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Very Bad Things
I like to steal
I want to kill
Sometimes I do very bad things
But
I've got my fears
And
You've got yours too
I just take pride in not knowing mine
Hey
What was your name?
Nevermind
I dont give a good goddamn
All
I wanna know
Is
Where you're gonna go
When it comes down to last call
I want to kill
Sometimes I do very bad things
But
I've got my fears
And
You've got yours too
I just take pride in not knowing mine
Hey
What was your name?
Nevermind
I dont give a good goddamn
All
I wanna know
Is
Where you're gonna go
When it comes down to last call
Published 2nd Apr 2013
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3rd Apr 2013 8:21am
I liked this, for me it had a broken up
sense to it and I enjoyed that.
Very well written, Leaton.
Scribbler.
sense to it and I enjoyed that.
Very well written, Leaton.
Scribbler.
24th Apr 2013 10:12pm
it's choppy but i think purposely. i like that. i'd expand more on the last line of the first stanza. the "i've got my fears" and then "i just take pride in not knowing mine" seems a bit contradictory.
all 2g tho well done man. i dig it.
all 2g tho well done man. i dig it.
