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Nowhere
He once became a Nowhere Man
And sailed the Nowhere Sea
In His boat, HMS nowhere
He had nowhere else to be
He came across a Somewhere Girl
While sailing on His way
The sweetest girl he'd nowhere seen
On another nowhere day
He stopped upon a somewhere isle
To rest His nowhere head
And slept a dreamy nowhere sleep
On a somewhere silken bed
Days later left the nowhere man
The somewhere girl she cried
Then back aboard his nowhere boat
To sail the nowhere tide.....
And sailed the Nowhere Sea
In His boat, HMS nowhere
He had nowhere else to be
He came across a Somewhere Girl
While sailing on His way
The sweetest girl he'd nowhere seen
On another nowhere day
He stopped upon a somewhere isle
To rest His nowhere head
And slept a dreamy nowhere sleep
On a somewhere silken bed
Days later left the nowhere man
The somewhere girl she cried
Then back aboard his nowhere boat
To sail the nowhere tide.....
Published 30th Dec 2012
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30th Dec 2012 5:14am
such a sad sad story you have put in such few words, loved it, loved it. second block, second line, maybe "while sailing on his nowhere way" keeps it with your very cool use of a worded theme until the very end, nice poem...vart@rt
30th Dec 2012 9:39am
Thanks for commenting, glad you liked it, you may be right about adding that one extra nowhere....it's always good to hear a readers thoughts on a piece. Many thanks....
30th Dec 2012 6:54am
30th Dec 2012 9:40am
