Poems About God Seeking Honest Critique
#God
Poems about god seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
MalcolmG
Poem Published
9th Nov 2024 3:35pm
9th Nov 2024 3:35pm
The Fallen Church
A tempest stirs, a grievous wave,
My heart shatters for those left to crave,
For trust betrayed, for lives undone,
By men who once stood, now they run.
The sacred name of Christ now smeared,
His church defiled, by those once revered,
Their hearts corrupted, their hands unclean,
They sought the lusts that could not be seen.
The catalogue of ruin grows with haste,
A parade of leaders who've lost their grace,
Apostates in shadows, hearts turned to stone,
From faith once vibrant, now wholly alone.
An...
My heart shatters for those left to crave,
For trust betrayed, for lives undone,
By men who once stood, now they run.
The sacred name of Christ now smeared,
His church defiled, by those once revered,
Their hearts corrupted, their hands unclean,
They sought the lusts that could not be seen.
The catalogue of ruin grows with haste,
A parade of leaders who've lost their grace,
Apostates in shadows, hearts turned to stone,
From faith once vibrant, now wholly alone.
An...
#atheism
#God
#religion
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MalcolmG
Poem Published
8th Nov 2024 00:53am
8th Nov 2024 00:53am
The Seventh Day Picnic
On the seventh day, God breathed out, tired, laid back beneath a shade tree, quiet an inspired he said "Let there be a day," then exhaled and thought to himself ,a day, "for wine and bread and mortal folk."
He summoned a handful from dust and clay,
spread blankets thick on the earth's cool day.
The people settled and sipped their wine, ate their bread although there wasn't time, curious, bold, their questions fine.
One then asked ,"Do you eat where light wain,or does heaven’s glow mask hunger’s strain?" If a...
He summoned a handful from dust and clay,
spread blankets thick on the earth's cool day.
The people settled and sipped their wine, ate their bread although there wasn't time, curious, bold, their questions fine.
One then asked ,"Do you eat where light wain,or does heaven’s glow mask hunger’s strain?" If a...
#God
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Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
5th Nov 2024 2:21pm
5th Nov 2024 2:21pm
Creepy Creator
We flit and fly
Flutter, then die.
Does a Creator gain pleasure
from watching us?
Flutter, then die.
Does a Creator gain pleasure
from watching us?
#God
#sex
192 reads
3 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
5th Nov 2024 2:20am
5th Nov 2024 2:20am
Letters To Heaven
I wrote you a letter, I'm wondering why,
I’m left with no answer, no simple reply,
No voice from heaven no voice from the sky. Surely you haven't left ,O God did you die?
Thought you'd ease this burden we all have to bear, but it’s quiet down here, are you actually there?
We live in our fears, tears dripping on faces, People starving, the whole human races is, suffering and homeless, year after year, please give me sign that you can actually hear.
Did you plan this...
I’m left with no answer, no simple reply,
No voice from heaven no voice from the sky. Surely you haven't left ,O God did you die?
Thought you'd ease this burden we all have to bear, but it’s quiet down here, are you actually there?
We live in our fears, tears dripping on faces, People starving, the whole human races is, suffering and homeless, year after year, please give me sign that you can actually hear.
Did you plan this...
#atheism
#devil
#God
#religion
#TruthOfLife
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ThePalestRider
Poem Published
3rd Nov 2024 1:05am
3rd Nov 2024 1:05am
Mysteries of The Ascension
High in the heavens, past earth's dim sight
Where clouds and stars embrace the light
The Lord arose, in holy guise
Beyond the reach of mortal eyes
What mystery binds His upward way
As angels sing and watch and pray?
What secrets lie in heaven’s span
Unknown to dust-bound heart of man?
The stones bear witness, cold and clear
To steps that vanish from us here
While faith and wonder rise above
To realms unseen, in perfect love
Did angels lift His form on high
Or light itself dissolve the sky?
Did winds...
