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Too much, not enough ?
When to say too much
When to say not enough
I always say too much
Except when I want to say
EVEN MORE
Like right now
When to say not enough
I always say too much
Except when I want to say
EVEN MORE
Like right now
Author's Note
Musing ...
Painting by Poetspeak
Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. Too much, not enough ?
Dear PS,
Right?! Yes!! Why say 10 words when 30 will do. I love the painting. The beauty and simplicity of the daisies are perfect for saying just the right amount. 😊 xx
H🌷
Right?! Yes!! Why say 10 words when 30 will do. I love the painting. The beauty and simplicity of the daisies are perfect for saying just the right amount. 😊 xx
H🌷
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Re: Re. Too much, not enough ?
3rd Nov 2024 8:22pm
Dear H,
It is one of those poems that write themselves. After all this time I still wonder how this happens. But I don't fight it. Take what's given I'm known to say. I'm glad you get the minimalism approach. I'm into that lately. If I keep talking who know what might fall out 😳
Thanks ✋
Appreciate you
It is one of those poems that write themselves. After all this time I still wonder how this happens. But I don't fight it. Take what's given I'm known to say. I'm glad you get the minimalism approach. I'm into that lately. If I keep talking who know what might fall out 😳
Thanks ✋
Appreciate you
Re. Too much, not enough ?
3rd Nov 2024 7:21pm
I feel at times I say too much, and I am too much. Then I get told I do not say enough. Love this
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Re: Re. Too much, not enough ?
3rd Nov 2024 8:24pm
Poet and writers need to write.
Your conscience eventually will be your guide. Keep bringing it Fia !!
Thanks for commenting 🙂
Your conscience eventually will be your guide. Keep bringing it Fia !!
Thanks for commenting 🙂
Re. Too much, not enough ?
i've been revisiting poems and replacing 3 words with one.
the picture's color and arrangement seems to show indecision itself
then again if you're referring to thoughts outside the site
yeah, sometimes you have to hold back to avoid misery
the picture's color and arrangement seems to show indecision itself
then again if you're referring to thoughts outside the site
yeah, sometimes you have to hold back to avoid misery
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Re: Re. Too much, not enough ?
3rd Nov 2024 8:26pm
I've written thousands of poems. I've also deleted half of them. The fire is still in my belly but making mine medium lately with a tinge of pink...
Thx DB
Thx DB
Re: Re. Too much, not enough ?
3rd Nov 2024 8:29pm
I've got plenty of old ones on hard drive and some sitting on another site I haven't used in years. They need work, lots of work. :)
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Re. Too much, not enough ?
4th Nov 2024 00:28am
Re: Re. Too much, not enough ?
4th Nov 2024 1:43am
The irony is I often used to say too much.
Tried to tell too much truth. I'm more measured now. Learning to listen again actually...
Tried to tell too much truth. I'm more measured now. Learning to listen again actually...
Re. Too much, not enough ?
Anonymous
4th Nov 2024 1:08am
I’ve been known to say too much
I’ve also been told that I’m too much
I say, “then you’re not my people.”
You can never have too much. Unless we’re talking clothes.
Dig the painting too, PS.
I see those flowers as a bunch of pasties. Black is my favorite color. And daisies just happen to be my favorite flower, so it’s a win win.
I’ve also been told that I’m too much
I say, “then you’re not my people.”
You can never have too much. Unless we’re talking clothes.
Dig the painting too, PS.
I see those flowers as a bunch of pasties. Black is my favorite color. And daisies just happen to be my favorite flower, so it’s a win win.
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Re: Re. Too much, not enough ?
4th Nov 2024 1:47am
The painting is one of my favorites too.
It was a painting I did after a long layoff of doing any art. A comeback piece if you will..
I actually did it in color but took the color our digitally to make it more dramatic and monochrome. I think it works both ways depending on mood.
As to speaking my gospel, perhaps I should have been a minister but with no religion, just desire ..
Thanks Mary
It was a painting I did after a long layoff of doing any art. A comeback piece if you will..
I actually did it in color but took the color our digitally to make it more dramatic and monochrome. I think it works both ways depending on mood.
As to speaking my gospel, perhaps I should have been a minister but with no religion, just desire ..
Thanks Mary
Re. Too much, not enough ?
4th Nov 2024 10:21pm
Saying it just right...such a freaking challenge! Love the art. It's like a flower garden dream, where color fades but you can see them in your mind
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Re: Re. Too much, not enough ?
4th Nov 2024 10:28pm
It's a garden of monochrome...
Talking in black and white ...
Stay tuned
New art is coming ...
Thx W
Talking in black and white ...
Stay tuned
New art is coming ...
Thx W
Re. Too much, not enough ?
5th Nov 2024 12:50pm
"When to say too much
When to say not enough" > something I struggle with too...
I think it's all about balance - giving and receiving / sharing and listening.
Great piece, PoetSpeak, LOVE your artwork 🖤🤍🖤
When to say not enough" > something I struggle with too...
I think it's all about balance - giving and receiving / sharing and listening.
Great piece, PoetSpeak, LOVE your artwork 🖤🤍🖤
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Re: Re. Too much, not enough ?
5th Nov 2024 1:31pm
As people and poet's it's a constant struggle to get the right balance but try we must.
It was a quick write and basically did it by itself. I love when that happens !
Thanks on the painting too
Appreciate your comment D
It was a quick write and basically did it by itself. I love when that happens !
Thanks on the painting too
Appreciate your comment D
Re. Too much, not enough ?
6th Nov 2024 00:00am
Happiest of Birthdays, my Scorpio bruthah! I keep forgetting we share the day! I hope yours was blessed with much love and happiness!
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Re: Re. Too much, not enough ?
6th Nov 2024 00:10am
Right back at you Sister A
Scorpios Rock !
We are the silent leaders.
May it all go our way
BIG HAPPY BIRTHDAY 🎂
Scorpios Rock !
We are the silent leaders.
May it all go our way
BIG HAPPY BIRTHDAY 🎂
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6th Nov 2024 00:27am
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6th Nov 2024 2:09am
Re. Too much, not enough ?
9th Nov 2024 7:37pm
It's whenever the spirit tells you. I've been there, I want to say more and the muse bitch slaps me and says "nope, this is good".
BL, great write, and hope you had a great birthday.
BL, great write, and hope you had a great birthday.
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Re: Re. Too much, not enough ?
9th Nov 2024 7:51pm
Yeah Wally
Those muses have a lot to say too.
It's a wonder we listen and actually agree ...
Birthday was great
THX WALLY
Those muses have a lot to say too.
It's a wonder we listen and actually agree ...
Birthday was great
THX WALLY
Re. Too much, not enough ?
13th Nov 2024 12:18pm
Kinda like after a Knick loss (WTF!) versus win (content grunt & then happy silence). : )
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Re: Re. Too much, not enough ?
13th Nov 2024 12:46pm
If the Knicks lose on any given night there's always the Grizzlies... watching every game for both teams thus season. My wife converted me. Strange days...
Re: Re. Too much, not enough ?
15th Nov 2024 12:33pm
So, Knicks #1 & Grizzlies #2. Only becomes contentious if both are in the finals? LOL!
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Re: Re. Too much, not enough ?
15th Nov 2024 1:12pm
That seems very unlikely at this point though I think the Grizzlies have a better team and chance at this point to make the playoffs.
Knicks are still trying to piece together wins.
Every game I watch feels like a playoff atmosphere. And the frequent injuries all around the league are staggering. Something has to give ....
Knicks are still trying to piece together wins.
Every game I watch feels like a playoff atmosphere. And the frequent injuries all around the league are staggering. Something has to give ....