Poems About God Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about god seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Eru The Ilúvatar
Father Sabaoth loved from the Sky,
transcendental empty Creation.
Directing the circle's Cube, Alive,
he had In Thought a Preparation.
Why should he shape it all,
gifting alone lack of meaning?
His sphere of action is the Law.
"Elohim!" he uttered, winning.
The Flame Imperishable ignited,
at the centre of Netzach's membrane,
The Makers of Form He United,
Life's Outpouring Nexus reigned.
The Creator and Sustainer of Perfection,
Hierarch of The Elohim The Twelve,
Divine Directors...
transcendental empty Creation.
Directing the circle's Cube, Alive,
he had In Thought a Preparation.
Why should he shape it all,
gifting alone lack of meaning?
His sphere of action is the Law.
"Elohim!" he uttered, winning.
The Flame Imperishable ignited,
at the centre of Netzach's membrane,
The Makers of Form He United,
Life's Outpouring Nexus reigned.
The Creator and Sustainer of Perfection,
Hierarch of The Elohim The Twelve,
Divine Directors...
#God
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
#mystery
#JRRTolkien
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Crazy Obsession I Know
you got me looking crazy
turning my head for you again
after eons of rejection
yes, I remember you out there in the void
how I scream in pain
we fought for the light
my art is forgetting
Mercy is, in not remembering
now here I am and you have my full attention
I am forced to look
to know you again
world in and out
rejected and left behind in the destruction of your design
with the whispered words left dancing in my head
you're still not fit a companion for my caliber and nature
I was busy...
turning my head for you again
after eons of rejection
yes, I remember you out there in the void
how I scream in pain
we fought for the light
my art is forgetting
Mercy is, in not remembering
now here I am and you have my full attention
I am forced to look
to know you again
world in and out
rejected and left behind in the destruction of your design
with the whispered words left dancing in my head
you're still not fit a companion for my caliber and nature
I was busy...
#love
#BDSM
#God #vampires
#God #vampires
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Obeying & Violating
God told me to murder my teacher, I did
God told me to murder my priest, I did
God told me to murder my parents, I did
God told me to avoid prison, I did
God told me to commit suicide, I did
I think in my next life I'll worship Satan
God told me to murder my priest, I did
God told me to murder my parents, I did
God told me to avoid prison, I did
God told me to commit suicide, I did
I think in my next life I'll worship Satan
#murder
#God
#devil #MentalHealth
#devil #MentalHealth
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Enhancement
On the full moon night, in the blood red shore,
The death of the disgrace brought enhancement,
A divine life took birth in the womb of a whore,
All ordinaries got sabotaged for atonement.
In the hours of the blind owls sages caved in,
And their souls alighted in pursuit of their spirits,
Humanity saved the powerhouse from sin,
Heavy downpours of godliness flourished.
No! It was not the wizard of Oz, because,
It was unborn and much awaited enhancement,
A titanic treasure covered with a human pause,
It is time to unfold from...
The death of the disgrace brought enhancement,
A divine life took birth in the womb of a whore,
All ordinaries got sabotaged for atonement.
In the hours of the blind owls sages caved in,
And their souls alighted in pursuit of their spirits,
Humanity saved the powerhouse from sin,
Heavy downpours of godliness flourished.
No! It was not the wizard of Oz, because,
It was unborn and much awaited enhancement,
A titanic treasure covered with a human pause,
It is time to unfold from...
#God
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The man across the hall
Dear Father God In Heaven, yes its only me again.. asking for forgiveness for I know that I have sinned.
I just need a moment , I don't mean to bother you. I know your time is precious and you've more important things to do .
Lord I know you know that little man who lives across the hall...
He told me thats he resting while he's waiting for your call.
And that just touched my heart so deep , it was so sweet and sad.
And I think of all the many years that old man must have had.
Hes one of my favorites, up there where my mom stays...
And I always...
I just need a moment , I don't mean to bother you. I know your time is precious and you've more important things to do .
Lord I know you know that little man who lives across the hall...
He told me thats he resting while he's waiting for your call.
And that just touched my heart so deep , it was so sweet and sad.
And I think of all the many years that old man must have had.
Hes one of my favorites, up there where my mom stays...
And I always...
#God
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What's In A Name
You call me Satan
name me Lucifer
make me the Devil
you practice war and pain
so many have been slaughtered
so many more will be slain
oppression and abuse
religion is your excuse
you cower and flee
is this why you created god?
is this why you created me?
name me Lucifer
make me the Devil
you practice war and pain
so many have been slaughtered
so many more will be slain
oppression and abuse
religion is your excuse
you cower and flee
is this why you created god?
is this why you created me?
