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epiphany
It happened upon
A yesterdays whim
In my mind it shall never
Leave again
A quest for innocence
Juxtaposed
The ambient thorns
Midst a sightless rose
That should stand and fight
Or run away
Or live to love
Another day
Giving in to fear
This thief of breath
And take the cold
Embrace of death
But even then
I could not see
How fighting, or running
Or dying could be
A road to take
Tween this game of lives
That all shall play
Yet none servive
Forgetting that life
Is in between
The darkest horror
And the sweetest dream
It happened upon
A yesterdays whim
In my mind shall never
Leave again
A yesterdays whim
In my mind it shall never
Leave again
A quest for innocence
Juxtaposed
The ambient thorns
Midst a sightless rose
That should stand and fight
Or run away
Or live to love
Another day
Giving in to fear
This thief of breath
And take the cold
Embrace of death
But even then
I could not see
How fighting, or running
Or dying could be
A road to take
Tween this game of lives
That all shall play
Yet none servive
Forgetting that life
Is in between
The darkest horror
And the sweetest dream
It happened upon
A yesterdays whim
In my mind shall never
Leave again
Published 2nd Jul 2012
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2nd Jul 2012 1:24am
3rd Jul 2012 00:43am
3rd Jul 2012 3:35am
9th Jul 2012 5:36pm
Damn straight! Haha
Anyways I can honestly say I'm a bit envious I didn't come up with this stanza
"Forgetting that life Is in between The darkest horror And the sweetest dream"
Beautiful job my friend
Anyways I can honestly say I'm a bit envious I didn't come up with this stanza
"Forgetting that life Is in between The darkest horror And the sweetest dream"
Beautiful job my friend
10th Jul 2012 7:26am
:.) Thank you love. Even tho you have nothing to envy. There are full poems you have written that I am envious of
11th Jul 2012 8:36pm
i cant say what hasnt already been said. you did a great job on this poem i loved how every other word rhymed and how it felt as i read it. all in all a great poem
13th Jul 2012 10:50am
Beautiful. As always, you speak to my heart. So many wonderful lines!
"Forgetting that life
Is in between
The darkest horror
And the sweetest dream"
So true. We must hold onto all those moments in between and remember that the other is sure to come back around.
This is so sad, and yet there is a realization there.
Beautiful.
"Forgetting that life
Is in between
The darkest horror
And the sweetest dream"
So true. We must hold onto all those moments in between and remember that the other is sure to come back around.
This is so sad, and yet there is a realization there.
Beautiful.
13th Jul 2012 2:03pm
Thank you love, yet again you pull things out that most people miss...no one I've let read this realized the sadness...thank you for the beautiful comment
21st Jul 2012 7:23am
Geez, I thought you weren't writing, and now I see I wasn't following you, when I thought I was.
Love this by the way. Great flow, and nice rhyming. Love your message here too.
Love this by the way. Great flow, and nice rhyming. Love your message here too.
21st Jul 2012 7:45am
Always appreciate such compliments from such an accomplished poet ;) I actually havent been writing as much as usual, but its coming back to me
30th Jul 2012 9:35am
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