Poems About God Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about god seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Apr 2025 00:44am
14th Apr 2025 00:44am
(The Last Upper)
Jesus had a huge supper, with large amounts of uppers
Cocaine, amphetamines & methamphetamine
The aliens from our future planet came to visit him on this special day
They offered him food, drink & loads of drugs
Most disciples were upset with this and walked out
A few stayed for the debauchery
There were also punks, metal heads, hip artists and free thinkers at this gathering
Such unity, democracy, in one social gathering
The image I included here is the original Leonardo da Vinci painting that showcased what was really happening during the last...
Cocaine, amphetamines & methamphetamine
The aliens from our future planet came to visit him on this special day
They offered him food, drink & loads of drugs
Most disciples were upset with this and walked out
A few stayed for the debauchery
There were also punks, metal heads, hip artists and free thinkers at this gathering
Such unity, democracy, in one social gathering
The image I included here is the original Leonardo da Vinci painting that showcased what was really happening during the last...
#aliens
#God
#nonfiction
#scifi
#TruthOfLife
85 reads
6 Comments
Ashtal_Leb_Azure
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2025 11:28am
3rd Apr 2025 11:28am
Carol of the Creator
(Hush, hush—do not call,)
(Hush, hush—do not fall,)
(Still your breath, still your step,)
(Lest they wake and take you yet.)
They who carved the sky from ink,
Set the sun and stars to sink,
Spun the thread and wove the lines,
Wrote the names and shaped the words.
(Hush, hush—do not gaze,)
(Hush, hush—shun their praise,)
(Turn your eyes, bow your head,)
(Tread too close, you’ll join the dead.)
Words unspoken, worlds unseen,
Maps erased and hands wiped clean,
They who build and they who rend,
Minds...
(Hush, hush—do not fall,)
(Still your breath, still your step,)
(Lest they wake and take you yet.)
They who carved the sky from ink,
Set the sun and stars to sink,
Spun the thread and wove the lines,
Wrote the names and shaped the words.
(Hush, hush—do not gaze,)
(Hush, hush—shun their praise,)
(Turn your eyes, bow your head,)
(Tread too close, you’ll join the dead.)
Words unspoken, worlds unseen,
Maps erased and hands wiped clean,
They who build and they who rend,
Minds...
#death
#God
#horror
#narrative
#rhyming
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
2nd Apr 2025 9:22pm
2nd Apr 2025 9:22pm
I'm the liar
So I'm the one
Who parted the sea
And no one believed me
And I'm the one
Who walked on water
Yet no one ever seen me
So Pontius Pilate killed me
Made an example out of me
Skewered me through the limbs
In a tormenting crucifixion
Fear not my fools
For in just three days
I'll be back with you again
Like three fucking sixes
i will never go away
So I created the universe in seven days
Like three sevens
My name is god and I am a liar
Is it really that impossible to believe
That nothing can...
Who parted the sea
And no one believed me
And I'm the one
Who walked on water
Yet no one ever seen me
So Pontius Pilate killed me
Made an example out of me
Skewered me through the limbs
In a tormenting crucifixion
Fear not my fools
For in just three days
I'll be back with you again
Like three fucking sixes
i will never go away
So I created the universe in seven days
Like three sevens
My name is god and I am a liar
Is it really that impossible to believe
That nothing can...
#atheism
#devil
#God
#ignorance
#lies
120 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
1st Apr 2025 8:34pm
1st Apr 2025 8:34pm
The Almighty
Because of sin
The death
Has gained ground
in human life
The earth
has become cursed
The wickedness
spread
The payment
of sin
is
death
Only
the sacrifice
can be
wiped out
The son of god took human flesh
came to the earth and died on the cross instead of me.
He died and resurrected the third day
He is the glorious king forever.
Jesus is the way, the truth and the life
Who believes in him
will live, even though they die
in...
The death
Has gained ground
in human life
The earth
has become cursed
The wickedness
spread
The payment
of sin
is
death
Only
the sacrifice
can be
wiped out
The son of god took human flesh
came to the earth and died on the cross instead of me.
He died and resurrected the third day
He is the glorious king forever.
Jesus is the way, the truth and the life
Who believes in him
will live, even though they die
in...
#Christian
#God
#religion
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
92 reads
8 Comments
Wordsmith
Poem Published
30th Mar 2025 7:25am
30th Mar 2025 7:25am
Eid of Light and Longing
The crescent rose; the night stood still
A whispered joy; a sacred thrill
Though hunger knocked and pockets sighed
Still we prayed; still we tried
Eid has come; the air is bright
A morning bathed in golden light
Children race with laughter free
In clothes that dance like poetry
The markets roared; the butchers grinned
The scent of spice and meat within
Some feast with plenty; some with few
Yet hearts are full where faith is true
Oh Allah; let this joy remain
Let ease be poured where once was pain
Let every...
A whispered joy; a sacred thrill
Though hunger knocked and pockets sighed
Still we prayed; still we tried
Eid has come; the air is bright
A morning bathed in golden light
Children race with laughter free
In clothes that dance like poetry
The markets roared; the butchers grinned
The scent of spice and meat within
Some feast with plenty; some with few
Yet hearts are full where faith is true
Oh Allah; let this joy remain
Let ease be poured where once was pain
Let every...
#God
#happiness
#religion #spiritual
#religion #spiritual
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Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
18th Mar 2025 1:12pm
18th Mar 2025 1:12pm
Co-Creators
I kneel before him in prayer, caught in a whirlwind of
a man who stands at the pulpit of a Dallas church.
There's an energy about him that I can't escape,
nor do I wish to.
Even when my body feels weak,
I yearn for his presence.
Sleep loses its allure when
weighed against the possibility of
basking in his warmth.
