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Colors,
The colors she shows
are cheerful and bright,
with the ones she feels
held deep inside.
Many people see her as
a rainbow,
filled with ever color.
Bright and radiant.
She has her days,
when her rainbow disappears.
Dark skies overpower the light.
To many don't see
her storm is always there
&she is afriaid of the dark.
are cheerful and bright,
with the ones she feels
held deep inside.
Many people see her as
a rainbow,
filled with ever color.
Bright and radiant.
She has her days,
when her rainbow disappears.
Dark skies overpower the light.
To many don't see
her storm is always there
&she is afriaid of the dark.
Published 29th May 2010
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29th May 2010 8:37am
...to live up to your site name here which I admire you for. But if you don't bother with spelling and grammar you automatically destroy credibility for your work. I'm almost sure you could turn this into something cooler than it is now if you refined it. It's a good plan to sit on your poems for a day or two, try forget about them and then edit again before posting.
