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Safe House
I ran away
From myself
Left all the riches
Took a one bedroom above the drug store
After they close up shop
Can blast my music all night
Maybe put a pick-up on my cello
Abstract the notion of classical
Shredding the strings beyond reason
One day I'll go back
When I've written my opus
I'll stand away from the crowd though
Never going on that fucking Today show
From myself
Left all the riches
Took a one bedroom above the drug store
After they close up shop
Can blast my music all night
Maybe put a pick-up on my cello
Abstract the notion of classical
Shredding the strings beyond reason
One day I'll go back
When I've written my opus
I'll stand away from the crowd though
Never going on that fucking Today show
Author's Note
Painting by Poetspeak
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Re. Safe House
21st Apr 2024 7:42pm
Life in NYC, or at least that's what it sounds like to me reading the poem.
Brilliant! Real!, no bullshit, no filler, love it!
Brilliant! Real!, no bullshit, no filler, love it!
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21st Apr 2024 10:05pm
Thanks K.O.
Running away always has some kind of appeal.
Starting over where nobody knows you is an interesting concept ….
Appreciate your read and comment !
Running away always has some kind of appeal.
Starting over where nobody knows you is an interesting concept ….
Appreciate your read and comment !
Re. Safe House
21st Apr 2024 8:13pm
I've never been successful at running away from myself. Wherever I go...there I am! But if you need an appreciative audience for the cello...that's my mood
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21st Apr 2024 10:07pm
I love cello music.
I can’t play it but I envision myself doing so.
It’s so moody like me.
Mostly cloudy music …
Thanks Willow
I can’t play it but I envision myself doing so.
It’s so moody like me.
Mostly cloudy music …
Thanks Willow
Re. Safe House
21st Apr 2024 8:19pm
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21st Apr 2024 10:10pm
Straight, No Chaser
Song by Thelonious Monk
That dude could tinkle the 88’s
BIG THANKS bk
Song by Thelonious Monk
That dude could tinkle the 88’s
BIG THANKS bk
Re: Re. Safe House
21st Apr 2024 10:48pm
I know that piece well. Love Monk ( Goodbye Pork Pie Hat)
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re: Re. Safe House
21st Apr 2024 10:48pm
I know that piece well. Love Monk ( Goodbye Pork Pie Hat)
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
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Re. Safe House
21st Apr 2024 10:04pm
Fuck the Today Show
go for
Saturday Night Live
assuming that's still running lol
go for
Saturday Night Live
assuming that's still running lol
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Re: Re. Safe House
21st Apr 2024 10:24pm
I haven’t watched SNL in years. It stoped being funny around 1980. Today show just as bad …
Network TV mostly blows ..
Thx for your comment AP !
Network TV mostly blows ..
Thx for your comment AP !
Re. Safe House
21st Apr 2024 10:54pm
The underrated musical genius Roy Wood, the founder of ELO, (along with Jeff Lynn) was the first to combine classical with rock and roll. The result worked quite well, obviously.
Very cool art. I like running away too. Never escape myself but get to see new places.
Play that funky cello white boy...
Very cool art. I like running away too. Never escape myself but get to see new places.
Play that funky cello white boy...
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Yeah, I remember those dudes.
Jeff Lynn especially
I don’t play the cello. Only in my fantasies.
But those fantasies are pretty intense just like my other wants and desires …
I wonder what happened to Emerson, Lake and a Palmer ? They don’t seem to be around at 80 singing Brain Salad Surgery or whatever that song was ?
Thx Pink
You thrive in this kind of write I think..
Jeff Lynn especially
I don’t play the cello. Only in my fantasies.
But those fantasies are pretty intense just like my other wants and desires …
I wonder what happened to Emerson, Lake and a Palmer ? They don’t seem to be around at 80 singing Brain Salad Surgery or whatever that song was ?
Thx Pink
You thrive in this kind of write I think..
Re. Safe House
21st Apr 2024 11:30pm
Hmm. This is an interesting write, PS.
The metaphor of running, when you lead such a stand-and-fight life, is excellent.
I liked the way you committed to your art, the way you pushed aside bullshit until you'd done what you came to do. It was a powerful moment, and you paired it well with the muted orange; which gives a sunset or end of day vibe. As if to say, this is closing, but it's not finished. The circles felt like eye, and I feel like that was intentional.
Nice.
This had a lot of depth to it. I enjoy this side of you.
The metaphor of running, when you lead such a stand-and-fight life, is excellent.
I liked the way you committed to your art, the way you pushed aside bullshit until you'd done what you came to do. It was a powerful moment, and you paired it well with the muted orange; which gives a sunset or end of day vibe. As if to say, this is closing, but it's not finished. The circles felt like eye, and I feel like that was intentional.
Nice.
This had a lot of depth to it. I enjoy this side of you.
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Re: Re. Safe House
21st Apr 2024 11:43pm
Hi Betty,
I really like how you interpreted this write.
