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Jumpstart
The problem is
I haven't jolted you for awhile
If I said it was BDSM
Everyone is on board
We're different though
No labels for us
I just write my mind
When I feel our charter is off key
I want to shake you up
Our battery feels like it's wanting
We need a spark babe
I need you under lock and key
I haven't jolted you for awhile
If I said it was BDSM
Everyone is on board
We're different though
No labels for us
I just write my mind
When I feel our charter is off key
I want to shake you up
Our battery feels like it's wanting
We need a spark babe
I need you under lock and key
Author's Note
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Oil Painting by Poetspeak
Oil Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. Jumpstart
21st Sep 2024 11:12am
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21st Sep 2024 11:21am
Wrote this a few weeks ago and didn't think I would post it. But I changed one word and then it felt okay to release it publicly.
That one word was strangling it but now it's free ...
Thanks on the art ...
That one word was strangling it but now it's free ...
Thanks on the art ...
Re. Jumpstart
21st Sep 2024 11:22am
What an intruiging oil paiting, love this one.
As for labels: I think they are overrated & sometimes you can't put a label on a relationship.
...hope you find that spark again :-)
As for labels: I think they are overrated & sometimes you can't put a label on a relationship.
...hope you find that spark again :-)
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21st Sep 2024 11:25am
As referenced above I had to sit on this one and change something to make it work ...
Funny how one word can make it all feel right again ...
Appreciate
Thx D
Funny how one word can make it all feel right again ...
Appreciate
Thx D
Re. Jumpstart
21st Sep 2024 12:18pm
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21st Sep 2024 12:19pm
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Re. Jumpstart
21st Sep 2024 12:34pm
Its a section of a larger painting.
I've used other sections here too recently.
Oil in painting is da bomb. I need to do it again sometime..
Thank you for that great comment.
I try to be original in everything I do.
Appreciate it Shiloh
I've used other sections here too recently.
Oil in painting is da bomb. I need to do it again sometime..
Thank you for that great comment.
I try to be original in everything I do.
Appreciate it Shiloh
Re. Jumpstart
21st Sep 2024 1:19pm
I haven't commented in a while because I haven't trusted myself. Your work hits home, mostly your artwork. I haven't shared this, but I used to paint, long before I wrote poetry. Maybe someday when I trust myself again I'll paint again. For some reason, it's harder for me than writing.
You inspire me more than anyone I've met here.
You inspire me more than anyone I've met here.
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21st Sep 2024 2:41pm
Goddamn
That's quite a nice thing you just said to Mr.
Thank you Mary !!
I love doing both.
I'm a wordy fuck so poems are easy and art j comes to me in daydreams and I attempt it.
Painting is super satisfying. And contemplative. I hope you find the courage to start again. Starting is the hardest part but there are many rewards ...
Thx
That's quite a nice thing you just said to Mr.
Thank you Mary !!
I love doing both.
I'm a wordy fuck so poems are easy and art j comes to me in daydreams and I attempt it.
Painting is super satisfying. And contemplative. I hope you find the courage to start again. Starting is the hardest part but there are many rewards ...
Thx
Re. Jumpstart
21st Sep 2024 7:46pm
Dude, mentally the pic fell onto landscape view and we mentally named it "Clash." We see a threatening sky, waters crashing a coast, waters swirling and crashing under a pier, and waters crashing from a fall. Great theme for when things eta little to normal. really tight
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21st Sep 2024 8:05pm
Yeah ME
A total chaos offering
But all is good, we are always working out our SUBLIME relationship. It's the only way sometimes....
Thx for the view from inside your watch post...
A total chaos offering
But all is good, we are always working out our SUBLIME relationship. It's the only way sometimes....
Thx for the view from inside your watch post...
Re. Jumpstart
22nd Sep 2024 00:03am
Extra cool art on this one. I keep seeing different things every time I look at it. I love it when art makes me do that.
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22nd Sep 2024 00:26am
Its a BIG painting with a lot of feels.
Oil is the best but I would need a separate workspace to do more. Mostly I work in watercolor and gouache but there's nothing like oil for effect ..
Oil is the best but I would need a separate workspace to do more. Mostly I work in watercolor and gouache but there's nothing like oil for effect ..
Re. Jumpstart
Poem first...the title is perfect for the message in this. Sometimes it just needs that jolt to restart.
Art...goddamn...it's like a moody city-back alley scene. You know I love me some movement & mood. This one has it in spades! LIKE!!
Art...goddamn...it's like a moody city-back alley scene. You know I love me some movement & mood. This one has it in spades! LIKE!!
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22nd Sep 2024 4:34pm
To me, movement in art is the cat's meow so I appreciate that it drives you too 💜
On relationships, I believe in keeping things going with communication even when that's uncomfortable. Some relationships flow on auto-pilot but mine need constant watering to keep them growing..
Thx for your insightful comments Willow ..always
On relationships, I believe in keeping things going with communication even when that's uncomfortable. Some relationships flow on auto-pilot but mine need constant watering to keep them growing..
Thx for your insightful comments Willow ..always
Re. Jumpstart
25th Sep 2024 3:08am
Sparks are essential. ✨️ Spark connection, spark JOY.
I thought I had already commented on this but I guess I just got lost in the art... much to stimulate the imagination in there! Love this art & word combo.
❤️k
I thought I had already commented on this but I guess I just got lost in the art... much to stimulate the imagination in there! Love this art & word combo.
❤️k
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25th Sep 2024 3:38am
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Re. Jumpstart
10th Oct 2024 5:55pm
Don't need tickets for that BDSM train, and it looks like it's packed!
Loving the colors on this.
BL
Loving the colors on this.
BL
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Re: Re. Jumpstart
10th Oct 2024 6:53pm
It's weeks ago and I still have her under lock and key. I'll never be done with her...