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What have I done?
I made a huge mistake.
My heart beats faster with each passing moment.
Am I truley a killer?
I didn't mean to do this to myself!
I wish I could go back and undo it now.
Is suicide really murder?
I fret over it.
I'm really dead now.
This is not what I wanted.
I made on mistake I cut to deep this time.
I want to be alive I won't cut aagain.
Those words taste so bitter on my lips.
I once said those words three monthes after rehab.
All I want to say is I'm sorry.
My heart beats faster with each passing moment.
Am I truley a killer?
I didn't mean to do this to myself!
I wish I could go back and undo it now.
Is suicide really murder?
I fret over it.
I'm really dead now.
This is not what I wanted.
I made on mistake I cut to deep this time.
I want to be alive I won't cut aagain.
Those words taste so bitter on my lips.
I once said those words three monthes after rehab.
All I want to say is I'm sorry.
Published 19th May 2010
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19th May 2010 10:39pm
This seeps with anger for the character's actions, for themself, and anger at others around it, but sorrow and apologising to one person.
20th May 2010 3:14pm
thanx for the comment i figured that not to many people that commit suicide have a real understanding of what they are actually doing to themselves.
20th May 2010 4:40pm
20th May 2010 6:19pm
21st May 2010 00:04am
When you said those that committed suicide didn't have an understanding of what they were doing to themselves can also be said of schizophrenics.
21st May 2010 9:36pm
