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I Am With You
I fly in your dreams
I am your living hope and set belief
I am the sun that keeps away the smothering darkness
That would do anything to clench your pure soul in its icy claws
I bring life and warmth to your weary heart
I am the sole comfort in a world plagued by misery
Though you cannot see me
You can sense me all around you
I am in the flowers, and the trees
I am in the soil that gives way beneath your feet
You question why there is one set of footprints on the ground instead of two
My dear child, it is because I picked you up and now I am carrying you.
I am your living hope and set belief
I am the sun that keeps away the smothering darkness
That would do anything to clench your pure soul in its icy claws
I bring life and warmth to your weary heart
I am the sole comfort in a world plagued by misery
Though you cannot see me
You can sense me all around you
I am in the flowers, and the trees
I am in the soil that gives way beneath your feet
You question why there is one set of footprints on the ground instead of two
My dear child, it is because I picked you up and now I am carrying you.
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This is beautiful. the concept of being carried and showing one set of footprints in the sand shows protection and that you can rely on the person who is holding you. Fia xoxo
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14th Aug 2024 4:34pm
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14th Aug 2024 4:24pm
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Anonymous
14th Aug 2024 5:21pm
Whatever one's spiritual path, the sense that something bigger than us is present in our souls. Carrying us when it's too much to lift alone is a beautiful belief
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15th Aug 2024 1:51am
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14th Aug 2024 5:24pm
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15th Aug 2024 1:50pm
I love where your heart is on this one!
"Though you cannot see me
You can sense me all around you"
Knowing this makes it easier to Trust In God
TIG
"Though you cannot see me
You can sense me all around you"
Knowing this makes it easier to Trust In God
TIG
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16th Aug 2024 2:11am
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16th Aug 2024 12:58pm
Thank you for your comment and for adding my poem to your RL, AfterSexDilemma!
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Anonymous
18th Aug 2024 3:47pm
Beautiful ❤️
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18th Aug 2024 4:26pm
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19th Aug 2024 3:09am
Nicely done. Very beautiful write. God is great. And is always there. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
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19th Aug 2024 3:12am
Amen. Thank you for your comment, Damian. It's always a pleasure to hear from you.