The Room

You had to do that … didn’t you?

No, but you wanted me to.  I know you.  Now, bend over...

What the heck is wrong with nurses these days… every time they tell me to bend over… is this part of your nursing training or something!?

This is part of YOUR training, Sam.  You don't talk back to nurses.

Significant and intriguing.
Waht will tomorrow bring?
Richard

I'm so glad you asked...

Slightly belated welcome to DUP. Reads to me as a last look round what had been a shared home. Favourite chunk:

This room has seen me spread my wings
and writhe beneath your welcome weight, [HOT imagery]
has heard me scream,
has watched me quake.
Then when it seemed that I would break,
this room, like sanctuary made
the burn recede.
It dulled the blade.

Thanks for letting me know and checking this out

meg

I very much like the ending - really captured the feeling of love and happiness lost.

Sorry you needed to write it.

I'm so glad you liked it, and I'm not sorry I had to write it.  I took care of that at the top.

Alright... let's just back the hell up.
Your shlong is sixteen inches, and you mow the grass with it, but you are single.  
(shakes her head)

You need me to show you what to do with that mower don't you...

Just put up a fence

I think your room is crowded, girl. Love the poem and yes she had to do that. Fia xoxo

You're invited anyway

Coming 🔥

That's what I always want to hear from you...

You wrote a beautiful poem, an honorable mention in the competition.

Thank you!