Where clouds and stars embrace the light
The Lord arose, in holy guise
Beyond the reach of mortal eyes
What mystery binds His upward way
As angels sing and watch and pray?
What secrets lie in heaven’s span
Unknown to dust-bound heart of man?
The stones bear witness, cold and clear
To steps that vanish from us here
While faith and wonder rise above
To realms unseen, in perfect love
Did angels lift His form on high
Or light itself dissolve the sky?
Did winds...
#angels
#Christian
#God
#heaven
#religion
82 reads
4 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
30th Oct 2024 8:22pm
30th Oct 2024 8:22pm
In the Shadows of He
In the dim light of ancient halls,
He whispers softly,
We hear his calls,
a friend clothed in shadows,
in smoke and fire they say,
keeping the church alive,
a warm embrace for cold fears,
preaching hellfire and brimstone,
a spire of dread pointing skyward,
where the devil dances,
a charred marionette on strings of sin.
Oh, false doctrines rise like smoke,
a specter, a finger-wagging savior,
teaching dagger and cloak,
“Beware! The adversary lurks,”
they warn with trembling lips,
“He,...
He whispers softly,
We hear his calls,
a friend clothed in shadows,
in smoke and fire they say,
keeping the church alive,
a warm embrace for cold fears,
preaching hellfire and brimstone,
a spire of dread pointing skyward,
where the devil dances,
a charred marionette on strings of sin.
Oh, false doctrines rise like smoke,
a specter, a finger-wagging savior,
teaching dagger and cloak,
“Beware! The adversary lurks,”
they warn with trembling lips,
“He,...
#devil
#God
#magic
#mythology
#religion
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MalcolmG
Poem Published
30th Oct 2024 10:40am
30th Oct 2024 10:40am
Im Your God
I’m Your God
In the shade of moon, where shadows dwell,
I'll weave a tale of your self-made hell.
Mind pulses with dread, despair's gentle call,
Leading you softly as your barriers fall.
Taste me, discover the threads that rewind,
Your heart locked in darkness, no light to shine.
Come, crawl faster, with blind faith you tread,
Life slips through your fingers, as it hangs by a thread.
I’m your God, tugging at every edge,
Warping perception, lost in the hedge.
Blinded by whispers that cloud your sight,...
In the shade of moon, where shadows dwell,
I'll weave a tale of your self-made hell.
Mind pulses with dread, despair's gentle call,
Leading you softly as your barriers fall.
Taste me, discover the threads that rewind,
Your heart locked in darkness, no light to shine.
Come, crawl faster, with blind faith you tread,
Life slips through your fingers, as it hangs by a thread.
I’m your God, tugging at every edge,
Warping perception, lost in the hedge.
Blinded by whispers that cloud your sight,...
#dark
#devil
#God #shadows
#God #shadows
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ThePalestRider
Poem Published
28th Oct 2024 11:42pm
28th Oct 2024 11:42pm
Liturgia
Where saints did sing
And angels sighed
Now shadows cling
Where light has died
Once, walls of gold
And domes of flame
Held prayers untold
In Heaven’s name
But silent now
These arches weep
In solemn vow
In hollowed sleep
The Theotokos
In sorrow’s grace
Her gaze bestows
Upon this place
O voices lost
Return once more
Bring back the cost
Of faith and lore
For I would rise
In hymn and light
To pierce the skies
And end this night
And angels sighed
Now shadows cling
Where light has died
Once, walls of gold
And domes of flame
Held prayers untold
In Heaven’s name
But silent now
These arches weep
In solemn vow
In hollowed sleep
The Theotokos
In sorrow’s grace
Her gaze bestows
Upon this place
O voices lost
Return once more
Bring back the cost
Of faith and lore
For I would rise
In hymn and light
To pierce the skies
And end this night
#Christian
#God
#heaven
#kindness
#religion
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LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
28th Oct 2024 00:56am
28th Oct 2024 00:56am
Fire and Light
We're but a drop in the ocean, a grain of sand,
But in this moment, we’re a comet's arc.
