Christian Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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Christian seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Enochian Songs Triumphant
O radiant light from Heaven’s peak
In hosts of angels, fierce and meek
Each choir adorned with crowns of grace
Each triumph sealed in holy place
Seraphim blaze with endless flame
Their wings a torch, their voice proclaim
They sing of love that never fades
In fire’s heart, their spirit wades
Cherubim hold wisdom’s key
Their eyes perceive eternity
They guard the gates of Heaven’s span
Where mortal mind may never scan
The Thrones in majesty reside
Their power flows like oceans wide
In judgment pure, they...
In hosts of angels, fierce and meek
Each choir adorned with crowns of grace
Each triumph sealed in holy place
Seraphim blaze with endless flame
Their wings a torch, their voice proclaim
They sing of love that never fades
In fire’s heart, their spirit wades
Cherubim hold wisdom’s key
Their eyes perceive eternity
They guard the gates of Heaven’s span
Where mortal mind may never scan
The Thrones in majesty reside
Their power flows like oceans wide
In judgment pure, they...
#angels
#Christian
#God
#heaven
#rhyming
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Sanctus Sanguinis
O blessed Blood, most pure and bright
Poured forth from Heaven’s sacred rite
Thy crimson tide, our sins doth cleanse
In Thee, O Christ, our hope begins
Thy chalice raised in holy hands
Doth shine with love, an eternal plan
We drink, O Lord, and hearts are stirred
By sacred wine and holy Word
O Blood of Lamb, O Blood divine
Thy mercy flows, transcendent sign
In sacrifice, Thou hast been slain
And through Thy Blood, sangreal pain
In mystic form, Thy Flesh we take
Thy Blood doth heal the hearts that ache
By...
Poured forth from Heaven’s sacred rite
Thy crimson tide, our sins doth cleanse
In Thee, O Christ, our hope begins
Thy chalice raised in holy hands
Doth shine with love, an eternal plan
We drink, O Lord, and hearts are stirred
By sacred wine and holy Word
O Blood of Lamb, O Blood divine
Thy mercy flows, transcendent sign
In sacrifice, Thou hast been slain
And through Thy Blood, sangreal pain
In mystic form, Thy Flesh we take
Thy Blood doth heal the hearts that ache
By...
#angels
#Christian
#God
#heaven
#prayer
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Inside Your Soul
Can one
Touch Base
With One's
Own
Personal
Jesus
Without
The Psychological Crutch
Of a Mouth piece
On a Pulpit
Touch Base
With One's
Own
Personal
Jesus
Without
The Psychological Crutch
Of a Mouth piece
On a Pulpit
#Buddhist
#Christian
#Hindu
#prayer
#Taoism
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A Bed of Thorns
Nails driven through hand and feet
Raised on dusty roads in desert heat
Price of ascension's glory
Curtain fall of the sacrificial story
Proud humbled and meek inheriting Earth
Hell harrowed and bereft of Satan's mirth
Spoken down with the weight on my shoulders
Weight of sin greater than a million boulders
I didn't heed the call
Even though His blood paid for it all
A crown for He and a bed for me
Spoiled and forsaken yet free
Walking with the...
Raised on dusty roads in desert heat
Price of ascension's glory
Curtain fall of the sacrificial story
Proud humbled and meek inheriting Earth
Hell harrowed and bereft of Satan's mirth
Spoken down with the weight on my shoulders
Weight of sin greater than a million boulders
I didn't heed the call
Even though His blood paid for it all
A crown for He and a bed for me
Spoiled and forsaken yet free
Walking with the...
#Christian
#dark
#evil #religion
#evil #religion
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Sin Amongst Spires
To sit amongst the empty sky
Looking down counting lies
A contrast of purple and black
Temptations on the attack
Observe from holy towers
Invoked names of perfidious powers
Reaping the sigils due
Some for me and some for you
Umbral promises none see through
Beneath stars where secrets dwell
A pact borne beyond heaven and hell
From spires they watch and wait
Liars marching beyond perdition's gates
Looking down counting lies
A contrast of purple and black
Temptations on the attack
Observe from holy towers
Invoked names of perfidious powers
Reaping the sigils due
Some for me and some for you
Umbral promises none see through
Beneath stars where secrets dwell
A pact borne beyond heaven and hell
From spires they watch and wait
Liars marching beyond perdition's gates
#Christian
#dark
#hell #religion
#hell #religion
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The 700 Club
Power
Lies
Hatred
Prejudice
Thief
Biased
Manipulator
Sectarianism
Bigotry
Corruption
Hypocrite
Billy Graham
Pat Robertson
Oral Roberts
Jimmy Swaggart
Jimmy & Tammy Faye Bakker
Jerry Falwell
Lies
Hatred
Prejudice
Thief
Biased
Manipulator
Sectarianism
Bigotry
Corruption
Hypocrite
Billy Graham
Pat Robertson
Oral Roberts
Jimmy Swaggart
Jimmy & Tammy Faye Bakker
Jerry Falwell
#Christian
#deception
#hypocrisy
#lies
#corruption
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Sol's Regent
O Uriel, thou Regent of the Sun's bright flame,
In Heaven’s court, thy radiance doth shine,
With wings of gold, thou dost bear His name,
And guard the light with countenance divine
Thy gaze doth pierce the shadows dark and deep,
Where wicked foes in trembling fear abide,
Thy sword of fire doth all in justice keep,
As thou dost lead with Heaven’s light as guide
O blazing star, thy brilliance none may veil,
Thy glory in the heavens none can bind,
Through thee, the light of God shall ne’er grow pale,
For in thy...
