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Sexual Oxygen
I watch you
Recognition
Need
It's written all over you
Dripping
Sensual carnal desire
The prize is orgasm
Quest
Maddening heights
Mayhem in your loins
There's a price
You haven't paid it yet
Keep breathing lust
Vapor too
I know you
I've lived this
I know how it shakes out
Do you understand ?
Recognition
Need
It's written all over you
Dripping
Sensual carnal desire
The prize is orgasm
Quest
Maddening heights
Mayhem in your loins
There's a price
You haven't paid it yet
Keep breathing lust
Vapor too
I know you
I've lived this
I know how it shakes out
Do you understand ?
Published 9th Dec 2024
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9th Dec 2024 3:49pm
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9th Dec 2024 6:41pm
Nicely Done 👍 STONE MAN 🪨 I WROTE A PIECE WITH THAT NAME AS I ACCEPT THE NAME YOU GAVE ME 🐺 WOLF BAY 🐺 AND 🪬 SHAMAN 🪬👍💪✍️
9th Dec 2024 7:38pm
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10th Dec 2024 12:58pm
I appreciate you sharing your thoughts on so many subjects that you make me think 🤔 hmm I can relate to those words inspired me to take a pen ✍️ to paper 📜 👍✊😏
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9th Dec 2024 8:35pm
I understand, PoetSpeak! But did initially read this as 'Sexual Orgasm' even though you do mention the latter, later, lol. 'Mayhem in your loins'. Love that line! Just make sure they don't get pregnant from your sperm vapour, ok? 😉
9th Dec 2024 8:55pm
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9th Dec 2024 9:06pm
I observe and then I write.
My subject is an outstanding woman of substance...
Thx
My subject is an outstanding woman of substance...
Thx
10th Dec 2024 1:10am
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10th Dec 2024 5:37am
A man can't live on clean thoughts alone. Nice write. Appreciate you.
Damian
Damian
10th Dec 2024 11:28am
That's a very good point Damian ..
My mentor always proclaimed
"Everything in moderation"
Dirty thoughts to poets are their blood and oxygen ...
Thx D
My mentor always proclaimed
"Everything in moderation"
Dirty thoughts to poets are their blood and oxygen ...
Thx D
Anonymous
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11th Dec 2024 12:53pm
13th Dec 2024 8:41pm
Mayhem in your loins?
Now THAT I like!
The title rocks too…
This entire poem just set the room on fire.
Now THAT I like!
The title rocks too…
This entire poem just set the room on fire.
13th Dec 2024 8:54pm
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22nd Dec 2024 11:37pm
Holy smokes.. I missed this one. The subliminal message that is intended for only one person to understand and for all to feel the power behind it is wickedly hot. Nice work!
23rd Dec 2024 1:36am
Definitely intended for someone...
The poem came to me while shaving one day. Thats how my poem process works a lot of the time ..
BIG THANKS
The poem came to me while shaving one day. Thats how my poem process works a lot of the time ..
BIG THANKS
25th Dec 2024 4:16pm
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