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entr'acte...
palm to palm
fingers linked
knuckles pressed into the sheets
the world fades away
everything centered
this place
this time
your breath
caressing my face
my eager gasp
as your veined throb
presses into my hunger
exquisite dimensional spreading
hips shift & rise
seeking further depth
a need to be so deeply seated
there's no room for anything else
thighs wrapped tight around your back
fighting hard to keep greed in check
as the urge to grind & chase completion
burns...through my racing pulse
this is eternity & heaven all rolled together
& I crave the torture of denial
the building of pressure
endurance stressing
until gasps become frantic
gentle touches turn to grasping
& together we fly to faraway lands
time measured in eruptions & spasms
funneling into the vortex of us
as we cling to each other
through the turbulence
slowly returning
from the brink
forehead to forehead
knuckles pressed into the sheets
palm to palm
fingers linked
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23rd Nov 2024 1:27am
Beautifully written, Willow. Into the list it belongs. This write definitely quickens the pulse. Wonderful classic erotic poem. Appreciate you.
DL
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25th Nov 2024 00:10am
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23rd Nov 2024 6:55am
Echo Timagination's comment. A beautiful evocation of the female experience of rampant lovemaking. Favourite lines:
the world fades away
everything centered
this place
this time [so great sex should be]
the world fades away
everything centered
this place
this time [so great sex should be]
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25th Nov 2024 00:11am
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23rd Nov 2024 7:54am
'' your breath
caressing my face
my eager gasp
as your veined throb
presses into my hunger
exquisite dimensional spreading ''
damn!! that hits...
This whole vibe is
such a graphic journey into the realm of ecstasy...whew
caressing my face
my eager gasp
as your veined throb
presses into my hunger
exquisite dimensional spreading ''
damn!! that hits...
This whole vibe is
such a graphic journey into the realm of ecstasy...whew
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25th Nov 2024 00:12am
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Anonymous
23rd Nov 2024 11:53am
Girl…you brought me there with you. PS was right. This is exquisite. And I’m all out of RL room. Damn!! Double damn!!!!
I’m off to the shower now….
I’m off to the shower now….
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25th Nov 2024 00:13am
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24th Nov 2024 2:42am
I agree with everyone above, your words are exhilarating... but also wanted to comment on the formatting and how this poem visually breathes, in... out... wow, very cool!
❤k
❤k
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25th Nov 2024 00:14am
I'm so excited you caught that! I was trying to capture movement visually. You just made my day! Thank you, K
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24th Nov 2024 8:35am
The imagery in this one is stunning. And I LOVE that the first lines came back at the end.
"there's no room for anything else" > and this is how it should be.
You really write erotica like no one else does, sis, tangible & steamy 💕
"there's no room for anything else" > and this is how it should be.
You really write erotica like no one else does, sis, tangible & steamy 💕
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25th Nov 2024 00:14am
First & last lines were my jumping off point. That's as close as I dance to formulaic...thank you, sis 💖