Crumbling to dust

Sometimes we have to go through somethings to do that what is necessary to do for thyself if it's not real love it's time to walk away 💔

Yes, it's useless dwelling on that....
Thank you ,dear poet for sharing your thoughts ❤️

Just let it go like water rolling off your back for if it's to be it shall be your dream defer of your own dreams 👍💪😇

real ache in this piece

Thank you ,dear poet for visiting my page ❤️

Amazing visuals and metaphor.
You convey feelings with such clarity. It's easy to relate to your poetry.
Regards
James

Thank you so much for such uplifting review. Thanks a lot ,dear friend 😊🌹

It does feel like that…
You describe being heartbroken perfectly, poetess.

Thank you so much ,dear 💖

this one is totally sad

Yeah....
Thanks for stopping by ,dear poet 🌹

This encapsulates the pain of a breakup with an intimate connection. I could feel the energy.

One suggestion - you really do not need that final line to make the impact.

Thank you so much ,dear Tams . I'm honoured by the RL add❤️

Thanks for your valuable suggestion...I'll edit it😊

P.S.   it will be very kind of you to share your suggestion n tips on my poems cos that will help me improve my writing skills. I always ask for critique 😊

You're very welcome and thank you for letting me know critique is well-received. I am never really sure. My heads been bitten off more times than I can count for honoring a request for honest critique!

I can understand that some people don't take it easily even though they request "honest critique"....but I mean what I ask for 😊
My main purpose for being on dup is to improve my writing skills. 😊

So much pain in so few words. Nicely done. I really felt this.

Thank you so much ,dear poetess. I'm truly honoured by the reading list add ❤️

Felt your words Dear ❤️

Thank you , Pete

Emotional and vulnerable write
Feeling your sadness expertly proclaimed...
Courage ID

Thank you, dear Poet. ❤️

I can feel the pain in these words. Brilliant write, Dreamz. Appreciate you.

DL

Thank you so much ,dear Damian 🌹