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My Great Escape
I can see them stare,
Though they don't notice,
I can hear their laughter,
But they do not care.
They think I'm a freak,
Because I'm not like them,
They treat me as an outsider,
It makes me see a future that's pretty bleak.
I've heard names of so many diseases,
Been tested and negative on all,
I know it's just a tremor,
But none of the pain it eases.
I'm not a freak it's just a little shake,
Sometimes more pronounced,
Other times you wouldn't even see,
But all their ridicule makes my heart break.
All their hurtful actions hang on me like a drape,
But none of them give a toss,
I have a place where I can get away,
My music and my poetry are my great escape!!
Though they don't notice,
I can hear their laughter,
But they do not care.
They think I'm a freak,
Because I'm not like them,
They treat me as an outsider,
It makes me see a future that's pretty bleak.
I've heard names of so many diseases,
Been tested and negative on all,
I know it's just a tremor,
But none of the pain it eases.
I'm not a freak it's just a little shake,
Sometimes more pronounced,
Other times you wouldn't even see,
But all their ridicule makes my heart break.
All their hurtful actions hang on me like a drape,
But none of them give a toss,
I have a place where I can get away,
My music and my poetry are my great escape!!
Published 9th Feb 2013
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9th Feb 2013 6:57pm
Me too, Ninja of the Dark, me too.
I'm not a freak it's just a little shake,
Sometimes more pronounced,
Other times you wouldn't even see,
But all their ridicule makes my heart break.
Felt this poem, keep it up.
Scribbler.
I'm not a freak it's just a little shake,
Sometimes more pronounced,
Other times you wouldn't even see,
But all their ridicule makes my heart break.
Felt this poem, keep it up.
Scribbler.
9th Feb 2013 7:05pm
9th Feb 2013 7:01pm
9th Feb 2013 7:06pm
9th Feb 2013 7:17pm
Writing is great therapy and escape. This is well done in the fact that it made me feel like I was in their shoes for a moment.
Do not feel like this, Knight! I have felt his way my whole life, like a freak and a monster. I sent you a couple of emails... in the first one, I've told you many secrets about me I though you would feel comforted in knowing, and in the second one I have revealed the true depth of my feelings for you. Never mind that part in the first one where I said I wanted to take it slow and just be friends. Things have... changed... in my life that have opened my eyes a bit. Let's fall in love baby! Let's rock each other's world. life's too short and people are assholes half the time. Us mutants need to stick together - mutant and proud. You be my Wolverine and I'll be your Mystique! You thaw my ice and I'll bring the key to the gate through your wall. Love you, babe! *Moist Kiss*
The only thing I am worried about before we do this is... what is that "shake" you refer to? I hope you aren't epileptic or something like that. I'm not sure I could handle that. So let me know, I'm worried after reading that.
The only thing I am worried about before we do this is... what is that "shake" you refer to? I hope you aren't epileptic or something like that. I'm not sure I could handle that. So let me know, I'm worried after reading that.
10th Feb 2013 8:11pm
