Poems About Deep Underground Poetry Seeking Honest Critique
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
Asani
Poem Published
22nd Mar 2023 2:56am
22nd Mar 2023 2:56am
The Mechanic
You returned because your oil change is due and you wanna feel brand new so today I’ll be the best mechanic and crawl under you.
Your body needs a tune-up and I’m able to do just that and more, I’ll only need to give full assessment to know what to fine tune for sure.
Every model is different and yours is my favorite, from the oil type to the quality and blend.
Your manufacturers were kind to you so I’ll do the same first hand, to be sure I’ll check the guidelines because I wouldn’t want to pour the wrong oil and reduce the lubrication and overall shorten...
Your body needs a tune-up and I’m able to do just that and more, I’ll only need to give full assessment to know what to fine tune for sure.
Every model is different and yours is my favorite, from the oil type to the quality and blend.
Your manufacturers were kind to you so I’ll do the same first hand, to be sure I’ll check the guidelines because I wouldn’t want to pour the wrong oil and reduce the lubrication and overall shorten...
#cars
#travel
#art
#passion
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
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Dre_k47
AnDre James
AnDre James
Poem Published
20th Mar 2023 3:04am
20th Mar 2023 3:04am
Deep Underground Poetry
Deep Underground, my haven of verse,
A place where my poetic soul can immerse.
Where words flow freely and emotions ignite,
And fellow poets share their inner light.
With every line, I feel more alive,
A community of poets who help me thrive.
A space where creativity knows no end,
And we can all be ourselves, our truest friend.
Deep Underground, I sing your praise,
For being a platform that never betrays.
A place where I can express and create,
And find inspiration, no matter my state.
Thank you, DU, for being my...
A place where my poetic soul can immerse.
Where words flow freely and emotions ignite,
And fellow poets share their inner light.
With every line, I feel more alive,
A community of poets who help me thrive.
A space where creativity knows no end,
And we can all be ourselves, our truest friend.
Deep Underground, I sing your praise,
For being a platform that never betrays.
A place where I can express and create,
And find inspiration, no matter my state.
Thank you, DU, for being my...
#WritingPoetry
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
198 reads
2 Comments
Lowko
Jimi Tatz
Jimi Tatz
Poem Published
6th Jan 2023 7:46pm
6th Jan 2023 7:46pm
Bck Den
In the early 2000s, tings were pretty sweet.
Kids weren't cooped at home, stuck on their phone, they'd be playing in the street!
We were made of tougher stuff back then, back when I was a teen...
Play the PS2 and bun a zoot.. Yow I lived the dream!
With my Peter Andre undercut, I was quite the stud!
I would hit the town, linger around and act like quite a thug.
I always turnt up, I was the life of the party! They called me "Chink Floyd" because my mince pies were slanty.
I had a bike chain clipped to my jeans and always had my...
Kids weren't cooped at home, stuck on their phone, they'd be playing in the street!
We were made of tougher stuff back then, back when I was a teen...
Play the PS2 and bun a zoot.. Yow I lived the dream!
With my Peter Andre undercut, I was quite the stud!
I would hit the town, linger around and act like quite a thug.
I always turnt up, I was the life of the party! They called me "Chink Floyd" because my mince pies were slanty.
I had a bike chain clipped to my jeans and always had my...
#music
#freedom
#sports
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#ThrillSeeking
206 reads
0 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
27th Dec 2022 1:16pm
27th Dec 2022 1:16pm
My Niece and Her Coffee Date
So so afraid of love
Fearful of feeling
What that would mean
What would be the expectation
He just wanted coffee with you
Was that so hard
Her Uncle asked her
She pondered
Like always smiled and said
The coffee was good
Her uncle then asked about him
She looked up with a twinkle
We'll see ....
Fearful of feeling
What that would mean
What would be the expectation
He just wanted coffee with you
Was that so hard
Her Uncle asked her
She pondered
Like always smiled and said
The coffee was good
Her uncle then asked about him
She looked up with a twinkle
We'll see ....
#coffee
#WritingPoetry
#philosophical
#dating
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
442 reads
28 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
14th Dec 2022 4:28pm
14th Dec 2022 4:28pm
Leave a Frigging Comment or Don’t Bother Leaving Anything
Listen up fuck bags
It’s that time of year again
No, not the fucking holidays
You’re supposed to be a writer
So write a comment
Just leaving an RL is not acceptable
Don’t tell me you’re too busy
Most of you live on here
Got it ?
Do it !
It’s that time of year again
No, not the fucking holidays
You’re supposed to be a writer
So write a comment
Just leaving an RL is not acceptable
Don’t tell me you’re too busy
Most of you live on here
Got it ?
Do it !
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
#CallToAction
#WritingPoetry
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
557 reads
64 Comments
Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
19th Nov 2022 1:21pm
19th Nov 2022 1:21pm
Plagiarist
I feed on words like yours, and hers.
Unsated by the common truth
of my own heart, nor willing
to send even the cage
with its canary down,
I spice the stolen rhymes with sage
and play the canto clown.
Forgotten earthworm. Pity me.
I crawl across the bellies of
the unsuspecting dead,
looking for wet and pungent holes
with which to rape my way inside,
and claim a right to speak of souls.
Unsated by the common truth
of my own heart, nor willing
to send even the cage
with its canary down,
I spice the stolen rhymes with sage
and play the canto clown.
