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Sinking Down
A jack of all trades and a master of none
Isn’t that what you told me when you were young?
So many restless nights avoiding the sun
Careless whispers spoken with a poison tongue
Sinking down with the lowest of lows
Words are subtle jabs leading to blows
Never throw stones inside this fragile house
When did you stop listening to such sound advice?
An alley cat stalks the unsuspecting mouse
Playing life’s game costs us more than what’s suffice
Sinking down until insanity seizes control
Lies are a cancer that slowly kills the soul
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
Isn’t that what you told me when you were young?
So many restless nights avoiding the sun
Careless whispers spoken with a poison tongue
Sinking down with the lowest of lows
Words are subtle jabs leading to blows
Never throw stones inside this fragile house
When did you stop listening to such sound advice?
An alley cat stalks the unsuspecting mouse
Playing life’s game costs us more than what’s suffice
Sinking down until insanity seizes control
Lies are a cancer that slowly kills the soul
Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2024
Author's Note
Late night musing. An argument between younger me and current me. Introspection does a soul good! With a little lyrical flavor added to the mix for good measure. Appreciate you.
- Damian DeadLove
" Growing up, it all seems so one-sided
Opinions all provided
The future pre-decided
Detached and subdivided."
- Neil Peart
- Damian DeadLove
" Growing up, it all seems so one-sided
Opinions all provided
The future pre-decided
Detached and subdivided."
- Neil Peart
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Re. Sinking Down
18th Dec 2024 8:13am
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19th Dec 2024 4:44am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Jimmy. The younger version doesn't think things through. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Sinking Down
18th Dec 2024 9:13am
So true Damian about introspection especially good times, superbly crafted ❤️
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19th Dec 2024 4:45am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Pete. I concur, my friend. Glad you connected with the write. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Sinking Down
18th Dec 2024 10:55am
This is excellent. How many times we think about our past and wish we went in a different direction on something.
Well said and a strong message. Love the Neil Peart quote.
Well said and a strong message. Love the Neil Peart quote.
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Re: Re. Sinking Down
19th Dec 2024 4:49am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. Honored to make your RL. Thought you'd dig the quote. It's from one of my favorite Rush songs, "Subdivisions." Glad you connected with the write. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Sinking Down
18th Dec 2024 11:18am
Introspection and self-reflection are essential for growth.
Love this piece. Thinking about my life, the things I would have done differently (and that's a lot, lol) it also makes me realize it brought me here. I appreciate you, my friend.
Love this piece. Thinking about my life, the things I would have done differently (and that's a lot, lol) it also makes me realize it brought me here. I appreciate you, my friend.
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Re: Re. Sinking Down
19th Dec 2024 4:52am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Duende. I think so as well, my friend. Life is full of miles, and miles turn into wisdom. Glad you connected with the write. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Sinking Down
18th Dec 2024 11:41am
I appreciate you sharing your thoughts for life without the distractions and mostly the same situations that sometimes hold us down can be a blessing in disguise for a righteous change of plans for sure it's not over when you lose it's over when you QUITE on living your best life regardless of the situations at hand for a righteous blessing to see you are more stronger than you think 🤔🪬 SHAMAN 🪬👍
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Re: Re. Sinking Down
19th Dec 2024 4:54am
Thanks so much for reading and sharing wisdom, SHAMAN. Glad you connected with the write. Much respect, brother poet. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re: Re. Sinking Down
19th Dec 2024 3:50pm
Thanks for the compliment for sure sometimes we forget about the different stages of life experience is the best teacher 👍💪🪬 SHAMAN 🪬
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Re. Sinking Down
18th Dec 2024 3:06pm
Re: Re. Sinking Down
19th Dec 2024 4:55am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Bat. Glad you liked the write. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Sinking Down
19th Dec 2024 3:03am
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19th Dec 2024 4:57am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. Honored to make your RL. Glad you connected with the write, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
Re. Sinking Down
19th Dec 2024 4:14am
Admitting error is difficult. Sometimes, I look back a few years, and think, "What the hell was I thinking?" That's just the way it goes, man. I guess you can strive for maturity and growth. Like you said, these perceptions of introspection offer more to be known about your identity and personality, and in that, is a sort of admission or observation at least of things to seek forgiveness and change in. To heck with the doubters! I can definitely relate to this. With that said, you use interesting metaphors and analogies, and they're both original and creative, in an attempt to convey what morals and principles you have here. The voice inside those doubts is hard to get rid of, heh. There's a careful balance. You can't pick apart yourself too much, but at the same time, you need to be willing to be humble. Anyway, good read. Thanks for sharing!
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19th Dec 2024 5:13am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, brother. Life is worldly highway, more miles equal wisdom. It is a careful balance indeed, when it comes to introspection. I've always loved old wives tales and quotes. More times than not, they're on point. Who ever came up with those sayings, had a lot of miles on the odometer. I think it's important to humble one's self from time to time. Glad you connected with the write. I always enjoy your analysis. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
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19th Dec 2024 5:22am
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Re. Sinking Down
19th Dec 2024 6:04pm
Oh my goddess...that last line is Power! The energy it takes to maintain false-fronts, if nothing else, is exhausting. And a lie will never outlive you. Crazy how often we forget that. I'm a rotten liar...my face is never on the same page. And I'm perfectly good with that. Another mind nudge here...
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Re: Re. Sinking Down
20th Dec 2024 3:50am
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. False fronts are very tiring indeed. Glad you connected with the write, my friend. Always enjoy your commentary. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian