My Air

Well, Rachel...
This was perfectly executed! A great concept and well written.
The whole 'air' choosing people had me intrigued and the end was a great finale.
Once again, great poem all round!

Aww, thank you!

I am really glad that you enjoyed it, and thank you for the add! :D

It means a lot.

Lol, well I appreciate you thinking so.

Now get to work! :P

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Like Mr A said, you had a great concept and threw it down well.

I was wondering if 'had you left' would have been a better start but I don't think it would be.

It's beautifully simple and engaging to the mind.

I think you're voice certainly adds to the whole feeling the poem gives off.

you have a very cool and calm way of speaking poetry .

Great stuff fair play shine on !!

I really struggled with that first line, actually. I didn't want to insinuate that the person hadn't left, but also make it known that this was a thought in the past.

Either way, if I were to change it, then I have to re-read the poem. :P

Well Eamon, you already know how I feel about your comments.

Thanks for checking it out. :)

WOW!! You know poets never know how someone will read their words as there being said. You are an amazing writer and I felt you the whole way through. I can read you in a different light now as thought I can hear you personally.. Absolutely beautiful in every way.. very emotionally charged and felt.. "Bows" ..

Thank you so much, Devilish!!! Fantastic compliment. It's true, some may not really get the emotion behind a piece, unless the writer themselves reads it. Great point.

I am more than In love with this Rachel.. Wow simply beautiful... So heart felt and a bearing of ones soul... =)

Thank you so much! I am very grateful.

I can relate, it's great when realisation seeps in and you can start taking back what was always your's, the last Stanza is my favourite part, but the whole write is great. :)

P.S.  You read it so beautifully and clearly. :)

It is a great feeling to take back your life. Thanks so much for the comment. I am thrilled that you like it.

Oh and thank you for the comment on the audio, I am so self conscious about it, but am relieved with the feedback.

I applaud you for a wonderful piece.


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Thank you! :D

I am glad that you like it.