Poems About First Love Seeking Friendly Advice
#FirstLove
Poems about first love seeking friendly advice. Friendly advice and comments have been requested for these poems.
two islands and dynamite
two islands and dynamite
There are two islands in the stream, one is big
and called the new island the other is small and
called the old island, the pair are linked to a bridge.
I crossed the bond to see my girlfriend, who lived
on the old island, in a shack, all houses were shacks
the fishermen lived there in suitable poverty.
I knocked on the door that was cracked, letting out
a light which was good, the steps to the house were
made off rough unfriendly stones.
Her mother opened I didn’t like her smelling of beer
she had three...
There are two islands in the stream, one is big
and called the new island the other is small and
called the old island, the pair are linked to a bridge.
I crossed the bond to see my girlfriend, who lived
on the old island, in a shack, all houses were shacks
the fishermen lived there in suitable poverty.
I knocked on the door that was cracked, letting out
a light which was good, the steps to the house were
made off rough unfriendly stones.
Her mother opened I didn’t like her smelling of beer
she had three...
#love
#forgiveness
#FallingInLove
#FirstLove
#ForbiddenLove
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Unbroken
In she walked…
Crowd froze as their eyes met
A feeling that life just begun
Feeling of being reborn
A conversation that seemed to last…
forever
A feeling so strong
An ease, an honesty
A trusted soul from a long ago
Making love felt like the first time
A feeling of unbroken
Her glue mended all the hurt
A past no longer remembered
A past that never existed
A sun rose as they lay in each other's arms
Unbroken for the first time
Unbroken now forever
Crowd froze as their eyes met
A feeling that life just begun
Feeling of being reborn
A conversation that seemed to last…
forever
A feeling so strong
An ease, an honesty
A trusted soul from a long ago
Making love felt like the first time
A feeling of unbroken
Her glue mended all the hurt
A past no longer remembered
A past that never existed
A sun rose as they lay in each other's arms
Unbroken for the first time
Unbroken now forever
#happiness
#love
#honesty #FirstLove
#honesty #FirstLove
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I Still Have You in My Childhood
Some would tell you that heaven is an eternalized experience of your favorite child memory
If that’s the case
Mine is of a summery Sunday afternoon in my birthplace’s downtown streets
On a good day—when the breeze helps carry you further down the sidewalk—
the family diner that sells 99¢ ice cream cones is only 16 bike pedals away from the florist
(the only shop in the area that sells my favorite stuffed animals)
With each rotation of my bicycle pedals
little me’s brain thinks intently
he loves me
he loves me not
he loves me
he loves me...
If that’s the case
Mine is of a summery Sunday afternoon in my birthplace’s downtown streets
On a good day—when the breeze helps carry you further down the sidewalk—
the family diner that sells 99¢ ice cream cones is only 16 bike pedals away from the florist
(the only shop in the area that sells my favorite stuffed animals)
With each rotation of my bicycle pedals
little me’s brain thinks intently
he loves me
he loves me not
he loves me
he loves me...
#happiness
#love
#childhood
#memories
#FirstLove
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Best Friends In Love
Used to be best friends
Then became special
Started treating nicely
Got little gentle
Always caring you ,
And giving comfort mental,
Saw you losing many friends
Some of them were loved once
Trying my best to stop your tears
Bringing back the best once
Got close to other
Again left the next once
I told you not to mess
Wait for the true once
We started playing dumb things
We started feeling something
But cause we were best friends
Helping for the better end
We slowly just ignored it
But when I...
Then became special
Started treating nicely
Got little gentle
Always caring you ,
And giving comfort mental,
Saw you losing many friends
Some of them were loved once
Trying my best to stop your tears
Bringing back the best once
Got close to other
Again left the next once
I told you not to mess
Wait for the true once
We started playing dumb things
We started feeling something
But cause we were best friends
Helping for the better end
We slowly just ignored it
But when I...
#love
#BestFriend
#FirstLove
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Undone
Undone
with broken wings
before you got here
I courted your ache
with Angelica Root and Juniper Berries
to feel you 1st nowhere
then somewhere
now
everywhere
within me
wondering- sentient
gracefully a compliment
my reconditioned heart
your new habitat
You
as timely manifestation
steeped in the lining of my next thought
'This new day-Come what may-We will stay together'
Not tethered-seeking release
not hateful seeking dual grief
wearing green eyes or red eyes
will...
with broken wings
before you got here
I courted your ache
with Angelica Root and Juniper Berries
to feel you 1st nowhere
then somewhere
now
everywhere
within me
wondering- sentient
gracefully a compliment
my reconditioned heart
your new habitat
You
as timely manifestation
steeped in the lining of my next thought
'This new day-Come what may-We will stay together'
Not tethered-seeking release
not hateful seeking dual grief
wearing green eyes or red eyes
will...
#TimeHeals
#FallingInLove
#FirstLove
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Like melted dark chocolate and lips of rose
(¡)
One glance
time falls away
our youth swirls memories
between us
lush flashbacks
take us there
when all we knew
burned the midnight sun.
