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I know who you speak of. You're a very blessed and lucky man.
I once called her beautiful with each comment.
She found a great guy.

Thanks Tim.
I don't take for granted anything positive.  

Beautiful expression of deep passion. The animal analogies bring the primal energy to life.

Whew!  I'm not much of a physically erotic writer, so it's risky when I do. I've never been one to kiss and tell in reality. That's what it seems like to me, so I'm cautious.
But if I'm told "Hell yeah!",  then I will post it. Lol.
 Thanks for letting me know your thoughts on it, Pink. I was leery!

Damn Styx, you're a word weaver!  Digging the poem, love this part:

"I love how your eyes try
to pay me back, during
this thrashing with scissors

Who the hell runs with them
anyway"

LJ

Hey you!  
I'm waiting for my sleeping pills to kick in....

This is a crazy write, I know. All kinds of ideas centering on one subject.  The ideas started out one way, but then the images took it "deeper".  Lol.

I rarely get very graphic. I'm all metaphoric. But sometimes, blunt is best?

Good seeing ya here!  

That was a wild read, I like the way the the intensity built and
unfolded. I think you did great!

Hey D-Bear!
You caught on to the progression easy enough?  I felt that I needed to break from my norm a bit.
And I appreciate you letting me know it gets a passing grade. Lol

But wait.THE FUCK WITH THIS WRITING?!

OMG. Hot. As. Shit.

Also, really well written. The literary images in this were stand-on-the-couch-and-throw-shit amazing.

Resurrected virgins?
Cinnamon rolls?
OMG, what?!

The end was amazing, the BUILD up to the end was amazing! I can see why you'd get a HELL YEAH, because, dude, HELL YEAH. Just the entire spicy scene was really amazing.

Dammit I'm laughing out loud at your antic filled reply. Awesome!  Lol.

And yeah, resurrected virgins as in the newness can make things seem little awkward at first.
But hopefully things go smoothly from there!
Or, rough. Lol

Besides, it was time for me to snap out of my typcially stoic versions.  

Awesome reply, Sis from another Mrs. Lol

This isn't the way you normally write so that makes it more phenomenal..
Taking chances rules.
Echoing all the other great comments here.
I used to call her Hot Sauce 🔥.   You probably knew that and know it even better now.
Fucking A title !

BIG LIKE  

I love the title!  It's a bit intimidating and can be misconstrued, yeah. But it also fits the write,  if the reader knows their slang. Lol.
  And yes, obviously this is a big jump for me, as far as the content. But, it was time to break out of the routine, and bring some fire. Lol.
 I actually edited it a bit awhile ago. A little.

She's quite a nice surprise in my life.  Thats all I'm saying about that!  

Thanks Gary, I may have another go at this genre again sometime. Lol

As someone who typically prefers to use metaphor & alternate phrasing for erotica, I absolutely love this one! Eyes trying to pay you back...brilliant! Very nicely done!!

Yep. There's something about that look in the eyes when everything is intense!  It's like you possess them for a minute. Lol.
I didn't want to be too graphic and lose the artistic appeal of the write. A lot of erotica is written too basic. Like a play by play, tab A to slot B aspect.  Nah.
But, sometimes there's no other way to say things. So we as writers have to find ways to make it more enticing, right?
Thank you Willow.  I was a little bit reluctant to post this. I appreciate the nod!

That was like an X-rated carnival ride.... 😁

Hahaha!  I love carnivals!  The roller coasters are my faves.
Even the Ferris wheels, because I love heights!  

Hey I hope you're doing good over on your side of things, Madame!

Really enjoyed this. A very different kind write for you.

What's up!  
I was feeling a little stale and decided to mess some things up with my words. Lol.
And I really appreciate knowing it was worth the read. So thank you!

My type of erotica Styxian .
Clean but sharp playful but passionate.
Well penned my friend.
I echo what others have said.
Jackie 👍🏻☺️

Thank you Jackie.
I want it to have some artistic value, and not just a shock value, ya know?  I rarely write erotica obviously. I'm more into the psyche aspect of people. But, once in awhile, a man has to just say hell with it, and get physically wordy. Lol

Well hello:))  
 
What a write!! A lot of truth in here mister!!    
You write it so well but not as well as you piston with such precision.  
Like the well oiled machine you are. hehehe  
okay okay - I'll behave -  but only until I see ya!  
 
This has loads of primal sexual aggression.  
Very sleek my love  
You totally made my night when you sent me this write!!  
Of course I said HELL YEAH to post:)  
 
Love you tiger!!  
 
oh and the pic!!  
I needed to give a shout out to the pic!!  
I can only hope my legs are that straight - but you are right -  
it screams cramps are soon to follow!! blahahahaha

Hey lover, we are one each on tap out for a cramp!  That's not bad considering how much we f...
frolic!
Hey see you in six days!  (Although we are on video chat as we both are on DUP right now!)

 And give yourself some props, I'm reawakened because of you!  I had no idea we would become so much.
  Oh, and the new avatar pic you're using, a white shirt representing purity!  What!  

Smooches!  

Tasteful and playful.

Thank you Verdonna.  Welcome to DUP. I will check out your own page shortly!  

*GULP!!!!!*

Hey there's a lot of risque writing going on in here, I figured I'd take a shot at it. Lol

Your poetic pacing sets the perfect proverbial stage for
your smooth aggression and sexual intellect...

this is top notch indeed.....

much respect

Naaj
 

Much appreciated, Naajir. I was basically winging it, hoping something would come of it. I've since edited it somewhat on my tablet, maybe I will edit this version as well.
 Thank you so much for your keen reply.

Whew! Get a fan out, because that’s one hot poem! Ow ow! Perfect rhythm and description, fun playful teasing with elegant words. Love it!

Cool comment!  
It's a bit out of my normal stuff perhaps, but it doesn't mean I can't step out sometimes.  Lol.
 I gotta keep up with the fire starters in here!

There's deep passion here but more than that there's chemistry. Like it's meant to be.
Completely free, uninhibited expression of physical love.  Nice work.

Thanks for the positivity.  And you are right, it is very real.  Sometimes it may be difficult to capture it in a creative sense. But I do try.  So thank you!

Haha greatness. May the 4th be with you and your lover:)

Lol, with our schedule we will take any dates !  
Thanks for the cheer!