In Heaven’s court, thy radiance doth shine,
With wings of gold, thou dost bear His name,
And guard the light with countenance divine
Thy gaze doth pierce the shadows dark and deep,
Where wicked foes in trembling fear abide,
Thy sword of fire doth all in justice keep,
As thou dost lead with Heaven’s light as guide
O blazing star, thy brilliance none may veil,
Thy glory in the heavens none can bind,
Through thee, the light of God shall ne’er grow pale,
For in thy...
#angels
#Christian
#heaven
#religion
#rhyming
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Soldier's Patron
O Prince of Hosts, with wings as purest snow,
Thy trumpet soundeth, waking souls from sleep.
In battle fierce, thou lay'st the devil low,
And from his grasp dost all thy servants keep.
In fields of glory, where the saints abide,
Thou art the champion of the just and true.
With fiery blade, thou scatter'st sin's dark tide,
And guide the faithful to the heavens blue.
Thine is the strength that falters not nor fades,
Thy voice a clarion in the darkest hour.
Thy name be praised where'er the light invades,
For in thy...
Thy trumpet soundeth, waking souls from sleep.
In battle fierce, thou lay'st the devil low,
And from his grasp dost all thy servants keep.
In fields of glory, where the saints abide,
Thou art the champion of the just and true.
With fiery blade, thou scatter'st sin's dark tide,
And guide the faithful to the heavens blue.
Thine is the strength that falters not nor fades,
Thy voice a clarion in the darkest hour.
Thy name be praised where'er the light invades,
For in thy...
#angels
#Christian
#prayer
#religion
#rhyming
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The Greatest Gift
As the skies fold over the horizon
that's when God's devine sigh
arms stretched out in pleading
higher than the eleventh sky
to....
Where God sit,
Where every star is lit,
Where each sin we commit
was erased with the Greatest Gift!
When the rain race down in gush
that's when God's Holy Water bless
those who choose to repent
and with bending knees confess
to...
Where God sit,
Where every star is lit,
Where each sin we commit,
Gets erased with the Greatest Gift!
Once the heavens echo in...
that's when God's devine sigh
arms stretched out in pleading
higher than the eleventh sky
to....
Where God sit,
Where every star is lit,
Where each sin we commit
was erased with the Greatest Gift!
When the rain race down in gush
that's when God's Holy Water bless
those who choose to repent
and with bending knees confess
to...
Where God sit,
Where every star is lit,
Where each sin we commit,
Gets erased with the Greatest Gift!
Once the heavens echo in...
#Christian
#prayer
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Position of Victory
Learning to count the joy in the trial
When every obstacle is an opportunity to be led through
As patience is produced in the testing of our faith in You
Have Your perfect work and complete what only You can do
I lack nothing, all wisdom abounding in the echo of what is true
It is not in the asking but the faith that accompanies our plea
As we come to You doubtless we make our requests from a position of victory
Prayers spoken taking form from two perspectives to a single mind
Learning to think in the flow of the Spirit for the ways our flesh is...
When every obstacle is an opportunity to be led through
As patience is produced in the testing of our faith in You
Have Your perfect work and complete what only You can do
I lack nothing, all wisdom abounding in the echo of what is true
It is not in the asking but the faith that accompanies our plea
As we come to You doubtless we make our requests from a position of victory
Prayers spoken taking form from two perspectives to a single mind
Learning to think in the flow of the Spirit for the ways our flesh is...
#Christian
#God
#love
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
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That Which Guards What Cannot Be Reclaimed
In Eden's gate, where once pure bliss did reign,
Now stands a guard, with visage fierce and plain.
Archangel Gabriel, with sword of flame,
Doth bar the path, where none may stake their claim.
His eyes, like stars, with piercing light doth gleam,
And none may pass, nor even dare to dream.
The sword he wields, in fire’s eternal blaze,
Cuts through the night, in bright and deadly haze.
A sacred charge, this garden to defend,
From mortal hands that seek their fall to mend.
Yet dark it seems, this hallowed, guarded place, ...
Now stands a guard, with visage fierce and plain.
Archangel Gabriel, with sword of flame,
Doth bar the path, where none may stake their claim.
His eyes, like stars, with piercing light doth gleam,
And none may pass, nor even dare to dream.
The sword he wields, in fire’s eternal blaze,
Cuts through the night, in bright and deadly haze.
A sacred charge, this garden to defend,
From mortal hands that seek their fall to mend.
Yet dark it seems, this hallowed, guarded place, ...
#angels
#Christian
#heaven
#religion
#rhyming
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When Spirit Takes Me Home(Lyric)
When spirit takes me home!
Straight into the clouds.... high above...where my father is.
This heart will rejoice on that day!
Coming into your arms...true loves comfort.... pain forever ends.
When spirit takes me home.
I'm staring at those stars again.
Amazed by the wonder.... knowing your love is out there.
I can't help but think.... about the day.... when I enter and sing!!!
When spirit takes me home!
Straight into the clouds...high above...where my father is.
This heart will rejoice on that day!
Coming into yours...
Straight into the clouds.... high above...where my father is.
This heart will rejoice on that day!
Coming into your arms...true loves comfort.... pain forever ends.
When spirit takes me home.
I'm staring at those stars again.
Amazed by the wonder.... knowing your love is out there.
I can't help but think.... about the day.... when I enter and sing!!!
When spirit takes me home!
Straight into the clouds...high above...where my father is.
This heart will rejoice on that day!
Coming into yours...
#Christian
#God
#heaven
#love
#relationships
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