(¡¡)
His charisma
aged like fine wine
weakening resolve
{low cleansing breaths
stealthily sucked-in}
piercing sable eyes,
were velvet warmth always burned
a melted dark chocolate gaze
unrepentantly pours over
purposely pausing
on my lips ...
One glance
time falls away
our youth swirls memories
between us
lush flashbacks
take us there
when all we knew
burned the midnight sun.
(¡¡)
His charisma
aged like fine wine
weakening resolve
{low cleansing breaths
stealthily sucked-in}
piercing sable eyes,
were velvet warmth always burned
a melted dark chocolate gaze
unrepentantly pours over
purposely pausing
on my lips ...
#lover
#memories
#aging
#redemption
#FirstLove
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The Right Person At The Wrong Time
Maybe if I'd met you later
it would've worked.
Maybe if we hadn't met so young
we'd still be.
Maybe you were the right person,
but at the wrong time.
I mean.
We were friends for so long.
But I had to fall.
Maybe,
just maybe
if we'd met later I would still have you.
But the harsh reality is,
the right person at the wrong time doesn't exist.
Because meeting someone at the wrong time
Would never stop the right person
it would've worked.
Maybe if we hadn't met so young
we'd still be.
Maybe you were the right person,
but at the wrong time.
I mean.
We were friends for so long.
But I had to fall.
Maybe,
just maybe
if we'd met later I would still have you.
But the harsh reality is,
the right person at the wrong time doesn't exist.
Because meeting someone at the wrong time
Would never stop the right person
#love
#heartbroken
#FirstLove #bittersweet
#FirstLove #bittersweet
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Need, Want, and Desire
Need, Want, and Desire
For years
I thought
I needed
Her,
But her absence
And abandoning
Behaviors
Eventually
Taught me
Through
Loneliness
That
I really
Didn't
Need her
At all.
I thought
Then
That
I wanted
Her,
But
What good
Was that
When she
Hardly knew
That I
Was alive?
Then
I discovered,
I had
Desired her,
To be near,
To know,
To be
Within
The orbit
Of...
For years
I thought
I needed
Her,
But her absence
And abandoning
Behaviors
Eventually
Taught me
Through
Loneliness
That
I really
Didn't
Need her
At all.
I thought
Then
That
I wanted
Her,
But
What good
Was that
When she
Hardly knew
That I
Was alive?
Then
I discovered,
I had
Desired her,
To be near,
To know,
To be
Within
The orbit
Of...
#FirstLove
#obsession
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the racial question
The racial question
There is a black female politician
says Portugal is not black enough her liking
I find this preposterous.
The Portuguese who settled in Africa to make
their wealth mixed freely with the local black
population, as a result, blackness seeped in
and blended with Muslim blood.
Algarve was once a Muslim province
to the extent, the Iberians have a laid back
attitude to time.
The female politician may get her to wish fulfilled
with a shrinking white population
and black people from former colonies arriving...
There is a black female politician
says Portugal is not black enough her liking
I find this preposterous.
The Portuguese who settled in Africa to make
their wealth mixed freely with the local black
population, as a result, blackness seeped in
and blended with Muslim blood.
Algarve was once a Muslim province
to the extent, the Iberians have a laid back
attitude to time.
The female politician may get her to wish fulfilled
with a shrinking white population
and black people from former colonies arriving...
#BestFriend
#friendship
#FirstLove
#ForbiddenLove
#crush
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NO, I DON'T MIND BEGGING
#relationships
#gratitude
#admiration
#FirstLove
#ForbiddenLove
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4 Comments
Love from Afar
Love from Afar
All those dreams
Of how
It'd be,
What it could
If he
And she,
Once those
Thoughts
And flutterings
Have melted
Now
In butterings.
How each
Abandoned
Moment now
Became
A wish
Of that somehow.
And now
Today
We see it then
All gone
The days
Of wanting when.
All those dreams
Of how
It'd be,
What it could
If he
And she,
Once those
Thoughts
And flutterings
Have melted
Now
In butterings.
How each
Abandoned
Moment now
Became
A wish
Of that somehow.
And now
Today
We see it then
All gone
The days
Of wanting when.
#relationships
#FirstLove
#ForbiddenLove
#crush
#obsession
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Wanderess
some think freedom is a blessing
an attribute worth possessing
until they meet a spirit truly free
living her life as a spree
weak men calling her banshee
but for me
I heard her siren's song
holding her flame to long
my heart was not that strong
her wildness was frightening
a mercurial lightening
challenging, naive and sensual
her fire was elemental
a wanderess
in a long flowing dress
following the whispered breath of fate
with destiny she'd made a date
and I...
an attribute worth possessing
until they meet a spirit truly free
living her life as a spree
weak men calling her banshee
but for me
I heard her siren's song
holding her flame to long
my heart was not that strong
her wildness was frightening
a mercurial lightening
challenging, naive and sensual
her fire was elemental
a wanderess
in a long flowing dress
following the whispered breath of fate
with destiny she'd made a date
and I...
#MyInspiration
#freedom
#FirstLove
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