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Go Ahead
Walk off it
You’re living a lie anyway
So what difference does it make?
You’re living a lie anyway
So what difference does it make?
Author's Note
Copyright @ Her 2024. All rights reserved.
Took this pic of my favorite pier last fall.
Took this pic of my favorite pier last fall.
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Re. Go Ahead
25th Apr 2024 2:57pm
ok I will... I will walk off it.. but just because you asked... knowing you will be there to catch me... amazing poem.. the picture is breathtaking
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25th Apr 2024 2:59pm
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25th Apr 2024 3:10pm
Lovely moody pic, really arty. How far do you want them to walk? It's a good job that gate is closed, don't you think? 😉
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I'm sooo sorry. I misread that first line as 'walk it off'. You know, the frustration, alcohol, you name it. The context of my comment makes absolutely no sense now, lol. But it's still a great picture & there is a saying, "Take a long walk off a short pier!" I will say this, however... the pier looks short enough! 🤣
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25th Apr 2024 3:20pm
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25th Apr 2024 3:37pm
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25th Apr 2024 3:46pm
I freaking love this truth, with black n white photo of long pier
Love this!!!!!!!
Love this!!!!!!!
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Re. Go Ahead
25th Apr 2024 5:41pm
The fact that the photo is in black and white adds to the mood. I like it.
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25th Apr 2024 7:45pm
This is priceless, dear lady! There's more than one way to tell a man to bugger off! My heavens! Love this one!
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25th Apr 2024 10:08pm
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25th Apr 2024 10:09pm
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8th May 2024 5:39am
Dear H,
Ha! What I would give to have this pier by me because I have a few people I’d suggest walking off it. Great piece. Stunning photo, h🌷
Ha! What I would give to have this pier by me because I have a few people I’d suggest walking off it. Great piece. Stunning photo, h🌷
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Re. Go Ahead
8th May 2024 12:56pm