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Carnival
I’ll be your candy apple,
your sticky, sweet serene.
You’ll slide inside my ultra glide
and glaze my Krispy Kreme.
I taste like cotton candy.
You pound my tambourine.
I twirl my skirt. “Please make this hurt!”
You rip me at the seam.
Your bumper car has busted
my cherry jellybean.
You stretch and break my funnel cake
until I start to scream.
The carnival has ended.
I’m pouring like a stream.
You’ve won your prize between my thighs.
I lick your pretzel clean..
Published 4th May 2024
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Bobbing for Apples
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4th May 2024 5:12pm
So dirty but yet so fucking cute at the same time. Well done Kitty.
4th May 2024 5:32pm
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4th May 2024 6:04pm
hello lovely kittne you outfit is lovely but your picture here looks like a dead woman there is death of the soul of the body and of space you know woman?
4th May 2024 7:00pm
Wow... I was not aware of all that, but thanks for your perspective. Death wasn't on my mind, actually.
Thanks for reading, though.
Thanks for reading, though.
4th May 2024 6:11pm
A lot of double entendre using sweet foods here! (Puts a new twist on the malapropism "Carnival knowledge"!)
4th May 2024 7:03pm
Ha! I was not aware of the malapropism. Thanks for checking this out, Solomon! The double entendre was intentional.
4th May 2024 7:11pm
The double meanings are a treat. Love the idea of sex & carnivals. Great play on words and the poem is enticing. I don't have a ticket, can you sneak me in?
4th May 2024 7:24pm
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4th May 2024 7:32pm
Yummy. I love ripe apples extra sweet with honey.
Need a dentist after this Kitten
Fia xoxo
Need a dentist after this Kitten
Fia xoxo
4th May 2024 7:33pm
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4th May 2024 9:41pm
This is it… I’m never going to take my kids to the carnival ever again … you’ve just destroyed my kids dreams … satisfied now?! And no cotton candy for them either
4th May 2024 9:45pm
Sit down and eat your lasagna, Sam. I never expected you to take your kids anywhere except to church.
I'll be in the confessional booth last on the left.
Meg
I'll be in the confessional booth last on the left.
Meg
4th May 2024 9:50pm
Oh god … I have a confession to make … I swear if I get out of that confession booth I’m going to pay my taxes… so help me god.
4th May 2024 9:55pm
Someone here is teaching me how to tie knots, Sam.
Your taxes are the least of your concerns
Your taxes are the least of your concerns
5th May 2024 00:54am
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5th May 2024 3:48am
There's really only one sweet treat, Mr. Wolf... and what big teeth you have, the better to enjoy it