Forgotten earthworm. Pity me.
I crawl across the bellies of
the unsuspecting dead,
looking for wet and pungent holes
with which to rape my way inside,
and claim a right to speak of souls.
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
318 reads
6 Comments
Strangeways_Rob
Poem Published
19th Nov 2022 12:32pm
19th Nov 2022 12:32pm
Shot By His Own Plagiarist Gun
vizmoz
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
207 reads
12 Comments
Officialkn9ne
Poem Published
8th Oct 2022 1:54pm
8th Oct 2022 1:54pm
On My Mind
I got a lot on my mind
I got a lot on my plate
Everyone thinks I’m fine
They think I’m straight
Feeling a little less love
And a lot more hate
It’s getting harder and harder
to carry this weight
I just leave it up to God
He knows my fate
Hoping one day I make it
To heavens gate
I see the temptation
I’m not up for the bate
Praying I repent
before it’s too late
I might try and take a different route
maybe along the way I’ll see the truth
The truth of my fate
and what I’m up against ...
I got a lot on my plate
Everyone thinks I’m fine
They think I’m straight
Feeling a little less love
And a lot more hate
It’s getting harder and harder
to carry this weight
I just leave it up to God
He knows my fate
Hoping one day I make it
To heavens gate
I see the temptation
I’m not up for the bate
Praying I repent
before it’s too late
I might try and take a different route
maybe along the way I’ll see the truth
The truth of my fate
and what I’m up against ...
#religion
#Christian
#responsibility
#passion
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
334 reads
0 Comments
Nodrax_tepes
nodrax
nodrax
Poem Published
30th Sep 2022 1:49pm
30th Sep 2022 1:49pm
Suicidal verses
The voices in my head scream like Salem witches burning
A witch trial is in my head I'm assuming
I'm innocent, the voices holding me accountable for the pain I put me through
Tough and crude uncivilized like the croods
The voices in my head are awake like ghosts in a graveyard during the second coming of Jesus
The other voice is an atheists struggling to find religion in a world where the religious are suffering
I want to lock the voice in pandora's box where I keep all the other deeds that I'm ashamed of
Off that gorrila mindset that jungle...
A witch trial is in my head I'm assuming
I'm innocent, the voices holding me accountable for the pain I put me through
Tough and crude uncivilized like the croods
The voices in my head are awake like ghosts in a graveyard during the second coming of Jesus
The other voice is an atheists struggling to find religion in a world where the religious are suffering
I want to lock the voice in pandora's box where I keep all the other deeds that I'm ashamed of
Off that gorrila mindset that jungle...
#suicide
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
781 reads
1 Comment
zinnzinn
ZINNNNIZ
ZINNNNIZ
Poem Published
6th Aug 2022 1:01pm
6th Aug 2022 1:01pm
Preying on a miracle
I ain't a poet and I know it
I harnessed the uncontrollable and I can't control it
Getting down to the brassed fact in the glassed crack
A rider to die for again some more will I ever know it
I ain't a writer and I think I show it
What a hard row it is to hoe but I gotta sew it
A bad day above ground is better than any good day spent below it
Expressionism through colorful euphemisms with multi dimensional words
Can be overthought and under sought as I disclosed to console it
The stagnant bottleneck from the asymmetrical to...
I harnessed the uncontrollable and I can't control it
Getting down to the brassed fact in the glassed crack
A rider to die for again some more will I ever know it
I ain't a writer and I think I show it
What a hard row it is to hoe but I gotta sew it
A bad day above ground is better than any good day spent below it
Expressionism through colorful euphemisms with multi dimensional words
Can be overthought and under sought as I disclosed to console it
The stagnant bottleneck from the asymmetrical to...
#hope
#drugs
#TruthOfLife
#LifeCycle
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
661 reads
3 Comments
CanisInc-Untis
Poem Published
21st Jul 2022 10:30am
21st Jul 2022 10:30am
Circle Zero
there is a tradition
Of nO beginning and nO end
like a circle, an immortal
but tO draw must start and stOp sOmewhere
is also zerO
that means nOthing
the halving methOd can never reach
gateway tO the pOsitive and negative
escaping to infinity
with finiteness cO-exists
........Of everything...................
Of nO beginning and nO end
like a circle, an immortal
but tO draw must start and stOp sOmewhere
is also zerO
that means nOthing
the halving methOd can never reach
gateway tO the pOsitive and negative
escaping to infinity
with finiteness cO-exists
........Of everything...................
#spiritual
#LifeCycle
#philosophical
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#symbolism
231 reads
2 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
20th Jul 2022 9:00pm
20th Jul 2022 9:00pm
Write in me
And you say I am being too loud. That my screams will never be heard. You grab my legs pulling me towards you and then you rip off my panties. Taking them you place them in my mouth. And I stop screaming with a whimper. You say 'that's right bi***' you better listen. And you say I must be punished. I hear the crack of the whip but it does not hit me, not yet. This was a warning shot. So many more shots to come later. And I clench my teeth as I feel the burning traces on my back even before they happen. I know how well you write with the whip on my canvas. And you say you want to teach me....
#erotic
#BDSM
#MyInspiration
#WritingPoetry
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
1085 reads
62 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Deep Underground Poetry Seeking Honest Critique
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