I want him inside me. All the time.
I want his weight on top of me.
I want to squeeze him in deep.
The ache of this longing
is the sweetest hurt.
My arms possess a strength
born of...
a man who stands at the pulpit of a Dallas church.
There's an energy about him that I can't escape,
nor do I wish to.
Even when my body feels weak,
I yearn for his presence.
Sleep loses its allure when
weighed against the possibility of
basking in his warmth.
I want him inside me. All the time.
I want his weight on top of me.
I want to squeeze him in deep.
The ache of this longing
is the sweetest hurt.
My arms possess a strength
born of...
#God
#morality
#religion #sex
#religion #sex
166 reads
2 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
18th Mar 2025 2:08am
18th Mar 2025 2:08am
Grace
hurting shadows I weep to, my Father
this isn't who I want to be
my heart desires a cottage with flowers
where we can discuss philosophy
and the madness will retract
my soul seeing clearly
Shiny demons confuse me in the daytime
at night while sleeping I see them for what they are
Father another day is setting
let me sleep peacefully I've had a full dose
of the anger of my enemies
my soul song is for the angelic
sailing through space with you
my honesty knows you somehow
talking to you about...
this isn't who I want to be
my heart desires a cottage with flowers
where we can discuss philosophy
and the madness will retract
my soul seeing clearly
Shiny demons confuse me in the daytime
at night while sleeping I see them for what they are
Father another day is setting
let me sleep peacefully I've had a full dose
of the anger of my enemies
my soul song is for the angelic
sailing through space with you
my honesty knows you somehow
talking to you about...
#God
#gratitude
#philosophical #support
#philosophical #support
88 reads
2 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
16th Mar 2025 4:15pm
16th Mar 2025 4:15pm
~ASHTAKAALI~ The Eight Avatar-ing Kaali
https://youtu.be/xWgDYQgCKM8?feature=shared
the demon in a let loose cruel
.’Rakshasa Kora Thaandavam’
..the slaying of the demon
are the needful prayers
of these innocent helpless
masses ..
in the happening now. the
#Soorasamhaaram
the virgin snake goddess
‘Nagakanni Amman’
births the raging sacred forces
The Eight Kaali Forms .. the
‘ASHTAKAALI..’
from the eighth egg.....
the demon in a let loose cruel
.’Rakshasa Kora Thaandavam’
..the slaying of the demon
are the needful prayers
of these innocent helpless
masses ..
in the happening now. the
#Soorasamhaaram
the virgin snake goddess
‘Nagakanni Amman’
births the raging sacred forces
The Eight Kaali Forms .. the
‘ASHTAKAALI..’
from the eighth egg.....
#feminism
#God
#inspirational
#rebellion
#spiritual
147 reads
6 Comments
Wordsmith
Poem Published
8th Mar 2025 3:48pm
8th Mar 2025 3:48pm
The Most Loving and Forgiving
I disobey You; my Lord; yet You call me back to grace...
I stray a thousand times; yet You never turn Your face
I sin in the daylight; I sin in the night...
Yet You cover my shame; conceal me from sight
I took from the world; but forgot what You gave...
I walked into darkness; yet still; You forgave
I spoke what was false; I mocked what was true...
Yet Your mercy still flows; like the morning dew
I broke my word; I broke my vow...
Yet You mend my soul; then teach me how
Had it been men; they would cast me aside......
I stray a thousand times; yet You never turn Your face
I sin in the daylight; I sin in the night...
Yet You cover my shame; conceal me from sight
I took from the world; but forgot what You gave...
I walked into darkness; yet still; You forgave
I spoke what was false; I mocked what was true...
Yet Your mercy still flows; like the morning dew
I broke my word; I broke my vow...
Yet You mend my soul; then teach me how
Had it been men; they would cast me aside......
#forgiveness
#God
#gratitude
#prayer
#redemption
132 reads
2 Comments
PittinixDesigns
Poem Published
8th Mar 2025 00:15am
8th Mar 2025 00:15am
Garment Watchers
Sister G was an elderly Christian woman. She invited a man named Malcolm to a church in Old Harbour. Malcolm was not a churchgoer, but he decided to pay a visit to the church. On the second Sunday in February, he went to the church, and he wore the only suit and the only necktie that he had. Nobody said anything to him about his outfit on the first day.
The following Sunday, Malcolm wore the same suit and the same necktie to church, and nobody said anything to him about his clothes on that day either. He started to get a good feeling about the members of the...
The following Sunday, Malcolm wore the same suit and the same necktie to church, and nobody said anything to him about his clothes on that day either. He started to get a good feeling about the members of the...
#Christian
#God
#religion #shame
#religion #shame
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Gahddess_Worship
Poem Published
4th Mar 2025 3:29pm
4th Mar 2025 3:29pm
Senryu - Dieu Duet
God, through miracles
guides us when lost or confused
constantly rescued
My God sets the screen
so I can, with ease, make my shot
listen to your Coach
guides us when lost or confused
constantly rescued
My God sets the screen
so I can, with ease, make my shot
listen to your Coach
#God
#hope
#love
#spiritual
#support
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BaldyBrown
Poem Published
4th Mar 2025 9:49am
4th Mar 2025 9:49am
Lifeward
INWARD
I am the god man
I am a dreamer of dreams
Today is my fault
OUTWARD
Baldy the doorman
My door is open to you
The back yard calls us
UPWARD
Ghost in a tin can
You are taller than I think
We are that Spirit
I am the god man
I am a dreamer of dreams
Today is my fault
OUTWARD
Baldy the doorman
My door is open to you
The back yard calls us
UPWARD
Ghost in a tin can
You are taller than I think
We are that Spirit
#God
#haiku
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