Poems About Deep Underground Poetry Seeking Honest Critique
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Job
As I sit here, fingers rest on the keyboard, daydreaming.
My job is a job, not a career but it gives me what I want
It has it's pro's and con's
I work from home in a spare room I called my place of safety
Since 2020 this is where I reside
The room was my retreat, my sanctum
Engrossed in books, music & movies
Now job aids, spreadsheets and other dull work materials stepped in
It interferes with my interests
It suffocates my escape
Work is home and home is work
A terrible concept but it’s the truth
Gone were the days of interacting...
My job is a job, not a career but it gives me what I want
It has it's pro's and con's
I work from home in a spare room I called my place of safety
Since 2020 this is where I reside
The room was my retreat, my sanctum
Engrossed in books, music & movies
Now job aids, spreadsheets and other dull work materials stepped in
It interferes with my interests
It suffocates my escape
Work is home and home is work
A terrible concept but it’s the truth
Gone were the days of interacting...
#loneliness
#home
#boredom #DeepUndergroundPoetry
#boredom #DeepUndergroundPoetry
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Pockets full of posies
Ashes to Ashes
We all fall down
The roses was red and the violets were blue
Now the roses are dead And the violets are too
My soul can be read rhrough my true eyes of blue
To see my spirit bleeds through blue too
With a heart broken in two
Tell one little white lie and all your truths turn to dust
With your word shadowed by doubt
All your words turn to rust
Its a must you figure out
Words return as tables turn and trust will bust by our own lust
Verily Verily stop and smell the roses
Life...
We all fall down
The roses was red and the violets were blue
Now the roses are dead And the violets are too
My soul can be read rhrough my true eyes of blue
To see my spirit bleeds through blue too
With a heart broken in two
Tell one little white lie and all your truths turn to dust
With your word shadowed by doubt
All your words turn to rust
Its a must you figure out
Words return as tables turn and trust will bust by our own lust
Verily Verily stop and smell the roses
Life...
#drugs
#WritersBlock
#addiction
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#NewYear
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A thousand
A thousand fights in my head
a thousand demons wanting me dead.
With no friend in sight,
there's no choice but to stand and fight.
A thousand different places I could be,
a thousand lands I should see
but instead I choose to be
here, flirting with catastrophe.
A thousand oceans to cover
a thousand women to call my lover
there's no place like home they say
but still I can't seem to find my way.
A thousand ways to die in this mess
a thousand different ways to feel the stress.
Everyone needs someone to call...
a thousand demons wanting me dead.
With no friend in sight,
there's no choice but to stand and fight.
A thousand different places I could be,
a thousand lands I should see
but instead I choose to be
here, flirting with catastrophe.
A thousand oceans to cover
a thousand women to call my lover
there's no place like home they say
but still I can't seem to find my way.
A thousand ways to die in this mess
a thousand different ways to feel the stress.
Everyone needs someone to call...
#humankind
#philosophical
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
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Artistry's magic, a world to behold
In strokes of color, stories untold,
Artistry's magic, a world to behold.
Canvas and brush, a symphony's start,
A masterpiece born from the depths of the heart.
Each hue and shade, emotions they bear,
A language unique, for those who dare.
From abstract chaos to portraits so clear,
Art is a mirror, reflecting what's near.
In galleries vast, where dreams take their flight,
Creativity dances, both day and night.
From sculptures in stone to music's sweet hum,
Art, like a river, forever does run.
A testament to human...
Artistry's magic, a world to behold.
Canvas and brush, a symphony's start,
A masterpiece born from the depths of the heart.
Each hue and shade, emotions they bear,
A language unique, for those who dare.
From abstract chaos to portraits so clear,
Art is a mirror, reflecting what's near.
In galleries vast, where dreams take their flight,
Creativity dances, both day and night.
From sculptures in stone to music's sweet hum,
Art, like a river, forever does run.
A testament to human...
#art
#passion
#reading
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#ThrillSeeking
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God(b)less
Precious life
Restless strife
The right in what is wrong
Resentful days
Repentful ways
The knife cuts into song
To break a chord
To take accord
Recording what may last
Before too long
Chord of the song
Rings out from the past
Here is where we shall dance-
Raising glass of stale bourbon
For fear of what may pass-
The die is cast in my burden
Shadow cast of vermin
Hourglass of woman
Serpent dance in sermon
The right cuts into wrong
Justice slithers on it's...
Restless strife
The right in what is wrong
Resentful days
Repentful ways
The knife cuts into song
To break a chord
To take accord
Recording what may last
Before too long
Chord of the song
Rings out from the past
Here is where we shall dance-
Raising glass of stale bourbon
For fear of what may pass-
The die is cast in my burden
Shadow cast of vermin
Hourglass of woman
Serpent dance in sermon
The right cuts into wrong
Justice slithers on it's...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
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In Disguise when in fact ....
