature
#God
#spiritual #rhyming
#spiritual #rhyming
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God et all
I was taught there is a God
I wasn't taught how to believe
So when people preach
I turn off
Things have happened where I could believe
Yet they could be coincidence
I believe in the power of prayer
The recipient doesn't matter
Often I say it's to my toaster
Sometimes I pray in the shower
I'm careful whom I say that to....
I wasn't taught how to believe
So when people preach
I turn off
Things have happened where I could believe
Yet they could be coincidence
I believe in the power of prayer
The recipient doesn't matter
Often I say it's to my toaster
Sometimes I pray in the shower
I'm careful whom I say that to....
#religion
#God
#faith
#honesty
#PowerOfWords
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Gunther's Point
Follow me to Gunther's Point
Where journey begins
Jump into your heart
Where it may lead you
to the Vera Curse
Where Creation begins
To where the truth is lost
Souls are reborn
Where journey begins
Jump into your heart
Where it may lead you
to the Vera Curse
Where Creation begins
To where the truth is lost
Souls are reborn
#love
#inspirational
#God
#rebirth
#curse
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Snack Immemorial
The endless Eon Potato
Was the timeless tuber of God
And when served with Orvieto
Received an approving nod...
For God enjoyed wine with spuds,
Although mostly when they were fried,
Which resurrected tasteless duds
From other projects she had tried.
Then she started to fry some souls
To see if that improved their taste
But then she served them in big bowls
Of Krazy Glue and Elmer's Paste!
"Well that was bollocks, wasn't it?"
Was what she said of the result
And was a failure she'd admit
Later on...
Was the timeless tuber of God
And when served with Orvieto
Received an approving nod...
For God enjoyed wine with spuds,
Although mostly when they were fried,
Which resurrected tasteless duds
From other projects she had tried.
Then she started to fry some souls
To see if that improved their taste
But then she served them in big bowls
Of Krazy Glue and Elmer's Paste!
"Well that was bollocks, wasn't it?"
Was what she said of the result
And was a failure she'd admit
Later on...
#God
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Poem
tongues of moonlight
lay across the damp
grass in my
backyard
like God's mouth forebiding Eve
the first bit of that
succulent
apple
this is the way we
will save the
world
no wonder I hate
the smell of
night
where the wings of
angels taste
of cotton
candy
and their eyes
rage with
sodomy
lay across the damp
grass in my
backyard
like God's mouth forebiding Eve
the first bit of that
succulent
apple
this is the way we
will save the
world
no wonder I hate
the smell of
night
where the wings of
angels taste
of cotton
candy
and their eyes
rage with
sodomy
#God
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Death Wish Kiss
Born from the rib of my brother
Didn't ask to be the starter sister
Looking over my shoulder
Lost eyes searching for my mother
Guess it wasn't meant to be
Long past time to be set free
So I headed toward the Knowledge Tree
The slithering snake was irrelevant
Didn't feel right being a servant
Needing to make my own mistakes
In the form of a shiny ruby red apple
Juicy and plump ready for the pluck
My sharp teeth wished me luck
As I took my first bite of rebellion
And...
Didn't ask to be the starter sister
Looking over my shoulder
Lost eyes searching for my mother
Guess it wasn't meant to be
Long past time to be set free
So I headed toward the Knowledge Tree
The slithering snake was irrelevant
Didn't feel right being a servant
Needing to make my own mistakes
In the form of a shiny ruby red apple
Juicy and plump ready for the pluck
My sharp teeth wished me luck
As I took my first bite of rebellion
And...
#women
#God
#morality
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The Lost Feline Who Made A Deal With The Devil
Devil would you give me the grace to kill the illumination of the light
I do not think I can do that kitty, God owns the moon, the stars, the Sun, morning and the night
Devil can you make me intelligent in the throes of Christianity or the sacred spiritual chants of Buddhology to mean something of importance, of great
Hum… I can’t, only God has the power in his hands to anticipate the calm seas, the roaring storms, which I have no power to even give you words to articulate, or warm blood to circulate
Devil I am...
I do not think I can do that kitty, God owns the moon, the stars, the Sun, morning and the night
Devil can you make me intelligent in the throes of Christianity or the sacred spiritual chants of Buddhology to mean something of importance, of great
Hum… I can’t, only God has the power in his hands to anticipate the calm seas, the roaring storms, which I have no power to even give you words to articulate, or warm blood to circulate
Devil I am...
#God
#devil
#Buddhist
#spiritual
#morality
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God’s Fingerprint
God’s Fingerprint
On the Sistine, Michaelangelo painted God’s fingered thrust
giving with love the gift of Life to Man fresh from dust.
First breath, beneath the heavens! Second breath, on land and sea!
From then ‘til now, a thrusted finger sculpts Man’s destiny.
Not long ago, Instinct was his primal need and guide
when smells repelled, fires frightened and lightning made him hide
and stars up in the heavens were just punctures in the night
while reflections in the water were the ghosts he could not fight.
Then lightning struck...
On the Sistine, Michaelangelo painted God’s fingered thrust
giving with love the gift of Life to Man fresh from dust.
First breath, beneath the heavens! Second breath, on land and sea!
From then ‘til now, a thrusted finger sculpts Man’s destiny.
Not long ago, Instinct was his primal need and guide
when smells repelled, fires frightened and lightning made him hide
and stars up in the heavens were just punctures in the night
while reflections in the water were the ghosts he could not fight.
Then lightning struck...
#religion
#God
#faith
#fate
#spiritual
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I thank the God who smiled
#love
#dreams
#God
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