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Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
On the seventh day
Poetspeak rested
From posting sex poems that is
Instead there is art
The day is still young however
Artists are known for excess
So
Stay tuned
You never know ….
Poetspeak rested
From posting sex poems that is
Instead there is art
The day is still young however
Artists are known for excess
So
Stay tuned
You never know ….
Author's Note
Gouache Collage on cardboard by Poetspeak
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Re. Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
5th May 2024 7:59pm
Re: Re. Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
5th May 2024 8:08pm
Been doing collage for about 2 months.
Did a whole bunch of them.
This one is a bit different in scope so I’m glad it resonated with you Tim
BIG THANKS
Did a whole bunch of them.
This one is a bit different in scope so I’m glad it resonated with you Tim
BIG THANKS
Re. Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
5th May 2024 8:25pm
At one time we was thinking books on a shelf, then we was thinking inside of a tv that's signing off. We can and do think on somethings to freaking hard, which really says something for your talent dude We have a painfully short attention span so your pieces are perfect for us, Again totally tight
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Re: Re. Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
5th May 2024 10:23pm
It's ironic ME because my attention span is minimal too. But for some reason I find collage making to hold my attention. Odd how that works. It's a real challenge and I love doing it. Glad it rings your bell 🔔
Appreciate your comment
Thanks
Appreciate your comment
Thanks
Re. Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
5th May 2024 8:28pm
Re: Re. Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
5th May 2024 10:25pm
There's a lot going on for sure.
So many pieces need to be cut and glued in.
It's odor free glue or else I'd be high as a kite
Thanks Willow ✋
So many pieces need to be cut and glued in.
It's odor free glue or else I'd be high as a kite
Thanks Willow ✋
Re. Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
5th May 2024 8:31pm
Re: Re. Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
5th May 2024 10:26pm
Re. Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
5th May 2024 8:40pm
No sex?! I’m out!
But this was really a new direction for you. The intentions in this feel, I don’t know, meatier? Like there is a more solid base to stand on, as if the chaos makes sense on the outside.
Fucking like it.
But this was really a new direction for you. The intentions in this feel, I don’t know, meatier? Like there is a more solid base to stand on, as if the chaos makes sense on the outside.
Fucking like it.
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Re: Re. Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
5th May 2024 10:28pm
No sex, can you believe it ?
It's a wonder anyone gives a shit.
Especially because it's me, a SEX GOD if ever there was one. A little Betty in that line, right ??
Thx bombshell !!
It's a wonder anyone gives a shit.
Especially because it's me, a SEX GOD if ever there was one. A little Betty in that line, right ??
Thx bombshell !!
Re. Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
5th May 2024 9:03pm
once there was only space black as spades I dream in living color my son is chained to the old ways did you see the rain, reign, I am a diamond as are you now shine in the varied spectrums I love this but not the number a numeral assignment is a chain I recognize this as your signature.
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Re: Re. Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
5th May 2024 10:30pm
Thanks Brenda
But you got to do me a favor and get off the meth and cleanup.
Do that for me, do that for yourself...
But you got to do me a favor and get off the meth and cleanup.
Do that for me, do that for yourself...
Re: Re. Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
6th May 2024 00:30am
when the nazis quit marching against the jews and my people are all free I will don't judge the chain judge it's maker.
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Re. Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
5th May 2024 11:32pm
Dear PS,
Big Dig for reals! Love the art, that’s a given but I got quite a giggle from this poem. “On the seventh day
Poetspeak rested” best two liner ever!
Thank you for the smile today. Terrific as per. H🌷
Big Dig for reals! Love the art, that’s a given but I got quite a giggle from this poem. “On the seventh day
Poetspeak rested” best two liner ever!
Thank you for the smile today. Terrific as per. H🌷
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Re: Re. Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
5th May 2024 11:50pm
Dear H,
WOW, BEST LINE EVER 👏!!
THAT'S AN AMAZING COMMENT !!!!
NOT SURE WHAT TO SAY
I GUESS IT'S GOTTA BE:
HUGE THANKS
APPRECIATE
GLAD YOU GOT A LAUGH
NO MORE CAPS
🤠❤
WOW, BEST LINE EVER 👏!!
THAT'S AN AMAZING COMMENT !!!!
NOT SURE WHAT TO SAY
I GUESS IT'S GOTTA BE:
HUGE THANKS
APPRECIATE
GLAD YOU GOT A LAUGH
NO MORE CAPS
🤠❤
Re. Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
6th May 2024 00:43am
Re: Re. Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
6th May 2024 00:48am
Re. Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
6th May 2024 2:30am
Hey PS!
