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Ms Prose
The most disturbing slums
With many problems
About to face my clone
An open street I stood alone
Bounded by earlier defeat
Loud and clear I need not repeat
When the only thing that pops into the mind
Is also something you've to write
By so doing..
I got seduced by a beautiful maiden, who called herself Ms Prose..
We tied the knot in a shocking narrative of instant rise and fall..
I have since removed the ring I need a divorce
I wrote the prose
I read and found it not so close
Am so depressed, tempted I should increase my dose
I have since removed the ring I need a divorce
I'm entirely sure
My mind is not pure
I proceed with no delay
Inside my head a very disturbing burglary
I couldn't grace the throne
I asked myself am I this prone?
My territory is all but a breach
So my therapist
Do not resume to preach!
With many problems
About to face my clone
An open street I stood alone
Bounded by earlier defeat
Loud and clear I need not repeat
When the only thing that pops into the mind
Is also something you've to write
By so doing..
I got seduced by a beautiful maiden, who called herself Ms Prose..
We tied the knot in a shocking narrative of instant rise and fall..
I have since removed the ring I need a divorce
I wrote the prose
I read and found it not so close
Am so depressed, tempted I should increase my dose
I have since removed the ring I need a divorce
I'm entirely sure
My mind is not pure
I proceed with no delay
Inside my head a very disturbing burglary
I couldn't grace the throne
I asked myself am I this prone?
My territory is all but a breach
So my therapist
Do not resume to preach!
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Poem's rawness and abruptness force the reader to confront the harsh realities of anxiety and its potential consequences, making it a powerful and thought-provoking piece.
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Hello Numer90,
For me this was a skillful soulful piece, there are depths and metaphors hidden in the stitches of these words. Your theme of making prose a counter part was intriguing. The opening stanza is extremely powerful! Greetings and blessings, Rianne
For me this was a skillful soulful piece, there are depths and metaphors hidden in the stitches of these words. Your theme of making prose a counter part was intriguing. The opening stanza is extremely powerful! Greetings and blessings, Rianne
Today 6:26pm
Hi Anne I'm very glad you stop by to read. Thanks for your generous response. I feel it