#dark
#evil
#religion
#God
#rhyming
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Bride
I secret my sunshine away
the cobwebs on my soul catch the light dazzling inside the deep shadows
brooding on thoughts best left undisturbed
I sink into deeper thought
garnering wisdom from philosophers of tragedy
it is errant to think my life is squandered
I was sent here to gain perspective
in my sadness, I reflect on the parables I've learned
the knowledge I've gained while suffering
how would I know love any other way
it is not magic to create a companion
it takes time and patience
sorrow a flavor for the...
the cobwebs on my soul catch the light dazzling inside the deep shadows
brooding on thoughts best left undisturbed
I sink into deeper thought
garnering wisdom from philosophers of tragedy
it is errant to think my life is squandered
I was sent here to gain perspective
in my sadness, I reflect on the parables I've learned
the knowledge I've gained while suffering
how would I know love any other way
it is not magic to create a companion
it takes time and patience
sorrow a flavor for the...
#love
#God
#spiritual
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Time's Up
In a blind rage of all or nothing
the ghost of our God stole in
to stare at the fools in the mirror
and ask them what they'd seen
Our finest years grew heartless
as we became dead to His call
sorry lives controlled by greed
such sad existence with no heart at all
So what message would He offer
to our soulless desert of pain
where twilight covers the sun
through clouds of acid rain
If I was God I'd tell the truth
knowing humans cannot change
Our design was always flawed
and Earth must start again
the ghost of our God stole in
to stare at the fools in the mirror
and ask them what they'd seen
Our finest years grew heartless
as we became dead to His call
sorry lives controlled by greed
such sad existence with no heart at all
So what message would He offer
to our soulless desert of pain
where twilight covers the sun
through clouds of acid rain
If I was God I'd tell the truth
knowing humans cannot change
Our design was always flawed
and Earth must start again
#God
#humankind
#unicorns #greed
#unicorns #greed
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OUT IN THE SEA
The storms are rising
Skies and clouds are compromising
So many plants will be dying
Everyone's running, everyone is hiding
The birds in bundles start flying ...
Could this be like Noah's days of surviving?
But You hear mermaid sirens
They sound beautiful on the evening horizon
There's no doubt the oceans shining
So I take out my diary and start writing
Out in the sea
Where it's just you and me
It's so dark not much you can see
Out in the sea
Where...
Skies and clouds are compromising
So many plants will be dying
Everyone's running, everyone is hiding
The birds in bundles start flying ...
Could this be like Noah's days of surviving?
But You hear mermaid sirens
They sound beautiful on the evening horizon
There's no doubt the oceans shining
So I take out my diary and start writing
Out in the sea
Where it's just you and me
It's so dark not much you can see
Out in the sea
Where...
#sea
#rain
#storm
#wind
#God
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Attention all shoppers....
Okay here we go, let us speak about the white elephants in the game of life.
Pay close attention to what I have to say to you tonight, it may relate to you.
Do you ever feel picked on, maybe teased or a sense of self worthlessness for no reason at all? Me, too!
Have you ever wondered what was making you feel this way?
Well I’m here today to tell you my theory on the subject, it’s just my opinion,
Take it anyway you want to, but remember… you choose to keep reading this, I didn’t force this on you!
If you disagree with my...
Pay close attention to what I have to say to you tonight, it may relate to you.
Do you ever feel picked on, maybe teased or a sense of self worthlessness for no reason at all? Me, too!
Have you ever wondered what was making you feel this way?
Well I’m here today to tell you my theory on the subject, it’s just my opinion,
Take it anyway you want to, but remember… you choose to keep reading this, I didn’t force this on you!
If you disagree with my...
#God
#devil
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Awkward God
feeling the ugliness depart I am relieved
anger makes me feel worthless and it burns
it festers just under the surface
it corrupts my thinking and makes me jealous
I don't know the purity of this feeling
it makes me feel awful
it seems like a wasted emotion
so why is it I deal with it so often?
happy enough to just go along
then someone treats me badly and then another
I feel like the universe's whipping post
if I am to blame to what end?
there must be some flaw
that causes people to...
anger makes me feel worthless and it burns
it festers just under the surface
it corrupts my thinking and makes me jealous
I don't know the purity of this feeling
it makes me feel awful
it seems like a wasted emotion
so why is it I deal with it so often?
happy enough to just go along
then someone treats me badly and then another
I feel like the universe's whipping post
if I am to blame to what end?
there must be some flaw
that causes people to...
#anger
#God
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BEAUTE OF NATURE
The earths beauty that riches in Gods touch
Darknes that laid in the lords art
Light brought colors to everything and such
Plants and Animals he added to show his heavenly heart
Adam and Eve he implemented with mass trust
Beaute of nature " The Father" created from far.
Darknes that laid in the lords art
Light brought colors to everything and such
Plants and Animals he added to show his heavenly heart
Adam and Eve he implemented with mass trust
Beaute of nature " The Father" created from far.
#beauty
#earth
#animals
#nature
#God
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