What does the Maker think of our tangled flesh?
Do the gods pause from their heavenly script
To smile at the laughter shared by two human lovers?
We’ll have years for slumber between dirt and stone.
The dust beneath us will soon claim our bones.
For these moments our breaths mingle
And we are the universe.
Let us ride this rhythm of this moment’s delight,
Though we are dying and all of creation cares not
For our pleasure...
But in this moment, we’re a comet's arc.
What does the Maker think of our tangled flesh?
Do the gods pause from their heavenly script
To smile at the laughter shared by two human lovers?
We’ll have years for slumber between dirt and stone.
The dust beneath us will soon claim our bones.
For these moments our breaths mingle
And we are the universe.
Let us ride this rhythm of this moment’s delight,
Though we are dying and all of creation cares not
For our pleasure...
#God
#love
#sex
211 reads
2 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
26th Oct 2024 10:50pm
26th Oct 2024 10:50pm
Did God Really Create People As LGBTQ?
Many LGBTQ people assert that God created them the way they are.
Let us analyse the assertion to find out whether it is true or false.
God created a human being with a physical structure and a gender.
Can we say the same thing about the perverted mind and action of a person?
Did the true God create a person to think and act in a specific way?
If this were true, we could say God created Hitler as a murderer.
God did not put lustful feelings for the same sex in the mind of a person.
The things that people think and do are not the...
Let us analyse the assertion to find out whether it is true or false.
God created a human being with a physical structure and a gender.
Can we say the same thing about the perverted mind and action of a person?
Did the true God create a person to think and act in a specific way?
If this were true, we could say God created Hitler as a murderer.
God did not put lustful feelings for the same sex in the mind of a person.
The things that people think and do are not the...
#God
#LGBT
#men
#morality
#women
123 reads
3 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
24th Oct 2024 2:08pm
24th Oct 2024 2:08pm
Live it don’t do it
Just live it just don’t do it
Love it every moment
Live every second
Believe it even when you can’t believe
For it rains goodness to all around you
Vibe in a eye blink
Soothes something so deep
Maybe not a soul
Electric Jesus
I’m now a disciple
Curses be banished
Positives of belief
Yearn for the Sabbath
Go to church
I am cleansed of my latest sins
Living in my own destiny
Want to live on in perpetuity
...
Love it every moment
Live every second
Believe it even when you can’t believe
For it rains goodness to all around you
Vibe in a eye blink
Soothes something so deep
Maybe not a soul
Electric Jesus
I’m now a disciple
Curses be banished
Positives of belief
Yearn for the Sabbath
Go to church
I am cleansed of my latest sins
Living in my own destiny
Want to live on in perpetuity
...
#God
#gratitude
#inspirational #motivational
#inspirational #motivational
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oldmanG
Poem Published
20th Oct 2024 5:11am
20th Oct 2024 5:11am
Where does it End
Where does it end
When do you know
Skip a rock across the canal
Listen for heaven
Gather up your soul
Trains rolling out
Ticket punched… time to die
People you knew say goodbye
Flowers and black suits
Go back to a time before they started shoveling
Life coursing through you
Not a thought of the grim reaper
Flip the switch to my dreams
Walking and breathing and eating and seeing
Waking and breathing and smelling and hearing
Sense of just who we are
Essence of us
No matter where you came from
When do you know
Skip a rock across the canal
Listen for heaven
Gather up your soul
Trains rolling out
Ticket punched… time to die
People you knew say goodbye
Flowers and black suits
Go back to a time before they started shoveling
Life coursing through you
Not a thought of the grim reaper
Flip the switch to my dreams
Walking and breathing and eating and seeing
Waking and breathing and smelling and hearing
Sense of just who we are
Essence of us
No matter where you came from
#death
#God
#LifeCycle #religion
#LifeCycle #religion
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