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Re. Head Case
20th Aug 2024 11:52pm
Def not sounding like love.
Easy to say the words, meaning them a different story.
Cool haiku
Easy to say the words, meaning them a different story.
Cool haiku
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Re: Re. Head Case
20th Aug 2024 11:57pm
Re. Head Case
21st Aug 2024 1:08am
Nice ironic twist in the two lines leading up to her "love" for you. Sounds like you're in the mature stages of a relationship here, where you see that there's a need to put up with each other. Relationships can have a lot of twists and turns. This is a nice way to see that, for what it is.
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21st Aug 2024 11:33am
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Re. Head Case
21st Aug 2024 6:50pm
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21st Aug 2024 7:52pm