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things aren't always what they seem
that building on the
corner there...
...yes. that building
it uses to be a coffee
shop
a gym
a used book store
but despite intentions
each failed
failed
failed
and
failed
now it sits there:
empty
alone
abandoned
it is much like
love and the
human
heart
Published 17th Apr 2024
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17th Apr 2024 2:43am
This resonates deeply living in the southern Midwest USA. Thank you for writing
18th Apr 2024 3:01am
Anonymous
17th Apr 2024 3:27am
Well said and I see your point. We become a part of something, only to move on, to meet other people. But in the end, are we happy, or empty inside. I guess it's up to us to fill it up, to keep on trying.
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17th Apr 2024 2:59pm
There are only so many ways for me to tell you how your wisdom touches me.
I’m running out of words :)
Sending you a huge scoop of wonderful this morning, bk.
I’m running out of words :)
Sending you a huge scoop of wonderful this morning, bk.
18th Apr 2024 3:07am
Morning, noon or night. I'm always up for a big scoop of
wonderful.
Much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
wonderful.
Much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
17th Apr 2024 3:30pm
The repetition of “failed” really drives the point in. But from failure a heart learns and grows.
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11th Jun 2024 3:49am
Great observation, thinking back about how busy that structure may have been at one point buzzing with life, now sitting there, dark and alone.
11th Jun 2024 11:05am
