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sleep
i can't sleep,
i can't sleep at all
after he left,
i changed the place
but i can't sleep,
i changed the bed sheet
but i can't sleep,
i changed the pillow but
i can't sleep,
n now i have stopped sleeping,
and i can't sleep...
n i realized on a night
there was
NO SLEEP
in the bed,
ONLY BECAUSE,,,
i was in his embrace,
N that's why I was able to sleep,
it was the warm scent of his body
that mesmerized me
and that's why i was able to sleep,
sleep was not hidden anywhere,
it was hidden in the meeting
of his legs with mine,
I would fall asleep
because my breasts were
caressed n pressed
by his chest,
i had a fluttering feeling
inside me like a bird
n which he soothed
with his sleepless limbs
with his soft whisper
with his surfing hands
and with his hardness,
when he entered me
with dreams full of pleasure
i would fall asleep,
when we had sex
our moans would echo up to the sky
and the stars
would come to watch us play
and then
I would fall asleep clinging to him...
i can't sleep at all
after he left,
i changed the place
but i can't sleep,
i changed the bed sheet
but i can't sleep,
i changed the pillow but
i can't sleep,
n now i have stopped sleeping,
and i can't sleep...
n i realized on a night
there was
NO SLEEP
in the bed,
ONLY BECAUSE,,,
i was in his embrace,
N that's why I was able to sleep,
it was the warm scent of his body
that mesmerized me
and that's why i was able to sleep,
sleep was not hidden anywhere,
it was hidden in the meeting
of his legs with mine,
I would fall asleep
because my breasts were
caressed n pressed
by his chest,
i had a fluttering feeling
inside me like a bird
n which he soothed
with his sleepless limbs
with his soft whisper
with his surfing hands
and with his hardness,
when he entered me
with dreams full of pleasure
i would fall asleep,
when we had sex
our moans would echo up to the sky
and the stars
would come to watch us play
and then
I would fall asleep clinging to him...
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Today 12:38pm
I get from this a sense of longing for that special someone with whom you can share a hot sweaty embrace and make you feel whole. Then sleep like an angel…. Hehehehe
Today 7:32pm
Echo gothicsurrealism's comment, that is how the poem came across to me as I read it.
This hits the nail on the head:
There was NO SLEEP
in the bed
ONLY BECAUSE,,,,
I was in his embrace....
Love this change which details what the writer's missing:
sleep was not hidden anywhere,
it was hidden in the meeting
of his legs with mine,
I would fall asleep
because my breasts were
caressed n pressed
by his chest,
i had a fluttering feeling
inside me like a bird
n which he soothed
with his sleepless limbs
with his soft whisper
with his surfing hands
and with his hardness,
when he entered me
with dreams full of pleasure
i would fall asleep,
This hits the nail on the head:
There was NO SLEEP
in the bed
ONLY BECAUSE,,,,
I was in his embrace....
Love this change which details what the writer's missing:
sleep was not hidden anywhere,
it was hidden in the meeting
of his legs with mine,
I would fall asleep
because my breasts were
caressed n pressed
by his chest,
i had a fluttering feeling
inside me like a bird
n which he soothed
with his sleepless limbs
with his soft whisper
with his surfing hands
and with his hardness,
when he entered me
with dreams full of pleasure
i would fall asleep,
Today 10:35pm
This is very sexy writing. I'm reminded of my own erotic moments - the curvature of her sides, the softness of her breasts against me, and the wet and warm feeling of my cock inside her cunt. Love this poem.
