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the moment
Chase me
through mesh gates
inflate my traits
my charchtererstics
my so called statistics
my perception
becomes weapons
the way i view
life through a camera
picture of changes
days that were dangerous
filled with broken choices
noises to voices
telling me to stop
unlock the shock
of being in the MOMENT
through mesh gates
inflate my traits
my charchtererstics
my so called statistics
my perception
becomes weapons
the way i view
life through a camera
picture of changes
days that were dangerous
filled with broken choices
noises to voices
telling me to stop
unlock the shock
of being in the MOMENT
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Re: the moment
24th Jul 2012 5:36pm
tethered to an endless string of MOMENTS
I relate ---
this stuff Rocks!
I relate ---
this stuff Rocks!
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Re: the moment
24th Jul 2012 5:37pm
I wanna put more up for u to check out but it wont let me!..only two every 8 hrs...
Re: the moment
24th Jul 2012 5:46pm
... Days that were dangerous
Filled with broken choices..... Love that.
Filled with broken choices..... Love that.
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Re: the moment
24th Jul 2012 7:23pm
Re: the moment
24th Jul 2012 8:48pm
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Anonymous
24th Jul 2012 10:51pm
Another great one, you rock, Jared!
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Re: the moment
25th Jul 2012 00:08am
my perception
becomes weapons
this part is just so cool. i wish i came up with it.
becomes weapons
this part is just so cool. i wish i came up with it.
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Re: the moment
25th Jul 2012 10:48am