sleep

I can feel and see your  uncomfortablity.  Good spill

thank you Fia...

I don't sleep well either
Often waking up with a hard rod

Underground Like

n obviously you need to soften that hardness...

Any suggestions  ?

dive into my fire... you will melt completely...

Promise ??

Pakka promise...

I get from this a sense of longing for that special someone with whom you can share a hot sweaty embrace and make you feel whole. Then sleep like an angel…. Hehehehe

Daniel...i wish it happens like that...

Echo gothicsurrealism's comment, that is how the poem came across to me as I read it.

This hits the nail on the head:

There was NO SLEEP
in the bed
ONLY BECAUSE,,,,
I was in his embrace....

Love this change which details what the writer's missing:

sleep was not hidden anywhere,
it was hidden in the meeting
of his legs with mine,
I would fall asleep
because my breasts were
caressed n pressed
by his chest,
i had a fluttering feeling
inside me like a bird
n which he soothed
with his sleepless limbs
with his soft whisper
with his surfing hands
and with his hardness,
when he entered me
with dreams full of pleasure
i would fall asleep,

SS...you have always understood the meaning behind my words...thank you from the bottom of my heart..

This is very sexy writing. I'm reminded of my own erotic moments - the curvature of her sides, the softness of her breasts against me, and the wet and warm feeling of my cock inside her cunt. Love this poem.

hey M
love your comment... ;)

Well written, dimpy. The longing you write of certainly has more than a twinge of heartache about it.

thank you so much Snaggy, you understood my feelings,,,my longing... ❤

Dammit I wish I had an RL to give this, because it deserves one!
This is so beautiful. It's perfectly written, Dimpy. Almost surreal with its veil of imagery.
 It's an outstanding touching write.

It is a great honour that you thought of including my poem in your RL entry... thank you very much styxian...

Oh it's getting an RL once my limit catches up!

great!!!

Beautifully penned, dimpy. Appreciate you.

Damian  

thanks you so much...

that about sums it up.

mi kay uttar deu??

avashyaktach nahi. je aahe te aahe.

thik aahe...

(HUGS) I can seriously relate to this my friend. I haven't had that comfort of holding a loved one near to me as well since my divorce so many years ago and probably never will again. Totally get what you mean here :) Sometimes you just want to hold and be held.

a loving hugs to you too M
thank you dear for understanding my words...sometimes we get so attached to a relationship that we consider that special person as our life...we get comfort from him and if that relationship breaks, we consider life meaningless... n that time came in my life too but i realized that why should someone else be the reason for my happiness and living life? we are independent and we are very happy with ourselves... and I won...