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Re: We Rise...
5th Apr 2013 6:27pm
Incredible Look!!!
INCREDIBLE write!!!
The spirit of the positive Amazon, capturing the absolute power of Strength and determination.
Absolutely Wonderful!!!
INCREDIBLE write!!!
The spirit of the positive Amazon, capturing the absolute power of Strength and determination.
Absolutely Wonderful!!!
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re: Re: We Rise...
5th Apr 2013 7:09pm
Truly humbled by your enthusiastic comment, thank you so much, glad you enjoyed this piece, on behalf of my co-author and I.
Red
Red
Re: We Rise...
5th Apr 2013 6:58pm
Wow Gypsy Red...yout have done a wonderful thing for the poem...awesome look, more so imagery.
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5th Apr 2013 7:10pm
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5th Apr 2013 7:50pm
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Re: We Rise...
5th Apr 2013 8:23pm
We rise indeed. A wonderful write Gypsy and beautifully presented dear. :)
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re: Re: We Rise...
6th Apr 2013 1:06pm
Yes, it was a labor of true inspiration my co-author is great and a very wise man. Thank you sweets!
Red
Red
Re: We Rise...
6th Apr 2013 2:03am
A splendid work, Gypsy, and an excellently put philosophical point of order as well! Indeed, we are... all of us... the receptacles for all that our ancestors were and all that they can, through our present deeds, become. Each person who lives, is living history... each life is a story and a tale... and each heart bears within it the poetry of its' destiny, even if it be a destiny of one's own making or one imposed by some divinity mayhaps. No two fates are the same; no two lives are identical, yet we all rise from the depths... if only for a moment... and sometimes we can seize that moment and create a positive change in the world. These are the musings this poem brings to my mind, and they are welcome musings indeed! Well written poetry, Gypsy, as ever. :)
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6th Apr 2013 1:15pm
Jess it is wonderful to see you and that our humble piece has brought forth such wonderful musings is a blessing upon us all. This piece was based on spiritual/philosophical beliefs that I and Brother Tunde share and put to paper. I am so very happy that is being well received. Thank you
Red
Red
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Anonymous
6th Apr 2013 4:43am
Awesome pure write Gypsy...liked it.
Strider
Strider
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6th Apr 2013 1:16pm
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30th Apr 2013 2:36am
very very powerful write...and the imagery accompanying this gem suits it lovely..I enjoyed and appreciate this read very much..respect and honor to you Red
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30th Apr 2013 12:15pm
Re. We Rise...
4th Apr 2016 8:26pm
Lovely piece. And nice play off of Maya's Still I Rise (http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/still-i-rise/) I could hear and feel her influence in the piece and it made me appreciate it all the more.
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12th Apr 2016 10:00pm
Thank you Trix, Dr. Angelou was one the most awe inspiring and powerful poets I have ever read, you pay me great compliment with your comment!
Red
Red