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Labyrinth of love
I'm letting go now.
I will fall into the labyrinth of love,
And find my way to you.
With every step I know you're getting closer,
Every dead end I come to,
Just another reason to keep going.
You're miles away, so far it hurts.
I want so badly to stop, give up.
But you're all I need.
A thirst that only you can quench.
I long for you.
To hear your words, spill from your lips.
To feel your touch, so gentle and persuasive.
So I'm letting go now,
Falling into the labyrinth they call love.
I will start on this path,
and find my way to you.
I will fall into the labyrinth of love,
And find my way to you.
With every step I know you're getting closer,
Every dead end I come to,
Just another reason to keep going.
You're miles away, so far it hurts.
I want so badly to stop, give up.
But you're all I need.
A thirst that only you can quench.
I long for you.
To hear your words, spill from your lips.
To feel your touch, so gentle and persuasive.
So I'm letting go now,
Falling into the labyrinth they call love.
I will start on this path,
and find my way to you.
Published 23rd Dec 2012
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25th Dec 2012 10:37pm
The journey for love can be a rather long and grueling venture for some more than others. The title "Labyrinth of Love" is an good title that I think does the journey for love justice because with every turn you may find your way out to happiness, this being your lover or a dead end which would be someone who's just not for you. The poem itself speaks of going the distance to find one's true love. I would've loved to see a little bit more detail in this poem to paint a more vivid image in my head but aside from that well done
