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Littered in Shame but Not Sorry
We did that
It was messy but that's where the lust lay
When the guilt bit hard
You wanted to be friends
We all know that's bullshit
Crash and burn lullaby
Nobody survives that unscathed
Then finally we became nothing
I don't hate you
I don't feel nothing
I don't even want to grudge fuck ya
Remember the old days
Bending you over my work desk
On overtime no less
Getting paid for our sins
That was something
We are a zero sum babe
I don't know if you cheated on me
We were already cheating on someone else
How does that cut
Chop meat that's how
Lovers don't eat rib eye steaks
They drink and grunt and get their freak on
You go home to Joe
Maybe you'll pass me in the gutter
Littered in shame but not sorry
It was messy but that's where the lust lay
When the guilt bit hard
You wanted to be friends
We all know that's bullshit
Crash and burn lullaby
Nobody survives that unscathed
Then finally we became nothing
I don't hate you
I don't feel nothing
I don't even want to grudge fuck ya
Remember the old days
Bending you over my work desk
On overtime no less
Getting paid for our sins
That was something
We are a zero sum babe
I don't know if you cheated on me
We were already cheating on someone else
How does that cut
Chop meat that's how
Lovers don't eat rib eye steaks
They drink and grunt and get their freak on
You go home to Joe
Maybe you'll pass me in the gutter
Littered in shame but not sorry
Author's Note
Found this poem in my 2019 entries
Sins speak for themselves
Sins speak for themselves
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Re. Littered in Shame but Not Sorry
18th Sep 2024 8:13pm
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18th Sep 2024 8:22pm
Re. Littered in Shame but Not Sorry
18th Sep 2024 10:34pm
On overtime...sounds like doing double time. Trying to remember if I recall this one back in the day
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Re: Re. Littered in Shame but Not Sorry
18th Sep 2024 11:57pm
It had a different title.
It's working in disguise now ...
May be a short stay rate ...
It's working in disguise now ...
May be a short stay rate ...
Re. Littered in Shame but Not Sorry
Anonymous
19th Sep 2024 00:17am
Best line: Crash and burn lullaby. Lots of other good stuff too.
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19th Sep 2024 00:29am
Re. Littered in Shame but Not Sorry
19th Sep 2024 00:59am
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19th Sep 2024 1:14am
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Re: Re. Littered in Shame but Not Sorry
19th Sep 2024 1:23am
I don't know about being a good poet.
I just love sex and sometimes get a good flow going. I'm a sinner, that's easy to write ..
I just love sex and sometimes get a good flow going. I'm a sinner, that's easy to write ..
Re. Littered in Shame but Not Sorry
19th Sep 2024 9:48am
"Crash and burn lullaby" > some "relationships" are like that.
I think there's a sinner in each of us, whether we're aware of it or not.
Great piece, PoetSpeak.
I think there's a sinner in each of us, whether we're aware of it or not.
Great piece, PoetSpeak.
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19th Sep 2024 10:54am
It's amazing what you find when you go back in time on writing poetry. I'm deleting a lot of poems currently but within doing that arduous task I'm finding stuff I wrote that I actually like ....
This one was based on an actual relationship back in the 1980s. I still communicate with her. It was an awesome affair. We met on the bus going to work and then found out we worked in the same building. The rest is history. I was rogue single at the time and she was living with a guy whom she was going to marry. I knew that relationship was doomed. He turned out to be gay. They had a kid together who then turned out to be gay. She divorced after 7 years of tyranny and moved on. Our relationship was torrid but I was too wild living in my Lou Reed world. She's one of my art admirers now. It's pretty cool 😎
This one was based on an actual relationship back in the 1980s. I still communicate with her. It was an awesome affair. We met on the bus going to work and then found out we worked in the same building. The rest is history. I was rogue single at the time and she was living with a guy whom she was going to marry. I knew that relationship was doomed. He turned out to be gay. They had a kid together who then turned out to be gay. She divorced after 7 years of tyranny and moved on. Our relationship was torrid but I was too wild living in my Lou Reed world. She's one of my art admirers now. It's pretty cool 😎
Re: Re. Littered in Shame but Not Sorry
20th Sep 2024 9:40am
That is quite a romantic story, meeting on the bus and finding out you work in the same building. And both her husband and her son turning out gay.
Amazing you're still in touch with her, that says a lot about the both of you.
Amazing you're still in touch with her, that says a lot about the both of you.
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Re: Re. Littered in Shame but Not Sorry
20th Sep 2024 10:28am
Remarkably I've stayed in touch with several lovers from the past. We did things that went far beyond normal sex. So while we can't do those things now it's nice to have some steamy conversations about what was... I'm lucky that way and grateful for having met those women...
Re. Littered in Shame but Not Sorry
19th Sep 2024 1:36pm
Dear PS,
You’re the sheriff. Sorry and shame are not part of your “S” trilogy. Safe and savvy…better suited. 😁
There’s nothing like a hot torrid romance with no strings that ends well to lift the spirits. Dig, Sexy. Hey! There’s another S word 😊
H🌷
You’re the sheriff. Sorry and shame are not part of your “S” trilogy. Safe and savvy…better suited. 😁
There’s nothing like a hot torrid romance with no strings that ends well to lift the spirits. Dig, Sexy. Hey! There’s another S word 😊
H🌷
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Re: Re. Littered in Shame but Not Sorry
19th Sep 2024 1:59pm
Dear H,
You're a New Yorker, you know !!
Affairs and lust drive me ...
Next stop... Corner of Lust and Degradation..
Thx
😍❤
You're a New Yorker, you know !!
Affairs and lust drive me ...
Next stop... Corner of Lust and Degradation..
Thx
😍❤
Re. Littered in Shame but Not Sorry
19th Sep 2024 3:34pm
So true and relatable, this really should have a million comments to be honest. You always bring it dude, to tight
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Re: Re. Littered in Shame but Not Sorry
19th Sep 2024 3:53pm
Just call me LOL - Lucifer of Lust
I try to bring it from my sordid past.
True story !!
Thx ME
I try to bring it from my sordid past.
True story !!
Thx ME
Re. Littered in Shame but Not Sorry
20th Sep 2024 1:03pm
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20th Sep 2024 1:21pm
You have a good imagination Cipher
Actually she was a brunette with a 34 B as
I recall. The large bosoms came later.
She was very sexy in pre-Madonna kind of way.
Thanks for your comment and RL ADD
Actually she was a brunette with a 34 B as
I recall. The large bosoms came later.
She was very sexy in pre-Madonna kind of way.
Thanks for your comment and RL ADD
Re. Littered in Shame but Not Sorry
You take home a woman from a bar and give her orgasmic bliss over and over again. Keep on writing.
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21st Sep 2024 9:27am