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Time to increase the dosage.
I'm out with the gout
all in my knee.
So woe is me,
without a doubt,
with my old right hip grousing about
in anatomic solidarity.
But I've some tricksy pills, ya see,
with an anti inflammation clout,
plus, a night of sleep will surely be
the route that puts the pain to rout.
Pleasant dreams 💞
all in my knee.
So woe is me,
without a doubt,
with my old right hip grousing about
in anatomic solidarity.
But I've some tricksy pills, ya see,
with an anti inflammation clout,
plus, a night of sleep will surely be
the route that puts the pain to rout.
Pleasant dreams 💞
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Re. Time to increase the dosage.
18th May 2024 4:30am
Re: Re. Time to increase the dosage.
18th May 2024 8:41pm
Thanks for the vibes!
The knee is getting back to normal so maybe those vibes did some good 😊
The knee is getting back to normal so maybe those vibes did some good 😊
Re. Time to increase the dosage.
18th May 2024 5:47am
You may be in pain with the gout, but without a doubt you still write with clout.
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Re: Re. Time to increase the dosage.
18th May 2024 8:44pm
Re. Time to increase the dosage.
18th May 2024 6:21am
Dear MS,
I’m sorry you’re in pain but your poem is a tonic for the reader. Sad subject clever write. I wish you a very speedy recovery. H🌷
I’m sorry you’re in pain but your poem is a tonic for the reader. Sad subject clever write. I wish you a very speedy recovery. H🌷
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Re: Re. Time to increase the dosage.
18th May 2024 8:49pm
Thanks!
I've been managing it for ten years or so with minimal meds but I may have to bump it up a notch, and hopefully accomplished with an E-mail to the doctor office.
I've been managing it for ten years or so with minimal meds but I may have to bump it up a notch, and hopefully accomplished with an E-mail to the doctor office.
Re. Time to increase the dosage.
18th May 2024 4:30pm
Aging sucks at times, but it's still better than the alternative. That you've captured the essence of it poetically for sure!
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Re: Re. Time to increase the dosage.
18th May 2024 8:56pm
Turning 60 has been a challenge, and I will have to make some lifestyle adjustments for sure, but at least there's no direct threats to the pulse so far, just a creaky skeleton!
Perfect for Halloween 🎃
Perfect for Halloween 🎃
Re. Time to increase the dosage.
27th Jul 2024 00:57am
Liked the approach that even through the pain, inspiration to spill poetry shines through.
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Re: Re. Time to increase the dosage.
27th Jul 2024 1:18am