I’m always fantasizing about isolating myself and creating art and music. Unfortunately I can’t play the cello but I like to think in the sound and mood of that stringed instrument. Painting and art is my go to creativity. It came to me in my 20s and never left.
My family has a bunch of painters in it so a natural flow I guess that it would find me too. They studied art but I was self taught. I just feel it and do it. A partial gift I suppose …
Thanks so much !!
Love your comment
I really like how you interpreted this write.
I’m always fantasizing about isolating myself and creating art and music. Unfortunately I can’t play the cello but I like to think in the sound and mood of that stringed instrument. Painting and art is my go to creativity. It came to me in my 20s and never left.
My family has a bunch of painters in it so a natural flow I guess that it would find me too. They studied art but I was self taught. I just feel it and do it. A partial gift I suppose …
Thanks so much !!
Love your comment
Re. Safe House
22nd Apr 2024 3:28am
there's no need to go anywhere artist..come to me to strum the strings of my heart.. ;)
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Re: Re. Safe House
22nd Apr 2024 3:40am
On my way.
Taking the Vindaloo Express.
I'll bring my own Sticky rice ....
Ya know ??
Taking the Vindaloo Express.
I'll bring my own Sticky rice ....
Ya know ??
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22nd Apr 2024 3:45am
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22nd Apr 2024 11:21am
That's a great comment dimp.
Everything is about food and sex,
Sex and food.
Survival
Pleasure
I'm with you ...
Everything is about food and sex,
Sex and food.
Survival
Pleasure
I'm with you ...
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22nd Apr 2024 5:58pm
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22nd Apr 2024 3:58am
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22nd Apr 2024 4:01am
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Re: Re. Safe House
22nd Apr 2024 11:26am
The painting is big and open even though in reality its small. It's a 4" x 6" painting on watercolor paper. But that's the wonder of capturing art and having it compliment writing which I often do. Often I'll write and then look through my hundreds of images and paintings to find the right mood to fit my poems. Sometimes it's a whole painting or Sometimes just a section. I'm a takes what given kind of artist. Give me paint and I I'll forgive you a painting back ...
Appreciate your comment Dragonblood !!
Thanks
Appreciate your comment Dragonblood !!
Thanks
Re. Safe House
22nd Apr 2024 11:18am
Somewhere where we have no one, except our own company is where the artistic juices flow best (imo)
I love this one, it fits your gorgeous painting - probably my favorite of yours so far.
Awesome choose of title too, bravo PoetSpeak.
I love this one, it fits your gorgeous painting - probably my favorite of yours so far.
Awesome choose of title too, bravo PoetSpeak.
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Re: Re. Safe House
22nd Apr 2024 11:29am
That's a BIG WOW comment D ..
It's a painting with a lot of space to get lost in so I'm glad you can appreciate the words and art !!
It's a favorite of mine too so that resonates with me that you like it so much...
Stay tuned, hopefully this will be a productive Spring ...
Thank you so much 💓
It's a painting with a lot of space to get lost in so I'm glad you can appreciate the words and art !!
It's a favorite of mine too so that resonates with me that you like it so much...
Stay tuned, hopefully this will be a productive Spring ...
Thank you so much 💓
Re: Re. Safe House
22nd Apr 2024 11:41am
Happy to hear my comment was a BIG WOW for you and that's a favorite of yours too.
it's truly a work where you can get lost in, I love the orange too.
it's truly a work where you can get lost in, I love the orange too.
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Re: Re. Safe House
22nd Apr 2024 12:16pm
I love Orange 🧡
It's warm and Hot and dramatic..
I've always thought it was an underrated color so I like to give it, it's due.
It's a STATEMENT color
Glad it hits for you too !!!
Thanks D ✋
It's warm and Hot and dramatic..
I've always thought it was an underrated color so I like to give it, it's due.
It's a STATEMENT color
Glad it hits for you too !!!
Thanks D ✋
Re. Safe House
22nd Apr 2024 4:13pm
Your poetry, like a still life painting so beautifully captures those moments in life that are of such importance to us all.
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Re: Re. Safe House
22nd Apr 2024 5:15pm
What a great comment Thor !
I really appreciate your thoughts on this poem and painting.
Who wouldn’t want to escape to do their craft and make something meaningful? I appreciate you Sir
Thank you
I really appreciate your thoughts on this poem and painting.
Who wouldn’t want to escape to do their craft and make something meaningful? I appreciate you Sir
Thank you
Re. Safe House
24th Apr 2024 2:39pm
Shit happens we just have live life and make it better. Keep on writing.
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24th Apr 2024 3:20pm
Re. Safe House
11th Jul 2024 4:47pm
I think we all aspire to compose our opus. Not sure if I've said this before you're pretty badass, a nice combination of art and poetry.
BL sir.
BL sir.
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Re: Re. Safe House
11th Jul 2024 4:48pm
I’m the ultimate Yin Yang !!
Appreciate the nod Wally
Hope your summer is going well
Thx
Appreciate the nod Wally
Hope your summer is going well
Thx