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The Route
Spinning inside my head tonight
Your words left a lasting impression
It’s kinda overwhelming to think
Within the context of your confession
Truths are heavy when laced in guilt
Addiction leaves tiny splinters inside
What you felt was the bricks you carry
Veiled by liquid courage and selfish pride
There is no judgement in this room
Being a witness to every single doubt
I’ll help you return to former glories
Because I memorized the entire route
Your words left a lasting impression
It’s kinda overwhelming to think
Within the context of your confession
Truths are heavy when laced in guilt
Addiction leaves tiny splinters inside
What you felt was the bricks you carry
Veiled by liquid courage and selfish pride
There is no judgement in this room
Being a witness to every single doubt
I’ll help you return to former glories
Because I memorized the entire route
Author's Note
Late night musing. Thinking about my brother in music, the bass player and co-founder of our first and only band together. We've been friends since 1992. He's going through a rough patch.
- Damian DeadLove
"In the night I cry but no one seems to hear
I step into the light but all I feel is fear"
- Mike Tramp (Singer of a little band called, White Lion)
- Damian DeadLove
"In the night I cry but no one seems to hear
I step into the light but all I feel is fear"
- Mike Tramp (Singer of a little band called, White Lion)
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Re. The Route
15th Sep 2024 8:25am
Re: Re. The Route
16th Sep 2024 3:06am
That it can, Jimmy. Thanks so much for your kind words and continued support. Appreciate you.
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Re. The Route
15th Sep 2024 10:05am
Re: Re. The Route
16th Sep 2024 3:08am
Thanks so much, Ryan. I try to be the best friend I can be. Thanks so much for your kind words and continued support. Appreciate you.
DL
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Re. The Route
15th Sep 2024 11:18am
Re: Re. The Route
16th Sep 2024 3:10am
Me too, Pete. I'm gonna do my best to make sure that happens. Thanks for your kind words and continued support. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
Re. The Route
15th Sep 2024 11:43am
Re: Re. The Route
16th Sep 2024 3:13am
Thanks so much for your kind words and continued support, Tams. I try to be the best friend I can possibly be. Appreciate you.
DL
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Re: Re. The Route
16th Sep 2024 3:15am
Thanks so much for your kind words and continued support, Shiloh. I try my best. Appreciate you.
DL
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Re. The Route
15th Sep 2024 11:28pm
Communication is important with friends/family. It takes effort.
We really learn who our friends are when things get tough.
When things are great it's easy to be friends.
But then they go bad and stick with you - those amigos are like gold:)
He's lucky to have you.
We really learn who our friends are when things get tough.
When things are great it's easy to be friends.
But then they go bad and stick with you - those amigos are like gold:)
He's lucky to have you.
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Re: Re. The Route
16th Sep 2024 3:20am
Thanks so much for your kind words and continued support, Adelphina. Yeah, he is a very dear friend. He was the first person who supported my writing, which means he was kinda my first fan. But I'm a fan of his musical abilities, he's a good guy. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
Re. The Route
17th Sep 2024 3:11am
I can feel how deeply you care about him. That is true friendship. DL ;))
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Re: Re. The Route
17th Sep 2024 3:52am
Yeah, he is my best friend. My brother, not by blood, but because we're kindred spirts. Thanks so much for your kind words and continued support, Fia. Means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
Re. The Route
18th Sep 2024 5:12am
Substance abuse is tough, and though you may see many things in which you think you can help, the addict needs to first help themselves. Even if they help themselves, there are many slip-ups, and lost moments of will in time. Idk, I guess this kind of came across to me as your struggle with someone going through addiction. Anyway, good job overall. Again, nice, neat, tidy, solid, concrete conception, put into transition.
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Re: Re. The Route
18th Sep 2024 6:07am
Thanks so much for your kind words and continued support, brother. He asked me for help, but he lives in another state. As a former alcoholic I'm just giving the best advice I can. I realize he has to want it though, he has to want to change. I can't do that part for him. I pray that God gives me the wisdom to get him back on track. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
Re: Re. The Route
18th Sep 2024 6:22am
Yeah, sometimes, that's really all you can do, is give space, allow for change to happen, and hopefully, time can heal.
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Re. The Route
24th Sep 2024 6:08am
What a beautiful ode. I'm glad I came across this one.
Thank you for sharing
Thank you for sharing
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Re: Re. The Route
24th Sep 2024 7:00am
You're welcome. Thanks for your kind words and support. Appreciate you.
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