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maestro
the moon gently descended
on the roof of the earth,
the stars glistened with glee
as the maestro
orchestrated the cosmic
symphony
and the stars sang in
synchronicity.
the moon followed
the notes
of the shooting stars
darting across the skies,
thus creating a
beautiful rhapsody
to which the sea danced
in rhythmic low and highs...
as if in trance,
bewitched by the moonlight,
the wind whispered love tunes...
as the music reached
its crescendo,
moon flower bloomed;
opening up in sweet surrender
her virgin petals
so white n tender,
vibrating in synergy
along with the cosmic melody
exuding mystique aroma
in ecstasy...
lovers kissing, cuddling,
some making love
and promises for keeps
the conductor smiled
as they made beautiful memories
in the enchanting night
to savor for the
rest of their lives
on the roof of the earth,
the stars glistened with glee
as the maestro
orchestrated the cosmic
symphony
and the stars sang in
synchronicity.
the moon followed
the notes
of the shooting stars
darting across the skies,
thus creating a
beautiful rhapsody
to which the sea danced
in rhythmic low and highs...
as if in trance,
bewitched by the moonlight,
the wind whispered love tunes...
as the music reached
its crescendo,
moon flower bloomed;
opening up in sweet surrender
her virgin petals
so white n tender,
vibrating in synergy
along with the cosmic melody
exuding mystique aroma
in ecstasy...
lovers kissing, cuddling,
some making love
and promises for keeps
the conductor smiled
as they made beautiful memories
in the enchanting night
to savor for the
rest of their lives
Published 23rd Sep 2024
Author's Note
Note: moon flower is a kind of flower that blooms at night
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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23rd Sep 2024 10:01pm
23rd Sep 2024 10:20pm
23rd Sep 2024 10:29pm
If I could write like this I'd quit my day job ...
Phenomenal offering
BIG LIKE
RL AWARD
Phenomenal offering
BIG LIKE
RL AWARD
24th Sep 2024 10:22am
God! I'm floored! I guess, this is the best comment I have ever received n that too coming from someone of your calibre...
So honoured by the RL add ,dear poet ❤️
So honoured by the RL add ,dear poet ❤️
23rd Sep 2024 10:35pm
I really liked the thought and flow to this. Theres a simple elegance to this poem 🌼
24th Sep 2024 8:49am
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23rd Sep 2024 11:51pm
24th Sep 2024 10:23am
Thanks a bunch ,dearest Tams❤️
You are a great poetess n review like this means a lot to me ❤️...Thanks a lot 🥰
You are a great poetess n review like this means a lot to me ❤️...Thanks a lot 🥰
24th Sep 2024 00:57am
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24th Sep 2024 11:25am
Oh so beautiful comment ,dear poetess....I'm all over the moon.
Thanks for the RL add❤️
Thanks for the RL add❤️
24th Sep 2024 11:26am
24th Sep 2024 4:03am
Dear ID,
This was like floating on a cloud while reading. I really enjoyed the dream like feel to this and the overall beauty within. Lovely write. H🌷
This was like floating on a cloud while reading. I really enjoyed the dream like feel to this and the overall beauty within. Lovely write. H🌷
24th Sep 2024 11:26am
I'm so glad you enjoyed this piece...very much appreciate your kind words, dear H ❣️
28th Sep 2024 6:05am
28th Sep 2024 12:11pm
I'm so glad you liked it...once again thanks for all the likes and wonderful reviews 💘
