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That’s much more than I can bear …
We can have an erotic affair
With kink and role play
Don't use my deodorant afterwards though
That's way too personal ...
With kink and role play
Don't use my deodorant afterwards though
That's way too personal ...
Author's Note
Wear that stink around for a few days, you earned it …
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Re. That’s much than I can bear …
21st Dec 2024 8:13pm
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21st Dec 2024 10:33pm
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21st Dec 2024 8:18pm
Damn right. Using someone else's deodorant is actually gross. I enjoyed this.
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21st Dec 2024 10:33pm
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22nd Dec 2024 00:44am
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22nd Dec 2024 4:12am
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22nd Dec 2024 1:49am
We all have boundaries no one can cross but I won't tell you mine. If you know you know, otherwise sayonara.
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22nd Dec 2024 4:13am
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23rd Dec 2024 5:37am
Watched a cute movie the other night. Admittedly, the heroine was not not crazy and a car thief (yes, I know 'role model' but I digress). Anyway, she had a secret a man must do before she'd sleep with him. All though the movie her friend, car thief, and man would beg her to tell the secret so he could sleep with her but she wouldn't say a word. .... The secret was that she would feel like a tramp if the man didn't cook dinner for her first. .... and no, that's not my secret but I loved the movie.
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23rd Dec 2024 11:22am
Hope they both had their own deodorant.
Things are most passionate when smelling good ...
Things are most passionate when smelling good ...
Re. That’s much more than I can bear …
22nd Dec 2024 2:56am
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22nd Dec 2024 4:15am
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22nd Dec 2024 4:05am
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22nd Dec 2024 4:17am
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22nd Dec 2024 4:21am
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22nd Dec 2024 11:39am
Yes
I'm good at setting boundaries...
If they don't listen then they get bound ...
Thanks D
I'm good at setting boundaries...
If they don't listen then they get bound ...
Thanks D
Re. That’s much more than I can bear …
23rd Dec 2024 1:16am
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23rd Dec 2024 1:33am
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24th Dec 2024 00:42am
I'm guessing you're using a roll on deodorant rather than the spray then? Glad to hear your health's improving. 😊🙏
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24th Dec 2024 00:56am
Yes, it's a holistic roll on.
Not as good as the roll on but that has all kinds of aluminum in it. Not healthy..
I'm doing well with my heart ❤
Thx
BILLY
Not as good as the roll on but that has all kinds of aluminum in it. Not healthy..
I'm doing well with my heart ❤
Thx
BILLY
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26th Dec 2024 1:52am
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26th Dec 2024 2:28am
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26th Dec 2024 7:40pm
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26th Dec 2024 9:21pm
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28th Dec 2024 4:28pm
Lol. I would never expect you to have a line uncrossable with a woman. Not you!
You don't like women who smell like old spice?! Lol
You don't like women who smell like old spice?! Lol
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28th Dec 2024 4:36pm
I love Old Spice actually. A fragrance from yesteryear iconic in nature. What about English Leather or Jade East ? Question is would I let her use my Barbrasol shaving cream if I still shaved ? It's not the actual product Mark, it's the irony of of the event I guess....
This was a humor entry 🤣
This was a humor entry 🤣
Re: Re. That’s much more than I can bear …
28th Dec 2024 4:44pm
Obviously humor, thus my comment steered as such.
Any nice smell is good, as long as it isn't overdone to where we sneeze and our eyes water, etc. The subtlety of the scent makes our senses more acute. We strive to hone in on it!
Any nice smell is good, as long as it isn't overdone to where we sneeze and our eyes water, etc. The subtlety of the scent makes our senses more acute. We strive to hone in on it!
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28th Dec 2024 4:47pm
Old Spice really is the King of yesteryear.
I'm surprised it's still made actually.
You know that sweet scent in a second.
A scent Bukowski could of written a novel around ...
I'm surprised it's still made actually.
You know that sweet scent in a second.
A scent Bukowski could of written a novel around ...
Re. That’s much more than I can bear …
28th Dec 2024 10:40pm
Always keep extra deodorant for the ladies. She's happy and she thank you harder. Keep on writing.
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28th Dec 2024 11:50pm
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11th Jan 2025 3:57pm
Haha ..the last two lines made me chuckle...
Enjoyed your piece ,dear poet 🌹
Enjoyed your piece ,dear poet 🌹
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11th Jan 2025 4:16pm
It's a fun write.
Glad you liked it.
Someone suggested I buy her her own deodorant and store it at my place.
That makes sense ....
Thanks ID 🤠
Glad you liked it.
Someone suggested I buy her her own deodorant and store it at my place.
That makes sense ....
Thanks ID 🤠