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The sight of this pretty little girl swinging
It's Simple pendulum
My bicycle bell jingles
Look up, don't cry,.
Giggle a little,
Twinkle!..
We together in this so lets face the race and get through with these hurdles
Don't turn or look back we have got enough problems
We are part of the deadliest royal rumble
I am a lost noble
Who got himself into many troubles
Behind me is this herd of word cattle
To take on any battle
Suddenly, even time shuffles
Sit up don't let this beat startles
Chapter two..
This written work you are reading, little
You should know by now It's meant for the singles
Please chuckle, little!
Use it to dominate the charts in the words battle
If you will keep swinging
I'll go on trending
Even after we seize being living
Non-stop! We will go on streaming
This is not fiction
It is called action
It is with this sample
You should get this single
Trust your art
Invade those charts
Dominate in this jungle
With this single
It is with this precision that we raided all those silver, gold and diamond mansions
We now face many sanctions
That’s why we are in this word junctions
The only real option
Force me to take this action
So unfortunately it is with this fortune
I bought you gold and diamond bangles
Let not this boat sink used your paddles
My army of word weevils
Why is this so random,
I am just an unseen phantom.
I'm a word weevil
Riding in my Ted Bundy's 1968 Volkswagen Beetle
In broad daylight bargaining for ransom,
Inside an apparent quantum.
Am seeking a certain sanctum
So you see, my momentum...
I don't have any more reason
Do I commit a treason?
By What Means Redmond Barry Acquired the Style and Title of Barry Lyndon"
All I need is The last Sermon!..
Take it to be your anthem
If you're ever going to make it out of this huge struggle..
If this beat rekindles
Criminal cripple!
This beat dwindles
Anatomical brittle
You'll get this title
Living in this isle
Sit back on your saddle
And finish this civil battle
Use your herd of word cattle
Erase this trouble
It's Simple pendulum
My bicycle bell jingles
Look up, don't cry,.
Giggle a little,
Twinkle!..
We together in this so lets face the race and get through with these hurdles
Don't turn or look back we have got enough problems
We are part of the deadliest royal rumble
I am a lost noble
Who got himself into many troubles
Behind me is this herd of word cattle
To take on any battle
Suddenly, even time shuffles
Sit up don't let this beat startles
Chapter two..
This written work you are reading, little
You should know by now It's meant for the singles
Please chuckle, little!
Use it to dominate the charts in the words battle
If you will keep swinging
I'll go on trending
Even after we seize being living
Non-stop! We will go on streaming
This is not fiction
It is called action
It is with this sample
You should get this single
Trust your art
Invade those charts
Dominate in this jungle
With this single
It is with this precision that we raided all those silver, gold and diamond mansions
We now face many sanctions
That’s why we are in this word junctions
The only real option
Force me to take this action
So unfortunately it is with this fortune
I bought you gold and diamond bangles
Let not this boat sink used your paddles
My army of word weevils
Why is this so random,
I am just an unseen phantom.
I'm a word weevil
Riding in my Ted Bundy's 1968 Volkswagen Beetle
In broad daylight bargaining for ransom,
Inside an apparent quantum.
Am seeking a certain sanctum
So you see, my momentum...
I don't have any more reason
Do I commit a treason?
By What Means Redmond Barry Acquired the Style and Title of Barry Lyndon"
All I need is The last Sermon!..
Take it to be your anthem
If you're ever going to make it out of this huge struggle..
If this beat rekindles
Criminal cripple!
This beat dwindles
Anatomical brittle
You'll get this title
Living in this isle
Sit back on your saddle
And finish this civil battle
Use your herd of word cattle
Erase this trouble
Published 18th Jan 2025
| Edited 23rd Jan 2025
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18th Jan 2025 10:25pm
you reallt have a good fiow very clever ❤️I almost felt you were taklking to my inner chilfd...
19th Jan 2025 1:45pm
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23rd Jan 2025 9:50am
What an amazing piece with a really stunning flow.
And it has a pendulum :-) And a 1968 Volkswagen Beetle!
Okay, Ted Bundy's Beetle, but still... a 1968 Volkswagen Beetle (old timers are a soft spot of mine)
And it has a pendulum :-) And a 1968 Volkswagen Beetle!
Okay, Ted Bundy's Beetle, but still... a 1968 Volkswagen Beetle (old timers are a soft spot of mine)
23rd Jan 2025 10:00am
25th Jan 2025 3:09pm
Another brilliant write, the rhythm flows really well, leading into the next line with a similar rhyme.
Great stuff.
Great stuff.
25th Jan 2025 6:15pm
Love the innocence here the playful rhythm you infused this with. I could see the little girl and your joy in finding your inner child again through her. You want her to see how precious her youth is and how it will slip away like sand through the fingers. Love the rhythm here that played in my mind as I read like a old song I love. Truly great work.
John
John
30th Jan 2025 12:00pm
Really appreciate you stopping by to read and for your generous response. Greetings dear poet.
