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Re: Being Real
23rd Sep 2012 5:42pm
Damn this is good! Its a keeper and I am gonna print it out for my wall! nice!
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re: Re: Being Real
23rd Sep 2012 7:13pm
Re: Being Real
23rd Sep 2012 11:52pm
i wish i knew that's something that seems to be corrupt and jaded our world it's a war zone we were all born into. how we let it define us is, how we separate ourselves from the flock. love,trust, truth,honesty,team work,loyalty,friendship,and real love in the home, are jaded and crashing down catastrophically.the good people are a breed being lost at the deepest depths of the sea. evil pulls it down. when you find the good it's rare. finding that in a sea of monsters, we all are surrounded by, it's nearly imposable. to see good it is harder to spot and even harder to find. evil is easy to spot and find. if you open your eyes,and know what to look for. there's no were evil hasn't been. it's even embedded in all of us.but it's our choices, and how we fight it ,and beat it. the problem is vary few want to, it's a endless war no one communicates or reconciles nothing is resolved.what you wrote is the tip of the ice burg it is in every culture it's much deeper than that, we all know it's there/here we shut it out. because we're so numb and accustom to it. what you wrote barely scratch's the surface. it repeat's it's self in every era. beyond decades and every generation. no matter what are political or religious belief's or our belief's at all it's even in forces beyond our understanding intelligence and comprehension even our perception of the simplest things which aren't simple anymore because even that can be sabotaged and broken down. every thing try's and want's to brake you. bad people live the longest. evil lives forever some may not believe that but i know it i have witnessed it every day of my life.
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re: Re: Being Real
24th Sep 2012 00:44am
Re: Being Real
24th Sep 2012 1:15am
re: Re: Being Real
24th Sep 2012 4:25am
know what you will...I answer any question...I have nothing to hide...what you reveal is yours alone..ask...