Today
I'd write about you
In disguise when in fact
Everyone knows it's you
They either stay silent and burn
Or wish they were me
Either way I win
I'd write about you
In disguise when in fact
Everyone knows it's you
They either stay silent and burn
Or wish they were me
Either way I win
#secrets
#WritingPoetry
#art
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#success
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f**k RLS, TIME TO MAKE SOME GREEN, SELLING MY 1000 UNUSED RLS TO THE HIGHEST BIDDER
I never liked the RL
Fucking billboards
Write a damn comment
You are a P-O-E-T
Remember ?
Ass wipe
Mine are for sale
I'm the holding company
If you're so desperate to leave an RL
But you're busted flat in New Orleans
I'll post it for you
Details available upon request
Pay to play
PayPal only
No returns
Buy in bulk
Operators standing by
Fucking billboards
Write a damn comment
You are a P-O-E-T
Remember ?
Ass wipe
Mine are for sale
I'm the holding company
If you're so desperate to leave an RL
But you're busted flat in New Orleans
I'll post it for you
Details available upon request
Pay to play
PayPal only
No returns
Buy in bulk
Operators standing by
#money
#TruthOfLife
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
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28 Comments
All I Want to Do
Drink
Paint
Fuck
Write dirty poems
Any questions ?
Paint
Fuck
Write dirty poems
Any questions ?
#sex
#alcohol
#WritingPoetry
#art
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
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34 Comments
I the romantic
our long journey
I the romantic
you in the cross hairs of desire
a storm and quagmire
unrequited longing
a poet's long winding road
leading to your center
one love poem at a time
I the romantic
you in the cross hairs of desire
a storm and quagmire
unrequited longing
a poet's long winding road
leading to your center
one love poem at a time
#love
#dreams
#confessional
#WritingPoetry
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
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Finding Beauty in Chaos
The city streets are alive
With the sounds of people and cars
A symphony of movement and noise
A constant ebb and flow
The buildings tower overhead
A testament to human ambition
Reaching towards the sky
A marvel of engineering
But amidst this concrete jungle
Nature still finds a way
A tree growing from a crack in the sidewalk
A flower blooming in a neglected corner
And as I walk these busy streets
I am reminded of the beauty
That can be found in the chaos
The magic that can be unearthed
For...
With the sounds of people and cars
A symphony of movement and noise
A constant ebb and flow
The buildings tower overhead
A testament to human ambition
Reaching towards the sky
A marvel of engineering
But amidst this concrete jungle
Nature still finds a way
A tree growing from a crack in the sidewalk
A flower blooming in a neglected corner
And as I walk these busy streets
I am reminded of the beauty
That can be found in the chaos
The magic that can be unearthed
For...
#home
#uplifting
#philosophical #DeepUndergroundPoetry
#philosophical #DeepUndergroundPoetry
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Applauding the new RL rules even though I don't understand them, thank you Attention Deficit Disorder ...
Truthfully I never gave that many RLS
So I don't give a shit about the new rule
I actually like that there is a limit
Some of you used the RL as crypto money
Buying friends with your avatar
Calling it in with no comments left
Now you have to work again for followers
What a pity
Yeah yeah
I'll get some hate
I don't give a shit about that either
This is my 10th year and 1800 poems +
A BL is better than a RL I say
Do the math
Slice and Dice
No quarter
So I don't give a shit about the new rule
I actually like that there is a limit
Some of you used the RL as crypto money
Buying friends with your avatar
Calling it in with no comments left
Now you have to work again for followers
What a pity
Yeah yeah
I'll get some hate
I don't give a shit about that either
This is my 10th year and 1800 poems +
A BL is better than a RL I say
Do the math
Slice and Dice
No quarter
#TruthOfLife
#CallToAction
#WritingPoetry #DeepUndergroundPoetry
#WritingPoetry #DeepUndergroundPoetry
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The Mechanic
You returned because your oil change is due and you wanna feel brand new so today I’ll be the best mechanic and crawl under you.
Your body needs a tune-up and I’m able to do just that and more, I’ll only need to give full assessment to know what to fine tune for sure.
Every model is different and yours is my favorite, from the oil type to the quality and blend.
Your manufacturers were kind to you so I’ll do the same first hand, to be sure I’ll check the guidelines because I wouldn’t want to pour the wrong oil and reduce the lubrication and overall shorten...
Your body needs a tune-up and I’m able to do just that and more, I’ll only need to give full assessment to know what to fine tune for sure.
Every model is different and yours is my favorite, from the oil type to the quality and blend.
Your manufacturers were kind to you so I’ll do the same first hand, to be sure I’ll check the guidelines because I wouldn’t want to pour the wrong oil and reduce the lubrication and overall shorten...
#cars
#travel
#art
#passion
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
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