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On The Line
I put my heart and soul on the line
Not just once but everytime
I tried my best to live my life
The way God meant for me to do
But life picked me up, tossed me around
Left me facedown on the ground
Maybe, there's a way to die
Another place, another time
Where shallow people hide their face
Crumbling down in mere disgrace
And evil can't be found anywhere
Where people have some time to spare
I've tossed and turned then still got burned
By those who swore they really cared
Left to wonder what I've done to anyone
Now the ache is more than I can take
In a world of chaos full of so much fakery
I solomly ask the Lord to take me
Not just once but everytime
I tried my best to live my life
The way God meant for me to do
But life picked me up, tossed me around
Left me facedown on the ground
Maybe, there's a way to die
Another place, another time
Where shallow people hide their face
Crumbling down in mere disgrace
And evil can't be found anywhere
Where people have some time to spare
I've tossed and turned then still got burned
By those who swore they really cared
Left to wonder what I've done to anyone
Now the ache is more than I can take
In a world of chaos full of so much fakery
I solomly ask the Lord to take me
Author's Note
I am in the hospital feeling like dying. This too will pass.
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Re. On The Line
29th May 2024 11:08pm
It's not over when you lose it's over when you QUITE 🤫 for you are much stronger than you think you will over come through time that will heal the spiritual subconsciousness of your mind and spiritual soul 🙏 I love how you express your thoughts on this one for it's something that we all can relate too 🤫🙏🪷📿🪬 SHAMAN 111 📿🪷
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29th May 2024 11:33pm
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30th May 2024 2:39am
You are welcome and I hope that my thoughts and prayers and inspiring words be filled with blessings to you 💖📿🙏
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29th May 2024 11:37pm
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30th May 2024 00:22am
Re. On The Line
30th May 2024 00:59am
Holding you in thought, my friend.
And I’m sending you some extra special healing and comforting vibes.
If they aren’t working quick enough, let me know. I’ll come down there and kick some doctor ass and make them heal you💕
And I’m sending you some extra special healing and comforting vibes.
If they aren’t working quick enough, let me know. I’ll come down there and kick some doctor ass and make them heal you💕
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30th May 2024 1:11am
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30th May 2024 1:24am
Here’s the thing:
When we know who we are, it can’t be taken from us. And if you’re struggling with that right now, the very best thing you can do is write. Poetry is a healing language (WillowsWhimsies words, not mine).
I got you girl❤️
When we know who we are, it can’t be taken from us. And if you’re struggling with that right now, the very best thing you can do is write. Poetry is a healing language (WillowsWhimsies words, not mine).
I got you girl❤️
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Re. On The Line
Anonymous
30th May 2024 4:26am
I know what those places are like. Get well soon, Faith.
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Re. On The Line
30th May 2024 5:50am
Dear F,
Oh no! I’m so sorry to read this. It’s a terrible feeling not being able to help in a tangible way. I’ve got prayers going every which way for your recovery. Please feel better as fast as possible. H❤️
Oh no! I’m so sorry to read this. It’s a terrible feeling not being able to help in a tangible way. I’ve got prayers going every which way for your recovery. Please feel better as fast as possible. H❤️
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Re. On The Line
30th May 2024 6:08am
I’m so sorry… are you okay?… we are all praying for you in our own way…. Please get well soon…a queen is strong and will conquer all… you’ll feel well very soon… I’m sure you will.
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Re. On The Line
31st May 2024 1:07am
Sending you some healing vibes.
It sucks when we feel down for the count.
Hopefully today you feel a little better:)
It sucks when we feel down for the count.
Hopefully today you feel a little better:)
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31st May 2024 2:06am
Re. On The Line
5th Jun 2024 11:52pm
Simply brilliant. I can totally relate. Into the list it goes. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
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Re: Re. On The Line
6th Jun 2024 9:35pm
Thank you for your wonderful remarks. I appreciate both them and the Reading List entry.
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