I love all of the lines in this. It almost feels like it's moving.
Great piece!!
Strong color choices too. They stand out and grab attention:)
I love all of the lines in this. It almost feels like it's moving.
Great piece!!
Strong color choices too. They stand out and grab attention:)
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Re: Re. Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
6th May 2024 3:04am
Hey Adel,
Thanks for your great comment !
I was really happy with the way this collage turned out. I love working around numbers on cardboard. I'm really into using recycled materials as backers and creating poems around them.
As I always say...
Stay tuned for more !!
Thanks
Thanks for your great comment !
I was really happy with the way this collage turned out. I love working around numbers on cardboard. I'm really into using recycled materials as backers and creating poems around them.
As I always say...
Stay tuned for more !!
Thanks
Re. Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
6th May 2024 11:37am
Oh no, not sex? How can that be?
Having said that, what an incredibly beautiful collage (propably my favorite of yours so far) and a lovely, yet little cryptic poem to go along with it!
Having said that, what an incredibly beautiful collage (propably my favorite of yours so far) and a lovely, yet little cryptic poem to go along with it!
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Re: Re. Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
6th May 2024 12:29pm
It does seem crazy, no sex, impossible right ?
Appreciate your praise on this collage. I think it's my favorite too ?
Stay tuned
You know more will come ...
Appreciate your praise on this collage. I think it's my favorite too ?
Stay tuned
You know more will come ...
Re. Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
6th May 2024 5:15pm
Your collage has Amazing depth. I feel like I could walk 30 feet into it. Really unique in that it has a frenzied surface but somehow feels safe and sheltering. Beautiful piece.
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Re: Re. Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
6th May 2024 6:18pm
It does have a depth feeling
I'm not sure that occurred, with collage I'm finding its all about making pieces fit...
I'm glad you got a good feeling from it, that makes me happy !!
Thanks Thor
Stay tuned
I'm not sure that occurred, with collage I'm finding its all about making pieces fit...
I'm glad you got a good feeling from it, that makes me happy !!
Thanks Thor
Stay tuned
Re. Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
7th May 2024 00:15am
The best poem I've read in a while. We all try so hard to appear like we're not trying, yet you achieve this affect as if you don't give a f*ck. Oh, how we agonize what words to use, slamming our hands in car doors just to convey the pain and lo! on the seventh day we rest with bandaged hands.
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Re: Re. Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
7th May 2024 1:13am
Now that's a comment I can believe in.
These collages tell stories. Bits and pieces of our fractured lives. Its my job to lay the groundwork and color ...
Many thanks APPS
Appreciate
These collages tell stories. Bits and pieces of our fractured lives. Its my job to lay the groundwork and color ...
Many thanks APPS
Appreciate
Re. Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
7th May 2024 00:34am
Re: Re. Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
7th May 2024 1:15am
I'm having a hoot making these collages.
A lot of thinking and glue. Very meditative, I've done a lot in 6 weeks.
More to come
Thanks Ahavati
A lot of thinking and glue. Very meditative, I've done a lot in 6 weeks.
More to come
Thanks Ahavati
Re. Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
9th May 2024 3:11am
I'm sure your sexual speak hiatus is short lived! Lol.
You can't be letting down the masses from their expectations sir!
Light that fire.
You can't be letting down the masses from their expectations sir!
Light that fire.
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Re: Re. Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
9th May 2024 3:56am
Re. Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
9th May 2024 8:58pm
Ah dude, that is a solid piece of art. I love that line "The day is still young however", you rascal and I mean that kindly.
LJ
LJ
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Re: Re. Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
9th May 2024 9:10pm
I like this comment LJ.
It's always special to me when you read me and drop me a line.
Yeah, I always want to be a rascal.
Life revolves around being a little bad.
Stay tuned, the day is young
Thx !
It's always special to me when you read me and drop me a line.
Yeah, I always want to be a rascal.
Life revolves around being a little bad.
Stay tuned, the day is young
Thx !
Re. Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
19th Jul 2024 3:50pm
Re: Re. Collage 140 - Sorry, Not a Sex Poem
19th Jul 2024 8:08pm
I'm really into my collage world lately...
Found my art calling possibly!!
Thx Wally
Found my art calling possibly!!
Thx Wally